Rebelghost85
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I enjoyed this buildup. The character development feels real and I find myself caring for both Jackson and Luke.Thanks for sharing this.
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I hope Luca survives. Eamon will at least kill the assassin but I agree with other comments- he should have protected Luca much better. Looking forward to book 2! Do we have an eta on when it will be out?
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I saw that you're posting this to Awesomedude. Dare I hope that there is a continuation in the works?
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Depression is a scary thing. Luckily Chelsea has a large group of people for support. Right now she's managing her feelings but I hope she doesn't do anything drastic in the future.
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I really appreciate the slow progress to trust Silas is going through. It shows realism and a depth that sets this story apart from others. Hopefully Amy and Ian don't push too hard (but just hard enough). Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to seeing how Chelsea handles the upcoming intervention.
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This chapter killed me. Ian's emotions when he asked Silas to stay were raw and hit me deep. Thanks for writing it.
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I can't believe that I'm only just discovering this story now. I'm super invested already. Thanks for the great work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Mark's surprise for Jay at the end of the chapter caused a chuckle and the rest of the chapter felt very real. Jay still needs to confront his past and tell someone but it looks like he's making progress. Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Wow. Big blowup this chapter. Looking forward to how this conflict plays out.
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I really enjoyed this chapter. It seems that Jay isn't a total ice prince and that he's going to make friends whether he wants to or not.
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Wow. I'm so happy this posted today. We're seeing the plot move along at a lightning pace now. I'm really excited to see how the politics and battles play out in the future.
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I hope The Toad was punished in some way. Hopefully he's dead. I'm also looking forward to the trip to the Mall. I wonder how Jason's defense mechanisms will effect the interactions between him, Mike, Matt and Mike's friends.
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There is a lot of anger and mistrust in Jason right now. I'm looking forward to seeing how his outlook on life changes and how other people are able to get through to him.
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Chapter 2 - "Things Make Sense"
Rebelghost85 commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 2 - "Things Make Sense"
I agree with the others: this was well done and very believable. Thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to where the relationship goes from here. -
I know that this will eventually work out for James, but I feel for him in the moment. He needs an outlet. Maybe track (cross country?) can be that outlet. It sounds like the coach cares about his students. Hopefully he's the one that picks James up from his hitchhiking.
