Rebelghost85

I might have to reread the Dragonriders series. This is great.

Great start. I'm really interested in this story.

It's awesome that they found Jesse down there and that Sam is letting them adopt the baby. I hope that the "life" that happens next isn't something terrible. I'm holding out the hope for a slightly early birth.

This really is an epic story. I can't wait for the action to ramp up and for us to find out about Jacob's past.

I'm going out on a limb here and predicting that Jacob is the son of the "deceased" princes. I'm hoping he can pull out a miracle and prevent an all out war.

You are a god damn master of suspense and literature. Right when I was at the height of my anxiety, nervousness and curiosity, right when I was about to post a review that the questions had dragged on far enough and that you were losing me, you hit us with the truth. I'm enjoying the hell out of this story and there is so much more to come. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

I'm glad Zak is okay and I hope the boys learned the early signs of concussion from his accident. That said, I can't wait until next week when we see Sam and CJ's interaction. I wonder what's going to happen?

Did these lifetime riders really not notice the obvious signs of concussion that Zak was exhibiting? They should have called an ambulance immediately instead of waiting.

I'm betting that Ace is going to be a great friend for Dylan. He might just help Dylan come out of his shell and be able to find someone. Great chapter. I can't wait until Ace meets the other boys.

Once again brilliant. I can't believe it to Tests of Blood to get me hooked on your writing. The setting here was really incredible and unique. I know of only one other story with a political setting like this one. I really enjoyed it.

Oh man. Only in politics. I have a feeling that Cole is starting to feel things for Dale and Jeremy is just amazing. I hope the three boys can get through this without anyone getting too hurt.

I've decided to go for the fairy tale ending of Cole and Dale. I hope their relationship survives the upcoming craziness.

Mixed signals all over the place, and way to drop the suicide bomb on us. I didn't see that coming at all.

All these hints about what happened to Dale and his father. I can't wait to find out.

This was really good. I loved how you created your own magic form. You used it very well in this story. I also appreciated that the sex in this story was a lot more overt than in Tests of Blood. It fit very well. I saw that you're possibly planning a sequel to this. I hope it comes soon!

Oh man. A new story and this will be updates just as quickly as the other ones. I'm looking forward to a good sci fi.

As you can see we're all pleasantly surprised that Mattie and CJ aren't alienated from their father. Its just their siblings and uncle who are the major problems and now enemies. I hope that Pete does the right thing and warns Mattie about the danger he's in.

Mike is establishing quite a collection of valuable friends. I'm happy that he's maturing but like Itachi I bet bad stuff is coming soon.

What a plot twist. I love it. This story is extremely compelling.

So I think I'm going to read this in one sitting... You really have a great talent.

Wow. I can't believe that it's over. This was incredibly excellent. I'm so glad that our interest has brought about work on the sequel. When you finally finish it know that you'll have a lot of people eager to read and review! I was surprised that Selenay survived but not surprised that she was pardoned. This will be my final comment on it but I don't understand other reviewers outright hate of her. Hopefully she will do great things in the future. It was interesting finding about how people are lifebonded. It just happens with close contact? I'm glad that Gavin and Dalen finally found each other and that Dalen has a huge family now. Bart, Blake, Gavin and his mom and dad form a close group of supporters and loved ones. It was through his friends'/brothers' support that he was able to grow in character and magical strength. Their development was very well done. While the Haighlei are out of Valdemar they're still planning on invading the rest of the world. I can see a lot of places you can take this saga. Great work and thank you for sharing this epic with us.

Heh. I disagree that Dalen is a bottom. Dalen and Gavins relationship will be versatile thank you very much. I'm glad that they're finally together though. So much Selenay hate going around. She's definitely not a hero and she's not my favorite character but it's not like she has no redeeming qualities. I hope her death achieves something and Dalen and his father aren't hurt too much by it. Action next chapter! I know that the story is already written but I can't wait for the rescue.

I hope to see Dalen and Gavin kick ass in Haven.

I'm a fickle fickle reader and you're a cruel cruel author for leaving us with so many romantic possibilities. I'm so on team Gavin now. He's practically an equal to Dalen and they work well together? Yes please. /turns his coat inside out again

An interesting development. Will absence make the heart grow fonder? How will they remove the Haighlei? If a Companion poops in the woods and it's Herald is too far away to sense it, does the poop exist? While I'm generally impatient for in between chapters I liked how this one set up future events.