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  1. drown

    Chapter One: Arrival

    Just checked where I can buy "Grimm", because I have never seen the show. It sounds intriguing. Weird, and ominous, and set in Portland Thank you so much for reading and letting me know how you found the story, I hope you enjoy the other chapters I have posted. Your comment means a lot. πŸ’š
  2. Oh stop it with your facts and reality. πŸ˜… But interesting to know, thank you. If I re-read a story a few months later, will it get another view? I'm always logged in so I would guess I only ever count once? I am losing many people after chapter one. I couldn't care less, everyone who is commenting is very awesome :3
  3. Putting that in my backlog! I'd like to see how you work Cologne into something picturesque and interesting. Sicily I do understand. Having grown up in Germany, I just can't see it. πŸ˜‚
  4. I myself have a USA bias in my story (and stories). It's deeply ingrained in me as I grew up in the '80s and '90s, and I hold a fascination to this day. To this day, the focus on the United States is so vast in all of the Western world's media and entertainment that it's easier to garner an audience this way. And also, I wouldn't want to write about werewolves and magic running through the forests of ... Brandenburg, Germany.
  5. Well, she surely didn't put in Mayonnaise. I think the next chapter is the most relevatory yet, though. They specifically went to her for guidance, to interpret the prophecy, but also to hopefully gain insight into what and who Grey, Dave, and Mark are. And how they are connected. I'm so looking forward to showing you. πŸ’š
  6. I need a reaction that says, "Eew."
  7. Thank you for staying and being along for the ride. πŸ’›
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    Chapter 1

    Also, I appreciate the shoutout to The X-Files. That was my childhood. I was so enthralled by it all. X-Files, Millennium, Harsh Realm, The Lone Gunmen.
  9. And why did Clara pack so much? It's not all in their backpacks. Spoilers. I really hope she wouldn't just leave them there, unprotected. I hope this chapter was entertaining. πŸ’™ More to follow soon. 😬
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    Chapter Six: Trinity

    Thank you for your readership. Thanks for staying so far, each chapter slowly reveals a little more of this very intricate web of… stuff. πŸ™‚
  11. drown

    Chapter Five: Miles

    πŸ™‚ Thank you for reading and commenting.
  12. I'll take that. I think you'll like the future chapters. Or at least I hope so! Thank you.
  13. It's very refreshing for me to see how you react as you go chapter by chapter. I'm very thankful for your honest feedback, and that you seem to stay along for the ride. 🧑
  14. drown

    Chapter Two: Scent

    I seem to be a "carrot on a stick" writer. Thank you for reading and commenting. πŸ™‚
  15. drown

    Chapter One: Arrival

    Honest feedback is very much appreciated, so thank you. 🧑 Glad it was enough for you to continue, lol.
  16. Psionic Corp is an expansive universe and this is one of the stories in it. Highly recommend. I consider Psionic Corp – No Return to be a prequel to some of the characters you meet here. This is near future earth soft sci-fi with amazing world building.
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    Chapter 1

    I got to see Mike again! YES! Your universe grows bigger and bigger, and I'm here for it.
  18. On its own, it's just a nice little story with a protagonist that can hold me any time he wants. But in the larger picture, this develops a universe that I can't wait to read more of! Can highly recommend.
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    Chapter 1

    I. LOVE. IT! If the other characters in the following stories are just as nice, I might just be ok with the episodes standing on their own
  20. So much to learn. So much to explore. So much to do. Thank you, @VBlewβ€”I'm glad you like it. It's an incredibly colorful image in my head, otherworldly. πŸ’™
  21. I was today days old when I realized this is the start of your world, and introduces people to its past, with the Terran Confederation being the future. Ahhhhhhh I love it. More please. I first stumbled on the world when going through the 2023 Leap of Faith Anthology and read I Spy With My Little Eye, in case anyone is interested. I have so much to catch up on, kill me now.
  22. This is about two people who find each other, and while there are ulterior motives, their abilities make them the perfect match. Time to take a leap of faith. This is a short story that establishes an intriguing world that leaves me wanting for more. Riveting.
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    Chapter 1

    This line had hooked me: I usually find it hard to jump into sci-fi worlds, but not here. I want to know more. Can you please add more of this world with roughly 50 chapters or so and include the characters you established here? K thanks. You only needed 2600 words to tell a little story and establish a vivid, vast, and breathing world. πŸ‘ I'll delve into the Psionic Corp series now, but I'm sure I'll just want more. πŸ˜‚
  24. And you're still here, thank you! 🧑 Thank you for reading and commenting. πŸ™‚
  25. Just saying thanks and your comments are appreciated
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