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That was positively exhausting! I may get annoyed at being the age I am, but frankly the energy, angst and turmoil of being those three... makes me glad I am passed it all. In my own case, sex as competition has been replaced by uxorious ( or is it maritorious?) wallowing in the arms of someone whose been there for the better part of three decades - somehow this seems far less stressful and more liveable!
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Thank you for the sentiments regarding our late Queen. A truly remarkable woman. As far as our Lord Grainger, only he could manage to find and collect a large set of genitals, together with their support system, in Copenhagen harbour when he was merely there as postman! I look forward to our Norwegian's recovery and his assets put to use! I suppose I should have first congratulated Grainger on the improvements in the seamanship of ship and crew, however the naked Norweigen took my mind off the achievement! Great writing. Thanks.
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Will's stamina! I think I was throwing up after the third shot and a chick kissing me.... 🥵
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What complicated love lives these people lead. I am not sure whether at my best (worst?) things were this complex in my late teens/20s. Serial monogamy has a lot going for your mental health if nothing else. Phone tech; little do they know what's coming! Thanks for a great Saturday morning surprise!
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Interesting that you raised that peculiarly US thing of tying health insurance to employment, but my comment is rather why would people as wealthy as CJ bother with insurance? Surely they get a better deal paying cash? I like the last two words....as if you'll be able to leave what must be family just out there😀
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This is a great chapter in the development of Will, however there are so many balls in the air (literally and figuratively) sometimes I just go with the flow... Great writing to keep such complexity interesting and me, for one, wanting more!
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What a roller coaster of a ride! I had to read it twice to follow! Great reading. Thanks.
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Family; so helpful when their desires and expectations and yours line up, bloody difficult when they don't. Pitcairn was an idiot who couldn't see when he was well off.
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He has fans? What a weird world we live in..... Mr Arbour, your writing is bloody awesome.... thanks....
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"For a change"!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Stef's thought processes and conceptual ability is really amazing. He really is a character where the hamster is spinning those wheels. Having Will as a character to ask the questions that us readers would ask were we given access to such lofty heights gives glimpses into the operation of the big end of town. Will's asides on sexual proclivities, expertise, looks and possibilities, just adds an extra something to it all. Thanks. A great read.
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I have a feeling that this story is a genuine generational change in attitudes to sexual orientation/experimentation. Not sure what generation you belong to, Scrubber6620, but mine (younger boomer....) at the age I was in "college", this conversation could not have happened. Then gay blokes were accepted (just), but experimentation....it happened but no one discussed it...ever. Now, based on my two sons experiences and conversations, the conversation Maddox had its quite possible.
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Not quite two lovers; one lover (dearest Grainger) and a random family each of whom you have sex with when they deign to speak to you. But yes I get your drift! While news from home was good, and no news from St Vincent troubling, what else did the packet contain? The boy will be an interesting addition and how far do we think Graingers going to get with Anson....😜 Great chapter, thanks
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Taking advantage of southerners - probably a regional sport!
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Well that chapter covered some ground and without a hint of "but wait...there's more!" 😀 Will certainly let the boomer generation know he ain't no smart alec, but some one who listens and speaks with a pov. Great writing! Not sure why I say that as we never get anything but great writing..... Thanks
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The parental "talk" is one of those things that just never goes to plan either as parent or child. And as far as "coming out" scenes shouting "we kissed " across the dining table has to be somewhat unique!
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Your writing gives you cred. You life experience just adds to the story! 😀👍
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Great chapter, but may I say your final paragraph where you, as the author, talked about your situation etc, felt like you felt you needed to explain the story and its direction. You don't. The story you are writing is great. It doesn't need any justification. Just keep writing! Thanks
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If you acknowledge and question your own attitudes to race, the chances of you being openly racist are pretty thin. Then its a matter of working on innate cultural biases. This story looks like it's going to explore this with at least one emerging gay antagonist. All the signs of a great story. Thanks
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Chapter 1 - Getting soaked
Canuk commented on WritersBlock404's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Getting soaked
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Chapter 2: Well Meant...but oh so wrong!
Canuk commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 2: Well Meant...but oh so wrong!
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Can one be envious and in awe similtaneously? Controlling a dozen or so characters in sharp cross table conversation each character bringing their individual history with them... just amazing 👏. A master story teller: I am truly humbled by his talent. Thank you Mark Arbour, you make me want alternatively delete everything I have written or improve. Which way I go depends on my wine and Gimlet consumption!
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1920 - they did things differently back then! I suspect that it's a case of "anything, but don't frighten the horses" was still the general approach. Provided public decency wasn't affronted, everyone would let whatever be. interesting to see how it resolves itself....
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Weirdly and somewhat unexpectedly as an Australian/Canadian, I am reading this while in Helsinki. I think it's about as close geographically as I have got to our hero! While George was "happy" with the Emperor, he has a whole new level of happiness controlling a ship and its crew; Somewhat like an amphibian, Grainger copes quite well out of water, but thrives in it! Thanks Mr Arbour, a welcome chapter.
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I wonder how the Board will take being "shaken up"? My spidey sense tells me we are in for more drama!
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