Great chapter. No apology needed for the delay since the previous one.
I particularly liked the extra descriptive info about the Mishith. This new Hartley villain doesn't sound like good news.
So sad to hear the news about Wayne's sudden death. I can only add to the chorus here about how kind and thoughtful he always was.
He collected postcards so JianSierra and I used to send him a postcard from our vacations every year...
He will be missed by many.
I'm so glad: Hidden sunlight was really sub-par in terms of style... NOT !! What on Lucere do you expect to improve?? I know, I know... the author is always right but is this just a ploy to make us re-read HS again ? 😉
And really don't worry about the notifications
Keep up the good work. Happy to hear that you have it all planned out.
I voted for Veil of shadow, probably because more time was spent on character development with Shay than with Torsten, and that made him a more immediately likeable character. Also, it was the first story I read from you so there was an element of surprise and amazement about the plot and about your style which could not be as prevalent in a second story.
That said, I will happily return to Spirit of Fire whenever you write the sequel
You are right, it was quite a draconic ride. It wasn't the ending I had imagined but it is full of promise for what is to come. The one aspect I cannot yet see is Araziah and Tosten's relationship in the future. Granted, many things may happen when magic is thrown in the mix, but Araziah's new status seems to complicate matters quite a bit.
On to vote for what you should write next.
Well done on the update! I use GA mostly on my phone so I'm looking forward to the new features.
I'm just curious as to why I turned from Author into a Newbie. My stories and my blog are still here, and my profile doesn't seem to have changed otherwise.
Should I just purchase an Author status in the store again?
Very happy for you guys!
Also, very touched that you invited Jian and I to the wedding. You guys really made it a special occasion. Still waiting for more pics from that day.
These long-distance relationships looked like a very long bet 8 years ago, but look at us now! We're making it work, bit by bit.
Enjoy the mini-honeymoon and then the longer one!
Happy to see a new chapter
Adam is very much trying to find his way in life and the twists and turns are part of his journey. Still hoping that he finds a path back to Seth at some point.
*takes a recliner and sits down*
I guess this story piqued my curiosity, so I'd love to have an idea of the ambition you have for this one, as far as number of chapters and overall length. We know you can write long stories. So is this one of them, or do you intend to make it shorter than the Shay cycle?
Lots of things happening at once in this chapter. Torsten appears quite resourceful when having to take care of the little guy.
Actually, little guy or little lady dragon?
I'm late to the party because I expected to get a notification when you posted this story. Anyway, great start. Some good character definition already, and a useful dose of suspense.
I'm with the others and with Niraz in particular: I'm just too curious to know what other genre you can write. What I do know is that you have more than a smidgen of imagination so I look forward to seeing what fantasy you would write.
So I vote for option 2.
Things are unfolding in a very nice way so far. Adam was logically blindsided by Seth's revelation. Looking forward to the next chapter. No idea what he is going to tell Codey.
So many feelings and emotions. I believe that he is in for a surprise at the party. I may have an idea as to how things will pan out but I'm probably wrong about it.