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Remijay

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  1. The Innocence Of Night Chapter 6 Dark stormy night Later that night walking back into the living room, I told both Asher and Blake that I love the fact that they are vampires, just as long as they don’t bite me or anything, unless I wanted to be bitten. They both agreed and I asked Asher, "Do you feel like spending the night? I would to love get to know you more.” “…” Asher didn’t reply ”Please, I don’t feel like being here alone, and I surely don’t want to go to the junk yard. So pl
  2. Modern High Chapter 25 Overcoming Differences After that night of bowling with our friends, Zach more or less turned into a person I wished I had never met. However, if you’d ask me if I still loved him, I surely do. Here we are three months later, May and we still haven’t talked. The last time I can honestly remember talking to Zach was at school three days after the bowling party, we didn’t say much but maybe ‘Hi’. I remember a time when Zach and I couldn’t keep from talking to one anot
  3. Modern High Chapter 24 Decisions = Consequences A few months have passed since Jacob and I talked. Since that night everything seemed to change, my life wasn’t what it used to be. I mean, I was happy, healthy, and full of life. What changed? What made it out to be what it is now? “Zach?” My mother, yet again today. She is worried about me because I haven’t said a thing about what Jacob and I talked about, she’s also worried that I might just attempt suicide again. Oh, and to top off my al
  4. Remijay

    Chapter 23

    Modern High Chapter 23 Truth Hurts Jacob Three weeks have passed since Zach attempted suicide. When I came home that day and found the note Zach left me, I couldn’t open it; to this day I still can't. It’s not that I don’t want to, it’s just that what Zach probably wrote to me... it scares me. So here, I am, November 26, Saturday, sitting on my bed with my legs crossed, dreaming about happier times. Nicer days, where the world made sense. But who was I kidding? The world isn’t a nice
  5. Wow. Everytime you post, it makes sense and i do agree with you... In chapter 23 i had Zach and Jacob think about their relationship with each other... I do feel that the rest of the chapters can be saved if i just apply myself to them... There is alot of emotion to 23....So look for it... And thanks again for the review. It's nice to see. Remijay
  6. Awe, thanks... Things will be changing, chapter 23 just got completed, so wait a week and i will post it... Also, im glad that you're reading along... Thank you
  7. The Innocence Of Night Chapter 5 When I was done crying I wiped away my tears and felt the ones that soaked Asher’s t-shirt. I looked up with watery eyes into the most beautiful set of eyes imaginable. They took my breath away to say the least. We shared that gaze for as long as possible without either of us blinking. Words couldn’t even begin to describe the way I felt at that moment. It was as if time stood still, just for me, to look at the most beautiful teenager in the world. I don’t k
  8. Modern High Chapter 22 Attempted Suicide (This chapter is going to be multi-character... Just expect it to change) (This chapter will deal with teen suicide attempts. If by any chance this subject matter is disagreeable please do not read) (I strongly disagree with suicide attempts or the belief’s of someone that does. However, in doing ‘this’ chapter I strongly believe it is the best way for my character to explain what his emotional pain is about...) Sincerely, Remijay *Author* *@* D
  9. The Innocence Of Night Chapter 4 How his hair flowed with the wind, how his hair covered his eyes. The way his frame is built, once you looked you had to look again. Like creamy silk butter that you couldn’t just sit back and let nothing happen. I mean what sane person would, what insane person wouldn’t? Anyways, at that moment I felt my member rising, like with every amazing picture that flashed before my eyes of Asher drove my member to throb, pulse, and ache. I had to take care of this,
  10. The Innocence Of Night Chapter 3 The expression on Asher’s face was priceless, I wasn’t sure if it was a dream or real life. I don’t know, really, if that happened or just in my dream fantasyland in my head. Asher’s expression disappeared like it wasn’t even there let alone anything else. I saw him look at me and that’s when the only thing that I looked at was his eyes. Oh, those eyes of his just like the ones in my dream fantasy. Those bright blue eyes that could see right through anythi
  11. The innocence Of Night Chapter 2 I knew what Brandon was thinking before he could even react. I thought to myself that if Brandon were to react as I did, I would be on my back, on the floor as he was. That never stopped me from climbing on top of him and beating the shit outta him, just because he deserved to feel what he was dishing out to everyone that even considered looking at him. I started punching him in the ribs over and over again. I kept punching until my fists felt like they
  12. Remijay

    Chapter 21

    Wow, i loved this review. It's just awesome, thank you for making that clear though, and i do congratulate you on the 4 years strong, that makes me happy to know. Also, i do realize that i have put in situations that normally wouldnt happen. And i guess by doing that i screwed up what the story was really about. My editor kept asking me why i put my character through so much, and well i guess i wanted the readers to know that even though that things are getting better in the world, things still happen to young youth in school and in daily life. The world as both know it is changing, hopefully for the better. In the next chapter Zach will attempt suicide, he's so broken that he thinks the only way to stop the hurt is through removing himself from it. Chapter 22 is just going to be sad. On a happier note the story is going to have a happy sad ending, you'll just have to wait n see. Thanks again, Remijay
  13. Remijay

    Chapter 21

    Modern High Chapter 21 That night when Zach showed up at Toby’s house, the look on his face when he saw that I was only half dressed, well, it was as if I could see his heart breaking in two, right in front of my eyes. The one person who I vowed never to hurt, the only person who was there for me in my time of need, I destroyed. It was heart wrenching, to say the least. However, I saw it coming; I knew that Zach would find out. Just how he did is the question... Ring... Ring... Ring... God
  14. The Innocence Of Night Chapter One My name is Jeremy. I have black hair with blue highlights, and my eyes are an amazing teal color. I have a boyishly young teen face. I am beautiful, at least I think so. My age is between 14-15, closer to 15 though. Well, my day started off like any other day. I swung my legs over the edge of the bed when I heard my mother saying, "Jeremy, you have to get up for school." "Give me 5 more minutes!” I said. "OK, but don't be late!" She responded. So, I went o
  15. The story is a revision of Darkness In Montana... As i said before this story is about a boy named Jeremy going through darkness, along with him is his boyfriend Asher. Jeremy has a destiny to fulfill in darkness, along for the ride is everyone he meets or screws. LOL. Jeremy will overcome a lot of things, but will he make it to the end? Read along with me....
  16. Thanks rogi... You'll have to wait until next friday to find out... I think he will. Shrugz, dont know yet Remijay
  17. Modern High Chapter 20 Falling out Walking back home, the wind whipping around me was making my whole body shiver, it was bad enough that I just found my boyfriend half-naked standing in the doorway of Toby’s house. Now I have to worry about freezing to death. Maybe death isn’t such a bad idea. If only Jacob had told me what was going on, I would have understood; I would have... “Hello?” “Zach?” “Yea, what’s up Nathan?” “What’s wrong?” “Nothing, just nothing... It’s...” “It’s what?
  18. Modern High Chapter 19 Finding Lies Behind Truth When Monday finally hit, I asked myself why Jacob hasn’t called or at least tried to come over. I wondered this as I walked to school. The weather today seemed to be matching my mood, well, not really, but close. My mood was Mystery, the weather, cloudy. “Hey Zach!” called someone from behind me, normally this doesn’t happen. As I turn around, I spot Nathan running to catch up to me. “What’s up?” Those were the first words he'd spoken t
  19. Thanks for the review... I'm putting chapter 18 in... Forgot to post it, thats probably why you're confused. Thanks again for the review Rogi
  20. Modern High Chapter 18 Friendamies (Friends-Enemy) “It’s Friday already. Where has the week gone? Anyhow, let’s get you enrolled in school. Instead of sitting around here watching TV all day, doing nothing...” That's my mom for ya, she always likes it her way, but I kinda see her point. I wonder how Zach and his friends will handle me in their school. Do you think I'll have any problems? I hope not! “Yea, let’s...” I say sarcastically to my mother; she just rolls her eyes. “Oh come
  21. Modern High Chapter 17 Not knowing A week has gone by since the birthday bash, and what a bash it was. First, let me remind you all that the birthday weekend was anything but fun. It started out fun, but ended in me not trusting the people who I called my friends, and you don’t even want to know about Jacob and me. Sheesh the arguments and the yelling matches we got into on the way back, it almost got everyone killed. Thank God it didn’t though. So, here we are, one-week back and my li
  22. Modern High & There Once Was Love A Vacation with Regrets 3-3 Sitting here watching Jacob's sleeping body, his chest rise and fall, it had me in a trance. I have been watching his body for the past three hours; I couldn’t stop from doing it. It’s like he was my angel. Well, my sleeping beautiful angel. If I could, I would worship him, maybe. While I have been watching him sleep, I’ve been thinking, well, sorta dreaming. You can’t blame me, my body decided at 5:30 AM that it wanted to b
  23. Modern High & There Once Was Love A Vacation With Regrets 2-3 Things happen for a reason... ~@~ Diary Entry 3 ~@~ Wow, things have happened that I didn’t intend to happen, the party, the kissing of the boys last night. Shit! How can I expect to be faithful if Jacob isn’t around to keep me from doing these things, where was he anyway? Last time I saw him was with Tom. Do you think? ... Nah! He wouldn’t, would he? Ugh, now I’m starting to blame Jacob for everything that I do. Is
  24. There Once Was Love & Modern High A Vacation With Regrets 3-3 The end As I sat here and thought about what I had done to Zach and Jacob, I knew, because of me, they were going to break up. But you see, I didn’t intentionally set out to destroy what could have been a very special relationship for them. It just happened, and now I can’t help but to feel responsible. If anyone out there has done what I did, can you please help me so I can make it right? I don't think I can live
  25. There Once Was Love & Modern High A Vacation With Regrets 2-3 When the morning came Tom rolled off the couch, “Ouch… son of a…” “Watch it!” warned Lacey. “Whatever...” mumbled Tom. “What was that, mister?” “Uhhmhm… nothing… just nothing,” replied Tom in a whisper. “That’s what I thought!” “What’s with the bitch attitude, Lacey? Someone didn’t take you home with them?” Tom asked with a smirk growing on his face. “Keep it up… this might be your birthday weekend but y
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