Remijay

Chapter 1 Well that was.... Interesting to say the least, Billy’s dad sounds like an asshole, from the olden days. LOL. Anyways, on a positive note I liked this first chapter. It has some detail that I liked about it, and the farmhouse, yes I loved; I live in a half city half-country type thing and I get to see a lot of houses like the one you mentioned, I like the story so far. Going to read the rest, thanks for the good read, Remijay <3 Chapter 2 WOW, asshole for sure, the dad that is. Anyways, it seems as more time spent with each other the more they want to get with each other, and David doing that in front of Billy was wrong but oh so right. LOL... But why would Billy want to cut himself, I don’t understand. Like why does he have to, I mean I go through that some what on a daily basis here and I have done cutting before, but I had to stop. It wasn’t fixing anything, I was losing more blood than I was trying to keep it. Hopefully everything will get better for David and Billy. Thanks again for the good read, Remijay <3 Chapter 3 LOL, I liked this chapter, it was... Awesome to say the least, and well while Billy is trying to be an ass, he is slowly coming around to David, and now for the girl that showed up, WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ABOUT!? Great Chapter Remijay <3 Chapter 4 WOW, JUST f**kING WOW!!! That chapter was amazing, lol. I liked how they got to talking in the room, and also before that, if I were David I would have seriously bit his f**king head off for talking to me that a way and my father, I guess what I’m saying is, I don’t like being talked to that a way, I have a backbone and I know how to use it. I liked this chapter a lot, and I think Billy is coming around to David but only in small doses, at least they are talking somewhat. Remijay <3 P.s I liked how you were creative and put in the chapter about Walker being quiet like a mute hehe, ingenious. Chapter 5 Wow, now I get the title of the chapter and damn what a way to tell a friend, plus Sam is a bitch for telling, but I cant blame her, she did what Billy wouldn’t. So yea, overall a very great detailed chapter. I am starting to love this story. And I hope and pray that David and Billy get to become friends or more. Will write as I read the chapters, thanks for the awesome read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Sorry for the long review. I just hate clicking back and then clicking the right review button, so this is easier....Thanks <3

Chapter 1. Remember I’m just beginning to read this story, so I don’t know that much about it yet. Anyways, I liked it. Great detail to the expressions on peoples faces and also the emotional state too... I honestly liked the first chapter, great work so far. Onto the next. Chapter 2 Wow, that was... wow. Anyways, very nicely done. It seems as if Cooper doesn’t know how to take people, I get that. I went through it myself. Nicely done on the detail again, but this time you added more to the scenery, I like it. LOL ... In any case, I’m beginning to like this story more and more. Also very nicely done with the cliffhanger, genius. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 3 What the hell, happened? I’m confused, but I get it. Basically Cooper is coming to terms of being gay or he’s just now realizing he might be, and with a crush on top, WOW. Nicely done yet again, keep this up and you’ll have 15 reviews from me. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 4 OMG. Oh my goodness, LMAO. Vern wow. I like her a lot. But does she really know? Just finished the first part, that’s why I’m writing this. WOW, sweetness, vern be caring that weird, but considering. Anyways, Mich... Showing up right after Vern left, CONSPIRACY ?!?!?! Chapter 5 Awww, what a sweet chapter, first with the shopping and then with Mich staying and having a conversation, I like where this is going, keep it up. And I have to agree with Cooper, I think Vern and Mich are mind READERS!!! Chapter 6 Ok i know that Cooper couldn’t have passed out with little sleep, there has to be more??!? That was, an interesting chapter to say the least, and you did kinda get a vibe from Mich, meaning that he has feelings for Cooper, like cooper does him, maybe that’s what Vern was talking about? Might be! Very nicely done. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 7 Awww, that’s so sad nad sweet. But what about Vern? Is she going to be okay with Cooper and Mich being friends? I wonder..... Thanks again for the great read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 8 OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! Wow, I knew it was going to come but I never knew exactly when....LOL... Anyways, I kinda already knew that Vern knew about Cooper, and I think Mich did too, but he was sure enough to ask, but now.... He knows and wants a date! f**kING A! Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 9 About DAMN time they kiss, LOL. Wow, all it took was “swimming lessons” rofl. I’m glad that they finally get to know more ‘about’ each other. Another great chapter. Thanks, Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 10 OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Snap! Wow, grandpa found them, oooooo. Big trouble is coming. And a lot of kissing also... Hehehe. Very nice chapter Chapter 11 Awww, the ending of this chapter is SAD! L but I liked that Grandpa approved. YAY! For GRAMPS Yet another great chapter. Chapter 12 Well Chapter 12 was an interesting one at that. And well talking about Mich’s parents seemed to draw them together more, and the date is getting better and better, the last part about a guy? That’s a confusing one but one I’m going to read in the next chapter, thanks. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 13 WOW! And for the ending answering, I would think not because you have two more chapters out there. Thanks for the great chapter Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 14 That chapter was SEXY and HOT! Plus Vern showing up IS priceless, and we cant forget about Mich opening the door in his underwear!!!!! Chapter 15 Awww, I kinda knew that Vern had something to do with them getting together and I’m glad that it worked out, and now Time for his BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Anyways, what surprised was Vern knew already about Luke, even after confuses me because Cooper told Mich that no-one knew about it other than his sister. So yea, but it all works out... I hope... Thanks for the very interesting chapter, especially the almost sex.... Hehe, sweetness. Remijay <3 ((Hugz))

There Once Was Love Chapter 10 Thomas The next few days after the fight with Eric were kinda touch and go for a while. We stopped talking long enough to figure out what we wanted. I still didn’t understand how he found out; I didn’t think there was anyone in the hallway when we came out. He never told me who told him. So I guess, as you can tell, we have taken a break from one another. Cyrus kept bothering me. Every time I saw him at school he would hint so effortlessly to me that we

What the f**k????? Damn, that was an intense chapter. Filled with love and happiness, well between Jordan and Eric.... Then came Paul... Paul, how can someone be so, so mean and evil? I would think that after a life together basically he would still love Eric, and his orientation. But I guessed wrong... Very, very wow... I have one question though, WHAT HAPPENED TO Paul?!?!?! LOL.... Anyways, keep’em coming and I will surely keep writing reviews and I loved it.... ((Hugz—Kizzes)) Remijay <3

Awww, thanks hun

Wow, i never knew.... I mean Neph. Helped me so yea, im sorry. I will surely look through my chapters for now on.... Thanks for pointing that out

Wow Tiger, i love this story. It keeps getting better and better. <3 hehehe Keep writing and i will surely post comments on it... Alwayz & forever!!!

Modern High Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zack Part 4a Taking Sides and Picking Fights Jacob Thursday At around three thirty-ish, I decided that it was time for me to ask a couple of questions. For instance, can I stay here with my mother? Can I move here and go to school? I just wanted to be away from my father, he just doesn’t understand why I’m the way I am. I miss him dearly, but not his attitude towards me or my orientation. I walked into my

There Once Was Love! Chapter 9 Getting Caught Cyrus I walked around the corner from Tom and, well, the only way I could explain it was that I missed the contact with him already... I just missed him already. If I sound clingy then that’s what I am; I can’t deny it. Sighing out loud for the world to hear, my body seemed to feel content. To be able to walk in bliss is great. I arrived at my door, only to have it fling open. My brother stood there, smiling at me. I didn’t get it, what w

Modern High Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zach Part 3 Understanding Times Jacob When I came into her house, it smelt like apples and cinnamon. What a scent that I loved, but it soon ended. “Why have you come here, of all places, Jacob?” Concern was written in her voice, I knew that I shouldn’t have come here and I knew that I’d be asked that question; I had to think of a reason. I still didn’t want to be tossed out or turned back over to my father. “Because I’ve tr

Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zach Part 2 The Drama Continues Jacob While my dad decided to pick a fight with the Bishop, I decided it was my queue to leave the room. Before I got that far, my father stopped me by saying, “Where in the fuck do you think you’re going, mister? I didn’t say you could leave.” I shook my head and walked back into my dad’s office, sat down and listened to both sides fight over what was best for me. I was about to say, “Shut the fuck up!” Howe

Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zach Part One Jacob When I went over what happened the day before, I thought that this thing between my father and I was going to be fixed, but I guess I was wrong. I woke to my father screaming for me to get up, and let me tell you now, my father has never actually woken me up like this before. Today is going to be hell. I still couldn’t believe that my father wanted to be like this, he’s a pastor at a Gay friendly church for fuck’s

There Once Was Love Chapter 8 Cyrus “Well, I could tell you that I didn’t know your name, but then I’d be lying. Right?” Thomas explained. “Anyway, yes, we have met before and yes again, we met in the bathroom at school today. You know what I find attractive about you?” “What might that be?” asked Cyrus. “It’s that you have one hell of a body!” “Oh is that so? Do tell.” “Well for instance, you have the most lickable ass I’ve ever seen... and you have a gorgeous body to m

Modern High Church Side Fun Zach “Because, well, I just wanted to…you know.” Well that gave a very good explanation. I looked at Jacob like he was stupid for making me think that I’m that slow. Tilting my head to the side, I tried to figure out Jacob, what was his angle. Was he like Toby? Was he trying to find out if I’m gay? Well there is only one way to find out. “What do you think… I’m GAY?” “Well, yea… I… ah… kinda figured, you know, that you were like that.” He gave me what I

Modern High The Perfect Sunday I was still standing there when I heard my mother’s voice from afar, I knew that I had to get a move on it or I might get on my mother’s bad side, and that you never want do. The simple reason is she’s like a cat coming out of water, ready to rip the skin right off you. She was standing at the sign that announced, “Calvary Episcopal Church”. As I made my way towards her, I could clearly see a grin plastered on her lips; I knew at once that she knew something w

Wow, i have absolutely fallen for this story, and i keep telling you this, but this story is awesome...Keep it up, and give me Ch. 10 already... (Hugz--Kizzes) Remijay <3 Love ya Anthony

Chapter 7 After the First Encounter! Since I met Cyrus in the bathroom, I’ve been thinking about him non-stop, the way he talks, the way he moves his hips, the way his eyes sparkled when I caught him. I couldn’t explain it; my mind was wrapped around this kid named Cyrus. If you ask me, I need to get over him and get on with my life and being semi happy with Eric, but knowing me, I won’t forget him until something stupid or immature happens first. Driving home today was, in pl

Modern High Chapter 6 Meeting Jacob ~*~ Dairy Entry 2 ~*~ That party Saturday night was anything but what I expected it to be, I mean I knew I would run into Toby, but I had to no clue that I’d have sex with him. I must have been so fucked up that I didn’t realize that I would give myself over so willingly to Toby. The sex, on the other hand, was MIND BLOWING to say the least. On the way home from the party my friends ganged up on me, asking me a lot of questions that I can’t e

Chapter 5 High School Blues When I woke up the morning after what Toby did to me at school, I looked at the clock on my night stand. It said 7:30 am. Great! Now I have to get up and go to that demented school, with the boy who I thought liked me, but was only playing me for his own personal gain. I can’t believe I fell for it! Oh well, I guess I had it coming. Why does life have to throw shit into my already fucked up life? I sat up on my bed thinking about what this day might

Chapter 4 - Reunited... After I cooled down some, I was still in the stall when I heard the bell for second period. I got up and made my way to my second period after looking at myself in the mirror! While I was heading to my class, some guy slammed me into the locker and whispered loudly, “You fucking fagot.” Laughing, he walked away from me. Still in shock of what just happened, no one was around to care about what they saw him do to me. I hate this school! What a bunch of fu

Interlude 2 Cyrus & Thomas: First Encounter We got to school and the first person I saw was none other than Thomas Ericson, with whom I am madly in love. I can’t even suggest talking to him; I need to get my head together before I even give this moment a second thought. I mean, I like the guy so much that when I see him, my heart beat increases and my palms get sweaty. You’d think I’m girl the way my body reacts to a person I really like. Getting to my locker and putting my bo

Interlude 1 As I open my eyes to another day, I sit up and rub my eyes. Stretching to make the feeling of wake up go away a little, my body is telling me that it wants to sleep, but I, on the other hand, know that will never happen. So I get out of bed and search for something to wear. Don’t mind my state of mind, it’s still waking up. I grab some silky soft boxers and a red t-shirt that has something on it, along with some pants that fit just right. Walking by my mirror, I see my ref

There Once Was Love! Chapter 6 Rumors Spread! I undressed down to my boxers, thinking about not taking them off, but that didn’t stop me from getting the feeling that I would want to jack off one last time before going to sleep. I put my hands on my chest and slowly dragged them over my nice warm skin, dragging them down to my naval. My body shuddered with delight. I wanted nothing more than to think about Eric and what he was about to do in that parking lot. After thinking about it,

There Once Was Love! Chapter 5 Night with Eric Getting home with Eric, I didn’t want to get out of the car, but the clock was ticking. Besides, I had to get inside and dream about this wonderful day. I turned in my seat and looked at Eric, remembering the chance that we almost had in the parking lot. I will always remember this night... well, day, basically. I wanted to say something to him. On the way over here we didn’t really say anything to each other. I remember thinking, ‘I won

There Once Was Love Chapter 4 Organismic Experience! Walking side by side with Eric, going up and over the bridge separating us from the lake; you could see the organismic water. Shining so brightly with the sun, how the reflected water sparkles, how the water looked so blue and green. If you weren’t careful you might gasp a couple of times. You could see people out on the lake laughing and having fun; some were water skiing. This lake was like a dream that I wanted to happen