Remijay

Modern High & There Once Was Love A Vacation With Regrets 1 Trip to Orlando “Are you guys all ready?” asked my mother. In her loving way she knew that she could trust me, but I didn’t know if I could trust myself. I turned to face her with a smile, maybe a fake one just to satisfy, because I wasn’t sure if I could handle being away from her. She’s always been there for me, even when things got kinda hard. Nevertheless, I never stopped loving her; she’s the best mom ever.

Wow, let me tell you... You did an aweosme job, so much emotion played in this chapter, i wonder if damians sister is really in the group? Cant wait for another chapter.. Do you know how many chapters i am waiting on from other stories? Probably close to 100 or so... LOL mostly from Comsie, but others... I love to read and give comments or reviews, such as this one... Awesome chapter, cant wait for chapter 9 YAY!!!! Remijay <3 (Hugz--Kizzes) Take Care and Be Safe!!!!

WOW!!! it took you long enough to review... Howver, i love you... Remijay

Hahah, thanks hun... I try you know that...

Wow Anthony, i knew it was going to happen, you told me.... BUT BUT BUT, it still made me tear up... I love you tho.... ((Hugz)) ((Kizzes)) Remijay <3 Oh and i did like this chapter, even if i knew what was going to be in it. i like that Lenny wants Nate as a friend, and nice name for the Character, you flirt... Hahaha, anyways--- I know that chapter 15 is going to be much harder, You told what's to come, but i still have to read them, just for the comments and reviews i give... AS always love ya ttys Remijay <3

Hi all i know that i havent posted anything in awhile. And well thats because i am not getting any comments or reviews. However, I'm not here to whine about it. Just to post something that i have been thinking about... I know that my story isnt the best out there or well not even close, in mind. I would like to see more, but you know the saying "you can lead a horse to water, but you cant make him/her drink from it. Unless well you force it too." I dont want to do that. I guess what I'm trying to stay is.... I'm taking a month off of writing and enjoying it. Also with ideas coming along nicely, i think the conversion will be awesome. i have some things in mind that will blow my details 'As it is' out of the water. Thanks again, for the people have encouraged me to do this... And i have think Com, without Comicality being there and telling me that i can do this, i probably wouldnt have started to post this story. Oh and my There Once Was Love one too. Comicality, is to you... You're a tru friend, and i love you..... Take Care now!!! ((Hugz--Kizzes)) Remijay <3

Wow transformation.... Can you say AWESOME!!! Anyways, I liked that the King and Queen have put their son first instead how they were in the beginning, which I didn’t like. But what can you right? In any case I liked that they defeated the army of the vampires and burned the Vampire (Peremiro?) LOL, cant spell... I really liked this chapter, its awesome and with very much detail that I loved, keep’em coming, I already love this story... So the more the merrier. Remijay <3 (Hugz)

Aww, thanks hun. You're so sweet. It's okay now that i dont get comments. I used to get depressed and everything but now its like given that i wont get Reviews Or Comments. But thanks Hun! Hugz--Kizzes

Wow, Anthony. That was... well HOT... IT made me cry though, I know... Suck it up, well I cant I love this story. And I’m attached to it so heheh. Anyways, I liked how they all took a picture of them for Nate. And I especially love the ending, CAN YOU SAY HOT!!!!! LOL, and like always had to j/o! So yes, you always seem to do that with me, that’s plus if your wondering. I know whats to come and I don’t want it too, but I don’t see it being inevitable, So with love Remijay <3 (Hugz) (Kizzes) 10/10 Rating!

Wow.... I would have never seen it coming that Mich has a shiner.... Also i have question? Why does Coop keep getting these headaches, i dont get it, what triggers it? Thanks, i love story so far!!!!!!

I have a question..... When are you going to read more.... I love this song so far, i have read all twenty chapters and now I'm waiting ((Hugz)) Remijay <3

Modern High Chapter 9 Part 5 A Beautiful Friday Zach Waking up, I felt someone next to me. I wondered who it could be. I thought for a second and everything came back, the night before... with Jacob. Oh, wow. Seriously, he’s sleeping next to me in my bed. Turning over I found a remarkable sight, Jacob sleeping peacefully, with his eyes delicately shut, his breathing slow and soft. With his hairless chest rising and falling, I sighed out of contentment. I wanted to reach

The reason for Chapter 9, Part 4 B is, well, because I wrote so much for Part 4 A that I forgot it was only in the morning of that chapter, So if you will excuse my mistake, this chapter will be dedicated to you, the audience, my fans. I was just going to skip ahead to Part 5, Friday, but I also knew that my fans and my readers were going to get confused and I didn’t want that. So I’m going to stop blabbing and get to it… Enjoy the chapter <3 – XD *~*~*~*~* Modern High Drama In

Chapter 6 Wow, I think that chapter was intense with things unfolding and people becoming acquainted as friends. Plus Billy giving serious thought into whether or not he wants to be friends with David. I love the ending of the chapter, where David hears Billy softly say “Please David... Don’t Stop.” Genius! Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 7 JUST WOW, is all I can say. The fight in the barn and the pressing of bodies, HOT! Anyways, I think after that little fight they had, Billy will be tamer now, I THINK.... Or he might be more nasty who knows, and his dad William, he’s a guy that needs to get his ass KICKED severely! I honestly liked this chapter a lot, thanks for the good read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 8 Well it seems that whatever David is trying to teach Billy is working and at home it seems things are still the same, no-one’s the wiser, I think. Anyways, THIS candy girl. What a Slut!!!!! And I’m also glad that Sam respects GAY’S, that’s plus. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 9 WOW Candice is a TOTAL slut, maybe even a whore, who knows LOL. Anyways, its sad that Sam had to find out that away and what she after was kinda wrong but I do get it. Sam LOVES Billy so hearing that he’s gay tore her up and that’s why she walked. Maybe in the next chapter things will go better, maybe. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 10 AWWWWW! That’s so.... so sweet. Sam is being a bitch about Billy being gay, I don’t think she’ll be able to talk to him until she figures out some things. And I loved the part where Anne came out into the barn an basically bitched at Candice for being there. That was Priceless. Oh and Julian showing up, damn. That was awesome and the way Billy stood up to his dad. WOW. At the of this chapter, I cant help but to think that David is falling Billy big time. And I wouldn’t be surprised if they do things together, sexual or otherwise. Thanks for the great chapter, Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 11 WHAT THE f**kING HELL!!!! I knew it, I knew it..... WOW! Is all I can say, even more wow at how David’s uncle acts, and the cell phone at the end, PRICELESS! Anyways, it seems as if things are getting better and back to normal, but not with David & Billy, especially after that kiss, oh and the ‘I knew parts.’ I kind figured that Sam had a crush and that Chris plus Walker are gay, but I didn’t think about them being a couple, LOL.... Very nice plot if I don’t say so myself. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Very Fanf**kingTastic Chapter! Chapter 12 Awwww that was a swwweeettt chapter, one that I loved. First Walker is talking now, Sam and David come to an agreement and Billy tells Candice off, also with David & Billy almost kissing on the porch, wow. You rain storms or rain alike is Hot and Sexy... LOL, just wanted to say that. Anyways the chapter ends with Billy holding David, I wonder if they sleep like that through the night? Hmm, just a thought I guess. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Oh and I liked how Billy said ‘I love this guy.’ So touching, I loved it Chapter 13 Wow, the mud pit and convincing Chris that dirt don’t hurt, I liked that. And there came the part about Billy being lost, he wanted a boyfriend to hold hands with and love with, so did David but David knew better than to start things that might lead into trouble. Now onto the happy but sad parts. Billy has tried to get closer to David but every advance he made didn’t work, and then the dance came and Billy believed that Candice changed but really she only slipped him a DATE RAPE DRUG and Viagra, plus dragging him out to the clearing where she more or less tried to get into his pants. That didn’t work and with help of their friends Billy became in the arms of David. Now the part with Sam, if I EVER meet someone like Sam I would be scared shitless to say the least, maybe even piss myself LOL... Anyways, the threats that she told Candice I would believe NO-ONE f**ks with Billy not even her well maybe. The bitching slapping and pulling of the hair WOW! Tom girl much.... After this chapter I cant wait for more, please write some more, Thanks for the f**king amazing read so far.... Remijay <3 (Hugz) Sorry for long Review.... I have question. When are new chapters coming out?

Chapter 1 Well that was.... Interesting to say the least, Billy’s dad sounds like an asshole, from the olden days. LOL. Anyways, on a positive note I liked this first chapter. It has some detail that I liked about it, and the farmhouse, yes I loved; I live in a half city half-country type thing and I get to see a lot of houses like the one you mentioned, I like the story so far. Going to read the rest, thanks for the good read, Remijay <3 Chapter 2 WOW, asshole for sure, the dad that is. Anyways, it seems as more time spent with each other the more they want to get with each other, and David doing that in front of Billy was wrong but oh so right. LOL... But why would Billy want to cut himself, I don’t understand. Like why does he have to, I mean I go through that some what on a daily basis here and I have done cutting before, but I had to stop. It wasn’t fixing anything, I was losing more blood than I was trying to keep it. Hopefully everything will get better for David and Billy. Thanks again for the good read, Remijay <3 Chapter 3 LOL, I liked this chapter, it was... Awesome to say the least, and well while Billy is trying to be an ass, he is slowly coming around to David, and now for the girl that showed up, WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ABOUT!? Great Chapter Remijay <3 Chapter 4 WOW, JUST f**kING WOW!!! That chapter was amazing, lol. I liked how they got to talking in the room, and also before that, if I were David I would have seriously bit his f**king head off for talking to me that a way and my father, I guess what I’m saying is, I don’t like being talked to that a way, I have a backbone and I know how to use it. I liked this chapter a lot, and I think Billy is coming around to David but only in small doses, at least they are talking somewhat. Remijay <3 P.s I liked how you were creative and put in the chapter about Walker being quiet like a mute hehe, ingenious. Chapter 5 Wow, now I get the title of the chapter and damn what a way to tell a friend, plus Sam is a bitch for telling, but I cant blame her, she did what Billy wouldn’t. So yea, overall a very great detailed chapter. I am starting to love this story. And I hope and pray that David and Billy get to become friends or more. Will write as I read the chapters, thanks for the awesome read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Sorry for the long review. I just hate clicking back and then clicking the right review button, so this is easier....Thanks <3

Chapter 1. Remember I’m just beginning to read this story, so I don’t know that much about it yet. Anyways, I liked it. Great detail to the expressions on peoples faces and also the emotional state too... I honestly liked the first chapter, great work so far. Onto the next. Chapter 2 Wow, that was... wow. Anyways, very nicely done. It seems as if Cooper doesn’t know how to take people, I get that. I went through it myself. Nicely done on the detail again, but this time you added more to the scenery, I like it. LOL ... In any case, I’m beginning to like this story more and more. Also very nicely done with the cliffhanger, genius. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 3 What the hell, happened? I’m confused, but I get it. Basically Cooper is coming to terms of being gay or he’s just now realizing he might be, and with a crush on top, WOW. Nicely done yet again, keep this up and you’ll have 15 reviews from me. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 4 OMG. Oh my goodness, LMAO. Vern wow. I like her a lot. But does she really know? Just finished the first part, that’s why I’m writing this. WOW, sweetness, vern be caring that weird, but considering. Anyways, Mich... Showing up right after Vern left, CONSPIRACY ?!?!?! Chapter 5 Awww, what a sweet chapter, first with the shopping and then with Mich staying and having a conversation, I like where this is going, keep it up. And I have to agree with Cooper, I think Vern and Mich are mind READERS!!! Chapter 6 Ok i know that Cooper couldn’t have passed out with little sleep, there has to be more??!? That was, an interesting chapter to say the least, and you did kinda get a vibe from Mich, meaning that he has feelings for Cooper, like cooper does him, maybe that’s what Vern was talking about? Might be! Very nicely done. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 7 Awww, that’s so sad nad sweet. But what about Vern? Is she going to be okay with Cooper and Mich being friends? I wonder..... Thanks again for the great read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 8 OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! Wow, I knew it was going to come but I never knew exactly when....LOL... Anyways, I kinda already knew that Vern knew about Cooper, and I think Mich did too, but he was sure enough to ask, but now.... He knows and wants a date! f**kING A! Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 9 About DAMN time they kiss, LOL. Wow, all it took was “swimming lessons” rofl. I’m glad that they finally get to know more ‘about’ each other. Another great chapter. Thanks, Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 10 OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Snap! Wow, grandpa found them, oooooo. Big trouble is coming. And a lot of kissing also... Hehehe. Very nice chapter Chapter 11 Awww, the ending of this chapter is SAD! L but I liked that Grandpa approved. YAY! For GRAMPS Yet another great chapter. Chapter 12 Well Chapter 12 was an interesting one at that. And well talking about Mich’s parents seemed to draw them together more, and the date is getting better and better, the last part about a guy? That’s a confusing one but one I’m going to read in the next chapter, thanks. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 13 WOW! And for the ending answering, I would think not because you have two more chapters out there. Thanks for the great chapter Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 14 That chapter was SEXY and HOT! Plus Vern showing up IS priceless, and we cant forget about Mich opening the door in his underwear!!!!! Chapter 15 Awww, I kinda knew that Vern had something to do with them getting together and I’m glad that it worked out, and now Time for his BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Anyways, what surprised was Vern knew already about Luke, even after confuses me because Cooper told Mich that no-one knew about it other than his sister. So yea, but it all works out... I hope... Thanks for the very interesting chapter, especially the almost sex.... Hehe, sweetness. Remijay <3 ((Hugz))

There Once Was Love Chapter 10 Thomas The next few days after the fight with Eric were kinda touch and go for a while. We stopped talking long enough to figure out what we wanted. I still didn’t understand how he found out; I didn’t think there was anyone in the hallway when we came out. He never told me who told him. So I guess, as you can tell, we have taken a break from one another. Cyrus kept bothering me. Every time I saw him at school he would hint so effortlessly to me that we

What the f**k????? Damn, that was an intense chapter. Filled with love and happiness, well between Jordan and Eric.... Then came Paul... Paul, how can someone be so, so mean and evil? I would think that after a life together basically he would still love Eric, and his orientation. But I guessed wrong... Very, very wow... I have one question though, WHAT HAPPENED TO Paul?!?!?! LOL.... Anyways, keep’em coming and I will surely keep writing reviews and I loved it.... ((Hugz—Kizzes)) Remijay <3

Awww, thanks hun

Wow, i never knew.... I mean Neph. Helped me so yea, im sorry. I will surely look through my chapters for now on.... Thanks for pointing that out

Wow Tiger, i love this story. It keeps getting better and better. <3 hehehe Keep writing and i will surely post comments on it... Alwayz & forever!!!

Modern High Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zack Part 4a Taking Sides and Picking Fights Jacob Thursday At around three thirty-ish, I decided that it was time for me to ask a couple of questions. For instance, can I stay here with my mother? Can I move here and go to school? I just wanted to be away from my father, he just doesn’t understand why I’m the way I am. I miss him dearly, but not his attitude towards me or my orientation. I walked into my

There Once Was Love! Chapter 9 Getting Caught Cyrus I walked around the corner from Tom and, well, the only way I could explain it was that I missed the contact with him already... I just missed him already. If I sound clingy then that’s what I am; I can’t deny it. Sighing out loud for the world to hear, my body seemed to feel content. To be able to walk in bliss is great. I arrived at my door, only to have it fling open. My brother stood there, smiling at me. I didn’t get it, what w

Modern High Chapter 9 Drama in the Life of Jacob and Zach Part 3 Understanding Times Jacob When I came into her house, it smelt like apples and cinnamon. What a scent that I loved, but it soon ended. “Why have you come here, of all places, Jacob?” Concern was written in her voice, I knew that I shouldn’t have come here and I knew that I’d be asked that question; I had to think of a reason. I still didn’t want to be tossed out or turned back over to my father. “Because I’ve tr

Hi all... Here's chapter 9 part 2, i dont know what ya'll think of it so far, no-one has given me insight on it, so I'm lost as of yet....Anyways, have fun with this one. Part 3 is finished and will be posted once it gets back from Editing, I dont know how many parts there will be of this chapter but there will be alot going on, thanks. Hugz--Kizzes Remijay <3 https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Remijay/modern-high/10