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It can only get worse or better from here. I hope for Aiden's health he knows what he's doing. But at 15 i dont think so. Anyway, great chapter.
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I like where this story is heading. I hope Aiden does well. I don't know about Eli anymore. maybe they will become friends. But I don't see them being anything else. But I have been wrong before.
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Chapter 20 Prom When I awoke this morning, I had jitters. Today would be the day that I finally get to spend with Eric. In a special way. Do you have any idea, what I’m going through at this very moment? For some of you yes, maybe as for the rest of you guys. I don’t want to screw this up. I have to get ready. Prom this year is being held on a Saturday. Which I was really thankful for. Putting on pajamas bottoms, and fixing my hair sort of, I travel down the stairs two at a time. I couldn’
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Hmm, i wonder what will happen. i didnt know Eli could be soo cold. But i was wrong. I guess when you lose the person that was your other half. Things change. And maybe they will again. If he ever gets rid of that chip on his shoulder. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Very nice start. I like it alot
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There once was love Chapter 19 After Eric put on that ring, and wrapped his arms around me. I couldn’t have been more thankful for the guy. He was and probably will be my everything. “Can we go somewhere?” He asks “Anywhere my dear, anywhere.” I state I took his hand in mine and we stroll out of the school. I tossed my keys to him and got into the passenger seat. I didn’t care where we going, I just wanted it to be us. The car seemed quiet, almost too quiet. I reached for the radio, but
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OH wow! I so wished for Jamie to recover. But that wasnt in the cards. i knew that once he was shot, he'd be gone. But i never thought that Eli would turn to drinking and blaming himself for everything that went wrong. I am truly saddened. Also for his family and friends. HUGS! Thanks for the amazing story.
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OMG! i cant imagine what the aftermath is going to be like. i knew Eli's dad hated Jamie. But he didnt have to shoot him. FUCK! i dont want the story to end like this. It has to be something... Sorry for the language. Anyway, i loved this story. And i fell for Jamie.
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There once was love Chapter 18 Surprise Surprise You know that feeling you get when things are about to get ugly? Well I have that feeling. It started right after I awoke. I don’t know, like the pit of my stomach is in knots. Eric looked at me funny this morning. Telling me that I look pale, and my body felt cold. I looked at him with a smirk and kissed him on the cheek, before leaving him in my room while I searched the house for my father and coffee. I found my dad in his usual place, i
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Modern High Take Three Chapter 8 I wish that I could have slept that morning. I wish that I could tell Zach exactly how I felt without hurting his feelings. He cares about me so much that, that sometimes it’s too much bare. As the morning past and I not feeling tired. I took out my cell phone and caught up on what the world has been doing. Facebook has told me that my friends as worried. Worried that Zach has kidnapped me and they are thinking about calling the cops. I cannot have that hap
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There once was love Chapter 17 A few weeks have gone by Keith and I haven’t spoken. We may have gone to the same school and have the same friends. But we always managed to stay clear of each other. Other than of course having the same classes. We still didn’t interact with one another other though. It was as if it was spoken that we didn’t want to clear up this fucking mess. Leaving that morning, I gave my dad a kiss on the cheek before driving to school. Well before that I called Eric and
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i knew this was going to happen. I just knew it... But poor ELI. i couldnt imagine being in Jamies shoes right now. I think Jax was right, it's going to come down to kill or be killed. I just hope that Eli is safe and they wont hurt him.
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i have read every one of your chapters. At first i was like "what the fuck am i reading" and then i was like "alright i have to read more to understand". Now, I'm wondering how is Jamie going to get himself out of the underground. When he was told that he couldnt? I fell for your story, and i am hoping that Jamie will be able to.
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I like the story so far and would love to read more. Anyway, i have to agree. The workout room seems like its meant for working out... maybe, have randy mention theres a pool house lol i might want add, everyone knows mikes gay and that hes a player. Hmm, seems kind of fishy to me... Remi jay <3 hugs
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There Once Was Love Chapter 14 As my eyes fluttered open, I looked upon my sleeping prince. He looked so comfortable and peaceful. The way the light streamed in through the half-open blinds made him appear angelic. Running my fingers along his jawline and over his lips had me wanting to kiss him, but I didn’t want to wake him so I left it to just feeling his smooth skin. Until he reached up and took my hand from his face. He kissed the back of my hand and placed it on his side, where he in
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Modern High Take Three Chapter 7 “But Zach, where are we going?” Zach and I are having another fight. It didn’t take us that long this time around. Zach has to have it his way. Because that’s how Zach has always been. I love the boy to death, sigh… “Babe, I have already told you...” He pauses to pick something up off the ground. “I don’t know exactly where we are going, and when we will arrive. I just know that being apart from you, and being at that school…” Again he pauses; this time he
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When I started to write Innocence of night, I was in a dark place, and because of my favorite author’s story GFD, I began to write my own. I have written quite a few of stories and short stories. My favorite author told me that I am his successor. So I hope that I can one day to be just as good or better than he… His name is Comicality. Innocence of Night Book 2 Chapter 1 The next evening, I awoke with a start. I am not used to being back; I still wish that I was with Josh and his gang. Ho
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Time will tell Chapter 3; Parts E & F Too far gone The days keep coming like there is no end. I try to move, but it doesn’t work. I feel trapped like a rat inside a cage. Flooded with the sights and sounds of happy people coming in and out. My emotions can’t take it much longer; I’m a stranger to this. Make it stop, please make it stop. Make all the badness go away; to never touch me again. To leave me broken on the floor with my shattered life surrounding it. Please make the bleeding
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Chapter 5 - Movie night at Alice's
Remijay commented on dianjin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Movie night at Alice's
When i find out that my friends havent seen the movies that i have, or the shows that i have. I ask them if they would like to watch them. Most times the answer is yes. I'm really surprised that Max loved LOR trilogy. Thats a very long movie and series. I'm shocked that he was oblivious to everyone around him. Even as Alice said that the house was on fire. That was hilarious lmao. Anyway, the last chapter and this one were an emotional one. Anxiety, and concern. I hope for everyone's sake that Marie is a sweet, caring women. That wouldnt want to take Max away. Here's to hoping. -
Chapter 6 Out with the old; In with the new I honestly didn’t know what to expect. We popped in at a forest. To say that I was out of breath is an understatement at best. I was more or less wheezing, coughing, and trying to catch my breath, which for all I know was left in Florida. “Where the fuck are we, Zach?” I growled. “Well, I had to do something, they were pretty much grilling you. And the look that you had on your face…” “What look?” I asked defensively. “You know the look.” I g
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Chapter 2 - The cycle of Gift giving
Remijay commented on dianjin's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The cycle of Gift giving
I have been following this story since the beginning and along with French Touch. They are both fabulous stories. It seems that Max's life is getting better. Especially since he has Aaron. Max has more friends now and has overcome his past. I think? Anyway, the snowball fight was awesome. I am 26 and i still love them. There will always be a kid inside an adult. Getting distracted, the love that Max and Aaron shares i hope will last. And on that note, I am also glad that his aunt is really sweet, kind lady. Best wishes, Remijay -
Yea, the first book was a bit confusing at most. Or more than that actually. It didn't really make sense to my readers. And that is my fault. As for this book, i have some things in the works for what you mentioned. i can't really speak on it, or it'd be a spoiler. LOL Anyhow, thanks for the review.
