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Remijay

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  1. Remijay

    Groundwork

    Uh, owl you know that you have 3 copies of the same chapter? In Chapter 18... It happens. Anyway, i like that Billy's dad is acting strange, maybe a little bit too strange. Lol, he might warming up to David staying, who knows... I loooovvee the detail that you have put into this chapter, it was amazingly good. I smiled and laughed mostly throughout it. Very good work. Can't wait until the next installment. Remijay <3
  2. Chapter 8 I awoke in the mid morning about the time for bunch, I guess. I sat up looking at my sleeping beauty and I couldn’t tell, initially, that anything was wrong. I reached over and touched his wonderful skin that always had the creamy texture, only this time it wasn’t a creamy color, no it was plain white, pale. No color whatsoever could be seen. Just looking at him made me become concerned but then I remembered something I read awhile ago. Vampires when they’re asleep, their skin doe
  3. Remijay

    Chapter 2

    Hah, I'm glad that my readers are liking the story. I like the way you put in Madonna. If i had to think about it, it probably would be that song. And thank you Carrie, for reading and the review Remi
  4. Remijay

    Chapter 2

    Actually the first chapter is the first time they ever did something together. As the chapters come in and then come to an end, you'll see why Rodney said what he did in the beginning. I have a unique ending coming to this story. But it will be in the epilogue. Thank you for the review Remi
  5. Remijay

    Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review first off. And I'm glad that you like the story so far and my writing. I have to agree with alot of people, this story is very hard to read, and write. I love my characters. So you can just imagine what it takes to write it... Anyway, i have never had foster parents. But im glad to see that yours is doing fine/good. I hope i do see more of your reviews. Until next time i guess. Thank you once again for the review Remi
  6. Remijay

    Chapter 2

    The first chapter of this story was supposed to be a poem but as i wrote more i found that i can turn it into a story... I'm glad that you like it so far. It gets better, but not soon enough.
  7. Remijay

    Chapter 2

    Diary There comes a time when life doesn’t seem enough, when life seems to be complicated. Where all you think about is death, murder, and maybe suicide. I can’t make any promises... I have been thinking about it for a while. Nevertheless, do you know why I am alive and writing this? I didn’t think so. The answer is because my mother and brother are still out there. As long as I know they’re alive, then I will always fight for a chance. I didn’t always think like this. I wanted to be like othe
  8. Fallen Valley Heights Short Story 2 of 3 When only I give my half, you give your whole. As each day passes, with it comes pleasure. At last the day comes when finally, As soon as my mind comprehended what was going on. My eyes went straight for his feet which were covered by his socks. Dragging my eyes up from there, they saw how muscular Thomas’ calves were, along with how bronze they looked in his dimly lit room. Traveling further up, my eyes spotted his smooth succulent thighs. On p
  9. The Innocence Of Night Chapter 7 I was just standing there trying to figure out what to send Asher even if I didn’t know how. I could still try, right? I organized the things in my head for Asher and the others to read. I then started to remember flash backs of my step dad, some of the memories hurt too much to think about, but I couldn’t do anything but wait for the next memory to come into play. I think Asher got my message because I heard something in my head saying, "I got it! Are you d
  10. There Once Was Love Chapter 11 Time for Surprises When we finally got off the plane and into the car, no one was talking. It didn’t take a rocket scientist to figure out why they weren’t. If I could blame someone else, I would; but noone did what I did, so I have to face the facts. I’m exiled for now. “Is anyone ever going to talk to me again?” “...” No one answered; the only thing I did get though was a few grunts and mumbles. So typical. “Whatever…” As I turned the key over and hear
  11. Im that I confused you, it wasn't intended. There is going to be a book 2, I haven't started on it yet. As for Zach being dead, that's a no. But more or less yes. Lol I hope you enjoyed reading Modern High.
  12. Weddings always make me cry... I love this story Kim. It's sad to say and see that this story is coming to a close. I will miss it, dearly. However, the detail that you put into this chapter, blew me away. The colors, the songs, the scene that you protrayed was awesome. And the emotions, so raw but real. You did an awesome job. Thanks for writing it Kim Remijay <3 *Hugs*
  13. Remijay

    1 of 4

    Actually the very beginning Rodney explains everything that will eventually happen. And I'm glad that you like it so far. Lol, all in do time. But thank you again. And yes i have irc.shackoutback.net. Under Remis Refuge. But no where else, i dont think.
  14. Rodney Kasson. He has friends, family, and people supporting him. But what they dont know is he's hinding a HUGE secret, only one person knows. Until everything falls apart. Will they accept him or reject him. Read his not so amazing tell of how he overcame being the outcast of his small town.
  15. Remijay

    1 of 4

    Copyrighted ® (This story contains violence, sexual encounters and drugs… Under no circumstances do I condone violence or drugs. Any publically recognizable names, places, or surrounding, belongs to the author and owner of this story. This is story is not for sale or profitable. It’s purely for entertainment purposes. If you feel that this story is not for you, or that it is too violent let me know. I am happy to neither accept nor reject any critics, criticism, advice, and or problems. Thank y
  16. Remijay

    Time Will Tell

    Two twin boys, and gay. How to tell this story is simple but complicated. Devon a boy of 16 struggling with difficulties of a home life. Josh a boy of the same age, that has everything he wants, but one thing, his brother. Both are struggling with their past and maybe present. Hopefully they find each other. Together they might overcome, what is to come.
  17. Remijay

    Chapter 1

    Copyrighted ® (This story contains violence, sexual encounters and drugs… Under no circumstances do I condone violence or drugs. Any publically recognizable names, places, or surrounding, belongs to the author and owner of this story. This is story is not for sale or profitable. It’s purely for entertainment purposes. If you feel that this story is not for you, or that it is too violent let me know. I am happy to neither accept nor reject any critics, criticism, advice, and or problems. Thank y
  18. Remijay

    Chapter 2

    Awesome story Andy, i told you i would read it... Now im reading Fleets story. Keep'em coming... I wanna see where it goes
  19. Cant believe that i have forgotten to write a comment. uggH!!! Anyway, i agree with the DOC he just needs to make new memories, until his memories come back. That was a very good part. Im beginning to love Tag and Jimmy. They're awesome. I want gay bestfriends like them <3 lol ... I also agree with Intune the flowers plus the note was GENIOUS! Remijay <3 Keep'em coming
  20. Holy!!! I loved it... Just loved it... Every little bit... The emotions, the visualizations, even the details, were jsut amazing... You did a wonderful job on this chapter. But sadly, the happiness that Chris felt for David, and the contentment that he felt, didn't last him as long as he would have hoped... I wish they would have done something. i do agree with Chris on this tho, he's just not ready for the sexual parts yet... That's understandable. Keep'em Coming. Remijay <3 Hugs!
  21. Oh no chica you have to finish this story... I love it way tooooo much... I want more... Whines like a Child... lol i kid. Love the chapter tho, heh Chris hada identity chrisist? Wow and dates a girl for 6 months lols.... Heh, but the detail you put into this chapter was great. I feel and visualized the surrondings... Awesome! Remijay <3
  22. Awww Im loving every single chapter ..... This chapter not only powerful but emotional... If i wasnt sobering up, when i read this, then i would have probably missed it all. I agree with Fleet, this chapter turned out perfectly... Between present n past, you did an awesome job. I couldnt have done it better myself I also agree with her again, that I'm actually glad that he doesnt remember, shit i would love to forget alot of bad times, and memories. Hehe, the kiss... What to say about that... hmmm.. Heh, i kid... I loved it, it was like you were apart of it, feeling everything that Chris did. Remijay <3 Keep'em coming...
  23. So very sweet but it seems to me that Christian doesnt really get what is going on around him... I think him going home, was a mistake... It's taking him all by surprise... Don't get me wrong i love this story and its only the 4th chapter LOL... Anyway, the thing that fascinates me is that Chris is willing to do anything to make David smile, thats a plus. The kids he already loves, now he just needs to start falling back in love with David. Til next time. Remijay <3
  24. Aw so sweet and caring. Chris is a real trooper. Its getting sweeter and sweeter by the chapter. David is an awesome father and caring husband. I hope one day that i can have the same thing... And the kids. Wow, so smart and cute.
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