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  1. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks Dannsar.
  2. Hamen Cheese
    Wow. You read fast. I just posted it. Haha.
  3. Hamen Cheese
    I’d like to thank Linxe Turmoil, Anya, and Quonus10 for taking the time to beta read this last part of Charlie. Their input has been valuable in the way this final part has been shaped. * * * * * * * * * * Many grown-ups enjoy telling their children stories of “the good old days” when they got up to do the craziest things (which in truth is never as crazy as they make it sound). Most stories told are filled with fond memories of loving parents, loyal friends, and exciting adventures. We tend n
  4. Hamen Cheese
    I could have replied individually to each review but since we've already corresponded through email, it might be redundant to say one thing or another here. Hehe.
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    I'm sorry about that Aximili. On the bright side, the next chapter is coming out next week (with a fresh chapter every week after that). Assuming everything goes well, there won't be any more delays.
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    Erm, I can't comment on that. Haha.
  7. Hamen Cheese
    /comfort Raymond It will get better.
  8. Hamen Cheese
    The voices he heard are a mixture of the people involved in the incident that happened when he was young. It should become clear when the next chapter comes out.
  9. Hamen Cheese

    EPILOGUE

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

    Hi Leesil. Actually, my exact wording was "If you're wondering what's next, it unfortunately won't be the sequel to this (though I do hope to write that eventually)." That means the next story I was working on at the time Adamagika ended was not the sequel to Adamagika. To be exact, that story is my other story entitled "Charlie". Adamagika: The Spirit Within (A:TSW) will have a sequel. Ever since I wrote it, I intended it to be a three part book series with a short story between each part. I'm planning to start working on the short story post-TSW after I'm done with "Charlie". Also, thanks for reading and leaving a review. Always glad to hear from readers.
  10. Hamen Cheese
    I could have delayed this chapter so that the gap between this one and the next would "seem shorter". I was tempted to actually. However, it wouldn't have changed the release date of Part 4 in any way. Therefore, I decided to just wrap up Part 3 (since it was already done) instead of delaying it.
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    Hehe. I know readers really don't have a choice regarding release dates. The end note was there more to inform everyone the time table I'll be working with. Some people excitedly wait for a new chapter every Tuesday (at least if the comments are true). To simply say: "Next chapter in two weeks or more" without any explanation seemed to just be a bit insensitive for me towards those who have become avid followers.
  12. Hamen Cheese
    There are still two more things coming that are difficult to swallow (one of them should be obvious from this chapter). I'm considering removing the other one but I'm worried I won't be true to myself if I do (and what would I replace it with if I did?). It feels a bit extreme but... I dunno. I guess I have to think about it. >.
  13. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks ladyPink! I know releasing the chapters aren't good for my blood pressure. Hehe. These chapters are (if anything) the most critical in the story and pacing is always a tough element to consider. I constantly worry I'm moving too fast or too slow. I hope you guys can bear with the development.
  14. Hamen Cheese
    I am sorry to hear that ckprime. I've always hoped that there was a Charlie out there for every person that read this story. I suppose it was inevitable that one of them would be a Charlie himself. I hope you will have a happy ending.
  15. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks ghanbrews! I've been hoping to make each part end with a bang. I quite enjoyed developing the characters in this story (though I must admit I wish I developed certain other characters more). Oh well. That's life.
  16. Hamen Cheese
    I know. Haha. There aren't very many cliffhangers left though (at least as I see them). Just one near the end.
  17. Hamen Cheese
    The antagonists in this story will get what's coming to them (except one).
  18. Hamen Cheese
    I think the next few chapters are pretty good. Though a few are still nail biting. We're finally gonna find out where it all started. Things will get better before this finishes. I guarantee that (though there will still be a few downs along the way). After all, things just got violent.
  19. Hamen Cheese
    Well, there are only so many chapters so things have got to get resolved pretty soon.
  20. Hamen Cheese
    Was it that nasty? You're making me worried. @_@
  21. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks.
  22. Hamen Cheese
    CHAPTER 27: My Bloody Valentine I couldn’t understand what happened. I mean he hurt Charlie. No one had any right to hurt Charlie. I just hurt him back because of what he did. And somehow, I ended up as the bad guy, again. Granted, I did kinda hurt Travis to the point of knocking him near unconsciousness but to be fair, I was feeling guilty about that. I knew Travis was a piece of shit but I didn’t really want to hurt him. I was just angry and I guess I just lost it when I saw Charlie get hurt.
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    Hi falling into the story. I'm glad you continued reading though it will still be a few chapters before everything is over. I'm not sure where you got the impression that Derek's mom is homophobic. On the contrary, I wrote her to be accepting. His father though is a completely different story. There are things he will lose but also other things he will find. Yes, it will take time to mend certain things about Derek but there will be people around him to support him.
  24. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks Lisa. And yes, that is what Charlie certainly meant.
  25. Hamen Cheese
    Thanks sojourn! Yes, he's been pushed back many times but I'll be pushing forward again very soon.
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