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  1. Hamen Cheese
    CHAPTER 22: Strange Things About “How was your first day?” my mom asked as I entered the teacher’s office. All the other desks were empty as it was already way past the time for the last class. “Well,” I sighed heavily as I dropped my whole body onto a nearby couch. “It started bad, went ok, went to worse, went decent, and then went all the way to hell.” “What?” my mom asked chuckling. “It couldn’t have been that bad.” I raised an eyebrow at her. “No one called me the whole day about you so t
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    Thanks Lisa! Yeah, I think both our boys... *ehem* men as Derek would say... looking out for Charlie simply do not understand each other enough to realize that in their good intentions, they may just be making things worse.
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    It's a little bit of both. He's conflicted and having a hard time translating what he feels into words. In the end, it should be clear enough.
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    Hehe, yeah. I realized as I was writing that it's so easy to hate some characters one moment then love them the next (and then hate them two chapters down the road). That's the desired effect anyway but I hope that everyone will love the characters that remain by the end of the story.
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    Sorry but I'm afraid Charlie won't be speaking to Derek in the next chapter.
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    Mr. Sloan is a bit extreme in his reaction but the other teacher's are acting quite professional about it, I think. Sure they might have a lot of things to say about the issue but they know well enough not to make such rash assumptions unlike some people.
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    Haha. Don't hate on Travis. He's just trying to look out for Charlie.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Thanks! I've gone back and fixed the errors. No worries. Editing for me is the most boring part so sometimes I miss details like that when I already have the text in my mind. Hehe.
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    CHAPTER 21: Against the World I was in a considerably lighter mood despite the fact that my eyes were puffy and my nose resembled something close to a ripe tomato. Thankfully, Mikee didn’t seem like the type of student who was bothered by crying boys, err… crying men. He neither cringed away nor became uncomfortable with the whole scene. And despite his assertions that he would leave me moping by myself, he stayed with me until I had better composed myself and looked much like my handsome self
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Haha. Thanks for reading cantwait! There are others who want to see things from Charlie's perspective but I currently have no plans of writing that. But, you never know what the future can hold.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Aaah... if only life was this simple.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Hey ANORDOFHALL. Thanks for reading my story. Hehe. Derek certainly has blocked something in his head though it will be a few more chapters before we get to that. And, someone will definitely fall victim to Luke's schemes though as to who that will be... Anyway, hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    There are about 12 chapters left I think. That's subject to change as I'm not yet done writing everything. It can increase or decrease depending on the need for either.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Overprotective people can sometimes be pain in the ass.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    I think deep down, Derek is a good guy. Everyone makes mistakes. It's just that Derek doesn't or can't easily realize that what he's doing is wrong. He's trying though.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Haha. I'm looking to get an iPad 2 *ehem ehem*. Just kidding hehe. I hope by the end of this story, everyone will like the person that Derek will become.
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Thanks! Charlie and Mikee are actually friends though Derek is unaware to what extent. Mikee is a pretty cool character, I think. He's the kind of guy you'd certainly want to be friends with. Sometimes I feel I haven't developed him enough (same with Andrew who will play an important role soon enough).
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    Erm... no promises I'm afraid... Haha. He will get to talk to Charlie in the next chapter though...
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    You won't have to wait too long to know what Luke is really up to, I think. And yes, Derek does have a tendency to repeat himself...
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Hamen Cheese posted new chapter in Charlie

    CHAPTER 20: Remorse I walked out into the hallway while the whispers from the classroom exploded loudly in my wake. Mr. Sloan, finally realizing what was happening, heatedly told them all to get back to answering their own exams. I’d never really seen him that angry before but somehow I felt that something about this whole thing was personal. And, I got the impression that when he took things personally, he wasn’t one to be crossed. Though the hallway was empty and silent, Mr. Sloan’s words ec
  21. Hamen Cheese
    Haha. Thank you very much. I did warn readers that this story will be a roller coaster ride of emotions.
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    Hrm... there are SO many things I want to say to this but can't.
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    Sorry, I thought the last review you left was for this chapter haha. Anyway... Luke is truly causing a lot of trouble. And it will only get worse.
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    Yes, he is nearing a breakthrough. The recent events in his life are forcing old memories out of hiding. You'll know soon enough.
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    Sympathy for Derek I expected. Though ambivalence to Charlie I'm surprised with. Hehe. Thanks!
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