EPILOGUE

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

Thanks dkstories! Your praise now is just as flattering for me as it was the first time I saw a review from you. Thanks for standing by the story so long. Now, I'm eagerly awaiting your next great story! On a side note, I was reading the Do Over series again on my phone while I was bored and away from home. I didn't realize that the names Derek and Hampton were in Book 2 until now! Haha. Rest assured, Derek will not be time traveling any time soon.
- January 24, 2012
- 92 comments
EPILOGUE

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

Thanks Nicky_cv! I haven't quite decided yet on what the future will be for our Hero (and his Big C). However, I gave some comments in the discussion thread you might want to check out. http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/31901-charlie/page__view__findpost__p__337034
- January 24, 2012
- 92 comments
EPILOGUE

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

Thanks rogi24g! I'm glad you liked it despite the ending not being "and they bonked happily ever after." Cheers for sticking by it this long.
- January 24, 2012
- 92 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Travis did eventually hear it when Charlie screamed for help. So did Mr. Maloney. Of course, I didn't bother including these in the epilogue as you'll see soon enough. As for Jared? Well, some people are just plain crazy I think. I actually did include my name in the plug in the first draft. However, I decided to tone it down after a discussion with one of the beta readers. And no, Charlie does not have a cellphone. If you can recall, it was broken when Luke attacked him in the junkyard. Similarly, Derek does not have a phone. It was also broken when he slammed his fist on the kitchen table.
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

I'm happy to hear you liked the story! And I'm glad you boyfriend is willing to go with a nick name. I think special names are quite sweet. Although, I'm curious to know why Daffy and Donald. Big fans of Disney? Hehe.
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Thanks Mike00!
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

I hope the chapter I just posted is makes it a 10. Adamagika is not really a comedy (in the same way Charlie is) and there isn't quite a character like Derek there. Nonetheless, maybe you'll like it.
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Sorry, I couldn't resist.
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

It's here.
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Thanks Raymond!
- January 17, 2012
- 42 comments
EPILOGUE

Hamen Cheese posted new chapter in Charlie

Another Message from the Author I love my characters. I don’t write about them unless I enjoy thinking about them. I have grown particularly fond of the ones in this story and of course would like the best for them. At the beginning of this story, I said that there was enough sadness in this world and that writing a sad story would be a disservice to you. I suppose I have failed gravely in that matter because there was a lot more sadness in this story than even I imagined as I first started wri
- January 17, 2012
- 92 comments
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Star Wars: The Old Republic

Hamen Cheese replied to Myr's topic in The Lounge

WoW all the way!
- January 11, 2012
- 5 replies
- - swtor
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Those are interesting points. I tried to balance a little or reality with the fiction in this story. There's a lot of injustice in the world and in truth a lot of people get away with things they shouldn't. In the end though, I leave it to you guys to pass judgment. Thanks again.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

/hug Hold on there.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Haha. Alright. Keeping my fingers crossed.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Thanks Night Vision! And yes, you've found Luke's killer here.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

It's okay rogi24g, the next chapter isn't (or at least shouldn't be) as emotionally heavy as this one.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

What self-promotion? I just came across that Adamagika thingie one time and really liked it. *cough* On a side note, I am not a Marketing Exec but I am a Business Graduate. Jared was lingering there. Maybe once everything is done, you can check out the story again at a future time with fresh eyes. Also, thanks again as always.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

That's something I will be touching on in the last chapter. I don't know quite yet if it truly gives justice to the supporting characters I have in this story but I do hope that it is enough given the limited words left to be read.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

I know. I'm sorry. Haha. Almost there... almost there!
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Thanks (I think)!
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Charlie's too good for that. Though he can do some damage with a trash can.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Is that a "WOW!" wow or is it a "Wooooow..." wow?
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hehe. You shouldn't have to wait too long at least.
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments
Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: I Say Goodbye

/hug
- January 11, 2012
- 42 comments

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