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  1. Hamen Cheese
    Haha. Yes, you'll find that there are a lot of things to hate with Derek Hampton but I hope that in the end, views might change.
  2. Hamen Cheese
    I'm hoping to take people on a roller coaster of emotions with this story. I expected people to sometimes laugh, sometimes be angry, and yes sometimes be sad (but I hoped I wouldn't make anyone cry). Generally though, I'm trying to incline it away from sad.
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    I am afraid that is not the reason.
  4. Hamen Cheese
    Haha. You're going to give me a big head with all these complements. Thanks though! Appreciate it.
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    Thanks!
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    Yep, brotherhood and friendship are the foundations of this story. You'll find it tried and tested beyond stereotypes we normally see. Then again, unlikely pairings are a stereotype.
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    Thanks again! Something to keep in mind with this story is that it's narrated from Derek's POV which means he can pretty much control what happens? Fact? Fiction? Embellishment? Only he can know really.
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    Thanks Conner! I'm glad Andy pointed you here haha. Gotta make sure to thank him for that. Glad you're enjoying the story.
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    Thank you charlieocho! As usual, love the name.
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    Yes, something did happen between Derek and his dad in the past though it might be awhile before we get to that.
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    Hehehe. Well, Andrew's not out of the picture yet.
  12. Hamen Cheese
    Hmm, not quite sure what you mean by the cold turkey. Hehe. Do you mean the style changed far too quickly? Anyway, I delayed it for a week because I got sick. I didn't have time to edit it the week before as I spent most of my time in bed.
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    Well, thank you Anya! Missed all of you too (even if it has been just a week or so hehehe).
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    Thanks Tara!
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    Smoking is Gay

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Smoking is Gay

    Hehe. Thanks Conner!
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    World of Warcraft destroys lives!!! Player since 2005.
  17. Hamen Cheese
    The question is what EXACTLY does a Magic Penis do? I mean, does it come up to the bed while you're sleeping and yell SURPRISE!!!
  18. Hamen Cheese
    CHAPTER 17: The Indomitable Mrs. C I rubbed my head absently with my hand. The bump was still throbbing rather than being less of a pain. The prospect of an ice bag was becoming more and more welcoming. “How are you, Derek?” Mrs. C asked conversationally without taking her eyes off the magazine. I stared at her. What game was she playing at? I looked carefully at the nearest table. It was occupied by two people I vaguely recognized as Southmore students, though maybe a few years younger
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Thanks Simonjames30! Glad you like it so far.
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Hi nicojohn90! Unfortunately, I have no plans of switching the perspective to Charlie's POV any time soon. We'll have to live with this stuck up narrator for quite awhile hehe. Thanks though for reading and reviewing!
  21. Hamen Cheese

    Charlie

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story in Fiction

    I don't know if it will still be possible. Still quite a few chapters to go. Things can still change.
  22. Hamen Cheese

    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Haha. I will think about that. No guarantees!
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Aww, he can't be all bad. I mean you've followed him this long.
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Thanks montyblk! Yeah, Derek will have a lot to think about for sure.
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Hamen Cheese commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    Thanks for following the story!
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