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Hot.... smoking hot... i think i held my breath all through that chapter.... wow!! think i'll be ok for work in the morning..
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I feel greedy... very greedy.. great chapters but i'm hungering for more... more.... more.. thanks tho Aro I'm glad u're taking the time out of your busy summer to write
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In a way he is just like Tori.. all the planning and scheming but she did start the whole thing. So Eric knows something, omg and i was liking him stupid asshole. I'm not too sure if Logan did the rite thing by sending the photos via email though maybe he should have just dropped the bomb on homecoming.. humiliating her while she's in her element.. tehehehe. Loving it of course and me thinks me likey Steven... i hope though that he is not on Tori's payroll..
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WOW!!!! Now that i've finally started there is absolutely no turning back. I love that Kyle, Spence and Coop are still friends but Devon and Coop now i did not see that one coming at all.. i'm reading on jay see u in the other chaps... hey remind me... who was Sebastian again?
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Logan got his ass kicked.. that's good... mayb next time he'll think before he walks into another trap (or mayb not). Eric, there's a guy i don't really like.. I mean usually i like the boyfriends of the main character but this one he's just obtuse.. how can he not see that Tori is a douche... But still the big question is will Logan use the evidence he has been provided with to silence the big haired lard ass bitch or will he stop playing the Summit Hill game with the excuse of being the better human?? Can't wait to find out.. Btw, the fact that he got his ass kicked puts him back in my good graces..... for now
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Stupid asshole... wasn't he supposed to be going to his best friend thingy.... I just knew he wud have forgotten. stupid wanna be preppy asshole. I'm fuming. he put the pieces together but still he 'throw Taylor under the bus' just to get a moment of fame in Summit Hill.. idiot, he already has Eric doesn't he realize that that's his ticket to make it in the hell hole.. or perhaps he's warming up to the place and now that he's got fortune he just has to have fame as well.. Can't wait to see what happens to his sorry ass...
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Awwwwwesome wow.. i dare you Mark
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Puck!!! U're a tease Lugh.. just as i begin to get comfortable the story ends... I love it though and all i can do is wait patiently for the other chapters... who am i kidding i'll be buzzing around like an excited bee waiting for the others.. i feel like a kid who's sugared up and then told to go to bed
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WOW!!! one word Cassie.. awesome.. I'm reading on.
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Pretty pretty please.... more... u have a knack for keeping us in dire need of more.. oh gosh.. what happens with Tom and Kit... i wanna read more... i feel hyper, i've been waiting patiently for like forever for another chapter..
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I originally copied and pasted the story from a word document so the format was a little different and that contributed. I'll edit it asap.. but thanks for your review
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I'm glad that Coop has buried the hatchet with Kyle.. and surprisingly, i don't wanna bury my hatchet into him anymore.. I rather like the way he has turned out... I love Chase now.. the fact that he can be so loving, supportive and not overly jealous is refreshing and since that's what Cooper wants the two belong together.. I'm glad he has grown from the little whore he used to be... he has rite?
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lmao... Sam.. oh sorry Samuel is smart.. I wish i had the ability to pull stuff out of my ass if i was caught daydreaming in classes
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1. Coop's in the hospital.. someone slipped him something.. that is y he should lay off the drinking for a bit. 2. He decides to try it out with Chase who he just has a little obsession with at the moment as opposed to Kyle whom he is utterly in love with.. even the blind can see that!! Oh Cooper what am i gonna do with you. I just hope this hospital experience allows him to take his ass out of his head and pray that Kyle takes him back
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WOW... just wow.. before i get to that little bombshell that Spencer dropped let me just say that I tried really hard to hate Chase.. and every guy that Coop has slept with that was not Kyle but i think Chase is growing on me. i actually like the horny bastard.. as for Spencer.. WAT!! i so wanna knoe how that happened.. omg i'm not gonna call down the 'wrath of jazzie' just yet i'm gonna figure out what's been going on.
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hold on... is it finished??
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Chapter 15: Follow That Nowhere Man
jazziebabe commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 15: Follow That Nowhere Man
Wow!!!! Ok, so there was a method to Tyler's madness after all. and he did love Trav but i guess first love is hard to lose. I can understand where Tye was coming from but given that Trav didn't know the story what he did was the right thing for him.. I hope things work out with him and Davis... sigh.. Sad very sad.. i really liked Tyler.. . -
Can i just ask a question.... is your sole intention to torture me with all this suspense and unexpected twist and turns!! Oh gosh i can't take it.. It's soo unbearable to torture i have to endure at ur hands Jwolf.. But do not make us wait too long, I wanna know what happens to Tyler and this detective guy.. i'm afraid to speculate, next thing you know he's working with Tyler and Travis will meet his end at their hands!! Then the two of them ride off into the sunshine..
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Chapter 13: American Flags
jazziebabe commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 13: American Flags
What!! What!! Wtf just happened?? ok either Trav is totally mental or he's incredibly stupid... I'm so lost right now. Now i know how Candace from Phineas and Ferb feels when her brother's contraptions keep disappearing.. i was so sure of the path the story would take but now i'm just sitting here wondering wtf just happened?? -
thanks for review ghrays. i'll see about getting an editor
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Oh and as for Kyle and Rusty somehow i don't think he's sleeping with him.. i think since he doesn't have Coop anymore he's trying to get back into the 'brotherhood' or whatever it was called... I'm a little biased in laying all the blame on Coop but if Kyle is really sleeping with Rusty i'll castrate him too
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Ok.. this one made me laugh!!! Coop had sex with Chase..... wow. I can actually c where he''s coming to senses a little bit in that he realizes that he's horse shit without Kyle and that he really really loves him.. I give them two more chaps to work things out or ima buy a sub-machine gun for Coop's ass!!
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Well at least Trav relizes that he's in love..... or is he?? And not to be totally biased but that stupid clown got what he deserved after all!! Trav killing him just goes to show that those two are meant to be together! I've been telling everyone who will listen about this story and i'm glad u're not making me as angry with this main character as in your other story keep it up J... waiting anxiously for the other chappies
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As i am typing this my friend is looking for the shovel... we are going to dig a hole and bury that slut!!! arrrrgggg.. he's such a whore... gosh when is he gonna wake up and smell the damn coffee he's meant to be with Kyle and Kyle is meant for him.. Cooper u better redeem yourself and do it quickly ur time is running out douche bag!!
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WAT!!!! :o I was so sure that positively without a doubt Travis would not sleep with Wade again.. but he did it and i was like aite, no biggie he won't do it again that was just one for the road.. but then he goes and does it again!!! Like WTF!!! If i were Tyler i'd add him to my body count! I knew that Wade guy was trouble from the get go.. I really hope Trav makes it up to Ty tho.. I'm an emotional wreck...
