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Ch 37: City Under Siege
jazziebabe commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 37: City Under Siege
OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH MAN!!!.. i swear this whole suspense thing should be punishable by.... let's say death!! I love you HC but u're killing me.. i literally live from Monday to Mondays.. i'm like a walking dead the rest of the days... -
Thanks Michael.. I'll try to get the others posted as soon as possible. Thank you for taking the time to review as weel
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i have waited sooooooooooooo long for this chapter.... and now that it's here i must say that i am pleased..impressed.. and in love with this story more than anything else!!! Good one Gene.. i'm loving it.. keep writing
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Yeah, i like VJ.. i'm thinking about writing another story about his life after i'm done with Toriq.. thanks for reviewing it's appreciated
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Well apparently Matt was still blaming himself for his father's stroke especially since he got it after he came out.. Thanks for reviewing by the way
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Lol.. i'm sorry about that Jazzy.. i'm sure Matt will do what is right in the end.hey we kind of have the same names
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no way!!! i love this story... i hate having to wait so long to read on.. but its a part of the suspense i guess i hate all the fighting with Jacob and Adam.. but i wish Adam would just hurry up and give up the information already so things can go back to normal... is Ho-o in prison or something, why has she not spoken to them since that fateful night?? sigh... I LOVE THIS STORY
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finally.... wen can i expect the next chapter... #eager
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:'( ........ .......
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CHAPTER THREE Two weeks had passed since Torîq’s break up with Matt and things had taken a turn for the worse. Instead of becoming sullen or pathetically depressed like most individuals would have been after a break-up, Torîq had thrown himself deeper into his character. He was blatantly hurtful whenever he spoke and everyone except VJ was on the receiving end of his insults. “Alright, what’s going on?” Janique asked one evening as they sat down for dinner. “What are you talking about moth
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Ch 34: The Northern Army
jazziebabe commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 34: The Northern Army
**deep sigh** I'm elated that Jacob is back and that Adam now has his reason to go on.. I am very angry with Jacob for what he did and i have forgiven him only because i think he is the powerful mage.. well him and Adam anyway.. they're gonna rock that war hard !!! I HOPE -
A beautiful story... and this is how it ends??? OMG.. i'm in tears... deep in tears :'(
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i implore you to write on!!! i love this story!
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CHAPTER TWO “What happened?” Ms. Lopez asked. She was the Jackson’s housekeeper; she was also their babysitter when the first two kids were younger but now that Jessie and Torîq were old enough to stay in the house alone she just saw to the preparation of meals during the day. “I got in a fight,” VJ said smiling. He was followed into the kitchen by a frowning Jessie. “And I suppose that is something to be happy about?” Jessie asked taking a frozen icepack from the fridge. There was always o
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I am all in favor of this story being continued.. it'd make for an awesome read
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Ok.. wats going on here??? where is here rest of the chapters... P.S anxiously waiting!!
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Ch 33: Taking It to the Skies
jazziebabe commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 33: Taking It to the Skies
WWWOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!! That's all i can say rite now, just wow.. -
His life is good Torîq had everything he wanted and then some, loving parents, loving siblings and Matt his adorable boyfriend (this was added bonus) and he was well on his way academically. Little did he know that his life would take a drastic turn for the worse. Can he and Matt weather the worse or will they end becoming just another 'has been'
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CHAPTER ONE When it came to life and the goodness of it, Torîq Jackson had it pretty good. He grew up in a two-storey four bedroom house with Janique and Victor Jackson his parents, Jessie Jackson his older sister and Victor Jackson Jr. his younger brother. He didn’t get as much attention as the others; it kind of went without saying that since he was the middle child he was completely mediocre, lacking the accomplishments of his sister Jessie and the charms of VJ as his younger brother was af
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Awesome!! i am on my way to becoming an author.. this will make my fifth post!! YAY
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I think college is definitely worth it. The other day a couple of my classmates and i were chatting with one of our lecturers and this topic kind of came up with regards to finding a part time job. we were noting how difficult it was especially with all our qualifications to get a part time jobbing as customer care rep or even as a cashier. And so we were questioning the essence of attending college. The lecturers argument -which makes perfect sense, is that not only will u be able to get a better paying job, when one attends college they actually come out smarter than they entered.. and to some extent this is entirely true. Even those persons who enter with a minimal amount of knowledge they leave with more than they actually entered with.
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That Mel, if cud get my hands on her... altho t's pretty decent of her not to squeal but boi oh boi is Connor in for a lot of blackmails..
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Not kool... wat is jesse playing at?? well i guess i may understand what with the whole in the closet thing... crap!!
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Definitely love this.. please hurry and write... #anxiouslywaiting
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Ch 29: A Deal with Death
jazziebabe commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 29: A Deal with Death
THis is awesome work!! i have a class early tomorrow morning and i couldn't stop reading!!! WOW is it done? I want more!!
