Patience my dear, i sure hope to answer a lot of those questions you just asked. And yes, that was their first kiss. As for who Sarah is, lets see how much we get to see her in the next few chapters. It's tough to link the flash stories while trying to keep them completely stand alone. takes a lot more effort than i had imagined, but i have taken up the challenge, and i will see it through. Just wish me luck. the next one will be posted as soon as i have Ch 4 written.
Wow! GA has made a great impression already!
so... i should probably just stay away?
lol jk
welcome to GA, it's always great to have new authors
Welcome to the madhouse we lovingly call GA!
Hope you have a blast! and looking forward to your writing!
hi there TL.
It's so so great to have a lurker become a member! believe me you'll not regret it! (i speak from experience. lol)
Hope you have a wonderful time here!
So so so great to see new writers come on board!
First of all, I love the name 'Rudra' (I love anything to do with Fire.. but... anyhow).
Secondly, I really like the fact that you've based this in India. I like the setting, the overcrowded Station, the dusty streets, the Autos and not to mention the Tinboxes we call Buses. lol
nextly, I am really interested to see how you plan on proceeding with this story.
(ps: Uh, i have gotten into trouble for speaking Bengali in Delhi, thinking they would not understand! this is NOT a crit, just a fun and embarrassing fact! lol)
Looking forward to the next one!
Thank you for the review, and i too dislike telling the same thing from two POVs. that's why i decided to move things along a bit. As for where the story is headed, i do not know. i doubt even Ty or Scott does. let's see where it goes. i can almost assure you that i am not going to drag it out unnecessarily. (or so i hope) lets see where their life takes them. the next one is done... should be out soon!
re-reading? you read the first chapter again? lol. uh, Sarah is... um... well sarah may very well be the daughter! The third one is almost ready! gimme a little time, should be up soon. Thanks for the review!
Whoa! That was evil and sweet of him!
uh, lemme explain!
evil: we all know why...
sweet: is when he said that he would never really do anything with the photos and just use them as leverage!
Tori's met her match!
you read it perfect Wayne. thanks for the review. just that, he's not 'widowed', just single. we might, and i stress on 'might' get to see what happened. I hope the bits come to me i would love to see this story go somewhere
Thank you KC. of course they have relationships. just that the dynamics are a little different. and attempting a new one is never easy... so, let's see where i can go from here. I just plan on snapshots of their lives
Thank you. this is my first time attempting anything like this. It's really nice to see that the emotions carried through. I have just the one other, but I am trying to write a few more. Any/all suggestions, comments and crits are welcome.
lol! i'd argue with ya! and i bet i can keep up! Like i said in the description, i will be trying to 'figure stuff out in their lives and, i believe we havent seen the last of Tyler or Scott. my intent is to keep all of them separate, but for people like you who would look for more answers, there will be a link... hopefully! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
i like your 'Ripping the band-aid off' approach!
Hmmm... so Coop is the bad guy now!
When will he be the 'Good guy' i wonder!
Is there any hope for us 'Wriggenter' fans? ( just wondering!)
Glad you liked it babe! life is about dodging the curve balls and not always do we manage to emerge without bruises! hurts? yes, definitely! It's who applies the salve that matters most, methinks! thanks
yay! you liked it! Thanks to you i keep writing... lol as for the bittersweet, well, you know i am a hopeless romantic! can't really end it in a complete tragedy! my fingers wont allow me!
Tyler stood alone in the semi darkness, silently sipping his tea; trying to soothe his throat for he had yet to perform another set when Rhea was done with hers. He was having a tough time not looking at the man that had been showering him with attention for the past six weeks.
Stop thinking about him! He chided himself. He knew he shouldn’t, he couldn’t, not with the pair of arms he had to disentangle himself from every night. But the heart wants what the heart wants.
‘Ty!’
Tyler squee
Tyler and Scott start off sharing Melanie as person in common. It doesn't take long till Mel takes a back seat and sparks begin to fly. What happens when these two men take chances in their lives? Each chapter is a flash fiction piece unto itself so watch as they TRY TO ...
Logan, hmmm???
Nice to meet him! and yes! definitely Excited! like i said.. I look forward to you writing more!
(i promised myself i wasnt going to start an unfinished one! Damn you J! :P )
can't wait for more!
(can i sweet talk you to give the plans for this one? )
oookay, So, how did Charlie like the tuna? u left us hanging there!
and Wade and Rick Jr? another sweet couple? i hope so!
I do like Scott some more! '...spil you rotten.' lol
I read, fullstop!
chaptered, non-chaptered... doesnt mater, really!
But i will have to agree that mostly, in longer stories, chapters are required!
as for writing, uh, well... I do prefer shorter ones, because
a) I am lazy,
b ) I am easily distracted
c) I lose the flow!
so... if i can write it, or at least outline it in a single sitting, i wouldnt mind writing multi-chaptered stories. (or so i hope!)
Hey there,
ALways good to have more readers, and authors on the site.
as for the chatroom error, just try again sometime, that error shows up for all of us from time to time.
or just make a few posts in the forums, and after you've made 5 (not counting the games and humour forums), you'll have all the features of this site available to you.
hope you have good time here on GA!
cheers!