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Wow! You're really building these two up for the long haul... aren't you? Wonder what twist you'll have in the last chapter that would justify what u said abt Coop in the beginning!

FINALLY! sheeesh! for such a level headed guy, what does he do? he falls flat on his ass! lol I am sooo not gonna let u rest! comeon Wayne... give us the next one already!

ROFL! Thanks Marky! they're really awesome!

:o I'm not going to let YOU kill Coop Jian! :o Pls pls pls make him alright!!! please?? pretty please??

huh.. whaa...? oh! YAY uh, oh and.. i talk too! okay...

I really liked it too! Fun story. Liked how your portrayed the differences between the boys, and their attitudes. I like stories which has dialogues that tell more of the story than the descriptions you had a wonderful balance! would be looking forward to Nate/Joaquin story! remember you promised!

WOW! there are so many i cant even begin ti name... but... here are a few Ella Fitzgerald: Desafinado Love is like a never-ending melody Poets have compared it to a symphony A symphony conducted by the lighting of the moon But our song of love is slightly out of tune Rufus Wainwright: Hallelujah There was a time you let me know whats really going on below, but now you never show it to me, do you? (and) Remember when I moved in you; the holy dark was moving too, and every breath we drew was Hallelujah Moths: Jethro Tull ( Heavy Horses) I just LOVE this song The leaded window opened to move the dancing candle flame And the first Moths of summer suicidal came. And a new breeze chattered in its May-bud tenderness --- Sending water-lillies sailing as she turned to get undressed. And the long night awakened and we soared on powdered wings --- Circling our tomorrows in the wary month of Spring. Chasing shadows slipping in a magic lantern slide --- Creatures of the candle on a night-light-ride. Dipping and weaving --- flutter through the golden needle's eye in our haystack madness. Butterfly-stroking on a Spring-tide high. Life's too long (as the Lemming said) as the candle burned and the Moths were wed. And we'll all burn together as the wick grows higher --- before the candle's dead. The leaded window opened to move the dancing candle flame. And the first moths of summer suicidal came to join in the worship of the light that never dies in a moment's reflection of two moths spinning in her eyes. Midnight Rider: Allman Brothers' Band Well, I've got to run to keep from hidin', And I'm bound to keep on ridin'. And I've got one more silver dollar, But I'm not gonna let 'em catch me, no, Not gonna let 'em catch the Midnight Rider. And I don't own the clothes I'm wearing, And the road goes on forever, And I've got one more silver dollar, But I'm not gonna let 'em catch me, no Not gonna let 'em catch the Midnight Rider. And I've gone past the point of caring, Some old bed I'll soon be sharing, And I've got one more silver dollar, But I'm not gonna let 'em catch me, no Not gonna let 'em catch the Midnight Rider. Very special songs, for very diff reasons and i am addicted to them Uh, i have plenty more, but i'll just stop now!

I really liked it! Like how you described the little things without inserting unnecessary melodrama. Thanks for the treat.

Wow. Thank you for such a detailed review. To the first point you raised: Yes, it is a story about taking risks. But, what i wanted to portray was the fact that Mike had actually done his homework, thanks to Ian, and even if Andrew didn't meet him in London, he had a back-up plan. Mike had planned this meticulously and it wasnt a heat of the moment decision in anyway for him. So, if not anything else, i thought that was a good thing that youngsters would gather from the story. As for the second point: It's not really random for the sake of randomness. it's just random thoughts that raise their heads in the context. neither you nor I can claim we have regular streamlined thoughts. so, that was what it was about. Oh, and Pat is just a friend, not very important, so Mike didnt want to waste words. I'm really happy that i could make you feel the different emotions that Mike was going through. That was sort of the intention. I do like Mr. Hunter a lot, really. as for Andrew, oh well, he's just a prince in a shining armour. The lady on the plane and the gatekeepers were just not worth it for him to spare words and counter, so he just ignored them as much as he could. And yes, like you pointed out, i thought it would be a journal entry, but then i realised people wouldn't really understand a lot if it was, so, i changed it to a letter form instead. (that is sort of based on my own style of writing letters to self, and i really dont know the technicalities of it) Thank you for your thoughts. I wanted this to have certain flaws, certain gaps, and leave a certain questions unanswered. mainly because it was written by someone who is sort of learning to breathe on his own for the first time, sort of. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Huh? soooo, jeremy has a boyfriend too! Can't wait to hear Sam playing and then possibly making sweet music with the boy that keeps dreaming about music? sorry, if that was too bad a joke! Waiting for the next one!

Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday Dear John....Happy Birthday to you!

Awesome! perfectly said!

OUCH!

Awesome MArky!! you got it just right!

Wow. Thank you for the nice words and you know how much your message was appreciated. I ma so glad i could bring back (hopefully good) memories of the people that were close to you. I think people we love and lose hold a special place in our hearts and just make us stronger when we think we're falling behind, dont you think? Thanks for the review!

thank you. Oh, and the traditions, yes.. its always fascinating to know new ones. Isnt it?

I cried, again.. and then smiled. I love how Silver can accept painful things so well. he's so so strong! WOW! a person like him.... just wow! Tony is hurting, and so is Ariel, but them dealing with pain is so diff from how Silver deals with it. I've said this before, but i love how he can see the brighter side of things in the most dire of situations! *sigh*

KNUCKLES!!!! trust you to start a thread about sonic! The trailer is good.. gonna check out more later Rouge!

lol. I ditto Stu on this one Wayne! we need longer chapters! Ted and Rick Jr's problems are going to be dealt with, what about Scott and Charlie's? I hope His mum conks him on the head and tells him what he was supposed to 'say' to Scott! But. yeah, i dont blame him all that much. he's as confused as ever, and Scott could have been a little clearer! *sigh* Oh well, Till the next one, Cheers!

Thank you.

thank you for making this even possible. I am pretty sure they will last me my lifetime. It was so cathartic to put them down on papaer though!

Thank you Sweetheart. Yes, he means a great deal to me, Like i said, he made me what i am today. Glad I could express that!

It was his 78th birthday. He had just been discharged from the nursing home, and brought home the day before. By the time I reached his house, he’d shaven, bathed and changed into the new t-shirt my mum had bought for him. It wasn’t just his eyes that lit up when he saw me. He’d actually risen from the chair and opened the main door, calling out to my Grandma that he recognised the knock. I did have one! I still do. And there are just two... well, now just one person in the world that rec

I never felt like I wanted to express this, ever felt the need to say it, to write them down, to... Maybe i was just trying to keep it in me? who knows.. but... here goes: