Frostina

What's so wrong about what happened to Owen that hurts Dan so much??? Please, please let him be okay soon... Loved it.. and honestly, it didnt help quenching the apprehension... bah!! More intrigues that ever now... Write faster!!

It's such a beautiful story... Love and its definition! Awesome!

It's coming along so fast!! yay! awesome stuff !! i'm re-reading the whole thing over... missed it for sometime.. he he

U better bot kill him!! u dare not!! Matt!! the super matt WILL save him!!! yay!! i know he will.. He will right?? waiting!!!

OOOH!! nice... more coming??? when??? I like the pair of them...

Have a GREAT one this year!! Happy Birthday!!

YES!! Also love Ian Anderson as a musician... Jethro Tull rocks... then there is Dylan, Oscar Lopez, Metallica well u get the point! oh oh.. and not to forget Karajan!

Actually wasn't talking about Paul's POV. since the story is in third person, u can drop in a few snippets of what's going through paul's mind tho rite? That's what i meant actually...

Jason is BACK with Polished and shiny soccer cleats.... And Peter with is Starched and polished Gi!!! Soccer boy and Karate kid... YAY!!!

YAY! another story in the third person.... They're always great!! Having said that, since u r writing in the 3rd person, why not a little more from Paul as well?? i mean we r looking at Karl and his misery... Its great that Paul is doing so well, i mean we don't HAVE to know the details of his personal life and his history of getting to where he is now... I mean a little about what he is feeling and how he was shocked into a stutter at seeing karl after all these years u know... Since u said this is gonna be a short story, it'll be nice to get to know both sets of emotions instead of just one. Huge Grey Eyes!! **sigh**

Firstly Stu.. Its not that i don't think Dan's death is bad! its just that I think it'd have been much much more painful for both the characters if they were pitched against each other... So, I'm a romantic, Sue me!!! And I agree with Andy... I too would think the story lacks a bit of Matt and Dan's feelings when they fall in "like" ad have their feelings reciprocated. it'll help us get into the minds of the characters... Also, I know that you understand the fantasy world where Ailarha exists.. (I mean of course u do. You created it after all...) But its a little confusing for the readers, for me at least. can u elaborate the workings of the magical kingdom a little more? or do u think that it will take away the suspense? Anyway. Waiting for the next installment as always...

Thanks.. He he..

I agree!!! Oh my!! Why are all the pretty ones unavailable??? Can't even start to name... here's me!! On my Best friend's wedding And, On vacation!

Just One fan?? r u crazy?? Well, now u at least have two self proclaimed fans.. No seriously, thats simply not true! I agree with Anya you know... People like me are simply lazy!! (or in my case forgetful as i keep reading... and move to the next story) The Interlude's gotten me kinda confused tho... What's happening?? Waiting for the next chapter!

All the best! And do take care!!

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Hope you get over ur writer's block soon.....

I just finished reading it..... Loved it and cant wait for u to write more stories...or rather upload them fro us to read! special mention: the part where Scott takes Runes picture with his aura drawn in! WOW!!!

Nearly all the time... till I'm so tired that i'm shuffling around like a Zombie! (In college, we had a routine.... wake up make love go to sleep....wake up make love go to sleep....wake up make love eat go to sleep.... old habits die hard but both of us had to squeeze WORK in there somewhere...)

Milo!!! from With Trust... I wish he was straight though!!!... **swoon**

I wish i could stop checking every day! I end up re-reading the story! Nelson and Milo shouldn't be left hanging b/w land and water and Luke... oh Luke!!! Please Dom, if u are listening, have mercy on us impatient souls!!

Ya... i sorta saw that... Luke is still hanging! but Milo has me chewing my nails with anticipation....I guess i am not a very patient person.. so i keep checking almost everyday... Frost

Hi! I stumbled across DomLuka's stories... I dunno from where... and now i am completely addicted.... I keep re-reading them... again and again and again... But i guess thats what addiction is right?? I love all his stories and somehow "With trust" tugged at my heart! BTW, Is that story complete? (i dont want it to be). Frostina