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Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Oh Conner, I love David, and he is a sweet man, he's driven by his love for his husband. So glad you're enjoying it so far and note to self, need to put a disclamier next time. Again I'm thrilled you are reading it Kim -
Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Conner!!!!!! My long lost friend, how are you?Thank you. I'm hoping you take a look Hello My Name is... and tell me what you think...Iz excited Kim -
I was actually encouraged to write by reading other's story. I was a bit obsessive if I must say so myself. I never read a story and not post a comment, it just feels weird to me..LOL I guess because I know I much time and effort goes into it. I once considered myself a professional reader, because as I read a chapter I have a pen/pencil in hand jotting down all the parts I like and want to comment on, that way I don't miss anything. I missed a chapter once and the author PM'ed me to let me know a chapter was updated, saying she missed my awesome comments. After doing so much reading and seeing how much effort goes into it I decided I wanted to give back and try my lot at it, and I've loved it every since... My stance is "comments fuel the writer's soul and makes this thing so much fun", and as Jammi mentioned it's excited to get notifications that you have reviews it's like opening a gift at Christmas, can't wait to see what's inside. Thanks so much, it can't get any better than this...
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Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Merci, KC.Seriously love the fact that you stuck it out with me. I know you understand, sure we write for ourselves, but we don't share for nothing. As I read eariler the reviewers are our/my heros, keeps me going and reviews coming from another author, one who not only takes the time to read,but also post a review is awesome! -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Yes, Ava for the win!!! Thanks so much Nettie Poo, so happy you enjoyed the story, the wedding and Christian and David journey back to each other. I did some research and yes, a person can subconsciously choose not to remember painful memories, so that's what the doctors think Chris is doing, but all is well in the Courtier/Beck household, Not to mention the Willliams household/ Tag and Jimmy ain't to shabby either...MWAH, Kim -
Creative Writing Activity #2: Show and Tell
Naptowngirl replied to Renee Stevens's topic in Writer's Circle
I can't lie. I wrote this as soon as we got the assigment, was just too chickened to post it, but here it is short, not sure about sweet. If it's not obvious, I'm showing the letter. ~*~*~ The night air was damp and still, no wind blowing whatsoever. The only breeze I was privileged to was what I created as I sat on the porch swing. Beads of perspiration glistened across my bare chest; there wasn’t a part of my body that wasn’t moist. I stared off into the twilight sky my mind littered with thoughts of him. Would I wait for him? Of course I would. I would wait forever if he asked me to. This afternoon, Scott and I said good-bye to each other at the train station. I felt like such a girl, crying like a baby…like I would never see him again. His arms felt strong around me and I felt safe in them as he held me tightly, whispering how much he loved me in my ear. I can still smell his breath; sweet, minty like spearmint gum with the sugar still in it. As he released me from his embrace he handed me an envelope and made me promise not to open it until midnight. With shaky hands and sweaty fingers I rip open the seal, my heart pounding within my chest, only he can evoke such emotions within me. The paper; heavy, thick the color of fresh pearls feels rough against the pad of my finger tips it’s as if I can feel the wood used to make it. It’s folded in three parts and as I lift the folded edge I can smell his scent; fresh citrus and woodsy. It’s not overwhelming, it’s just enough to make me miss him more. I close my eyes, inhaling deeply as I allow my fingers to trace over the raised lettering of his swift pen. The feel of the words and the thought behind them were just a profound as the actual words themselves. Why is this letter so important to me, you may ask, because it’s the first of many; our only means of communication until my man returns home. He’s so eloquent with words and a master with the pen, let me show you. My Love, By the time you read this I will be miles and miles away but in spirit I am there with you… -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Awww,Lisa, I'm gonna miss them too. And David after they made him the mode broke, so looks like Chris got the last one damn it. I have to say in the end I'm happy for Chris, he got everything he ever wanted, a loving family to call his own, great friends and he didn't have to relive the bad stuff that he had to endure to get there. It's almost like cheating. Thanks sooooo much for sticking with me during this journey. Your comments/reviews and compliments always made me smile and as I've said before comments fuel and make this writing thing so much fun. PS: They've got a girl :D -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
No Sweetheart, I don't think you were the only one crying during the wedding. I cried and I wrote it. I love weddings and I know the vows are important but so is the wedding. We need remember the vow we make and what it really means so when I did this I knew Chris and David had invited folks so I wrote it that way.So glad to see you made it and enjoyed it. I thought I saw you on the front row, chica looking good. Luv ya, Kim -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Stephen, you are sooo very welcome. Again it's I that should be thanking you. I love feed back, some call me a comment whore, and that's cool because I totally dig it. I love my characters they actually become real to me as well. I will miss Chris, David, Tag, Jimmy and the kids, but they to me are just put into a canister till I use them again, but they are never forgetten.Love the compliment as being a writer, I love doing it so glad you enjoy it. Kim -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Thank you so much, Krisz, I totally love your comments/reviews and you give me way too much credit...just saying.I'm truly a romantic at heart and I say people who love each other should be together. I love reaching the heart of the reader,being that it's my heart thats putting the words on canvas. Most of my stories are about falling in love regardless of how they met, with that being said the next story is not totally romance, but I promise the next one I do will be with you in mind I love request... Love ya back, Krisz and again thanks for sticking with me till the bitter end. Kim -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
I wont to thank you for reading and posting a review. I love doing this and it's readers like you that keep me going and make this stuff so much fun. Hope to see you on the battlefield, Mike, hopefully Kim -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Thanks Mr. RC always love your comments, and don't worry, I got ya. Totally digging your story by the way Christian is not hiding an affair, I just think it's easier for him not to remember the bad stuff that he had to deal with coming out, this way he's out, the damage has been done but he doesn't have to call it to memory, he can move on is that fair, probably not, but not everyone gets a do over. -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
unlikelyu, thanks so much, I always knew I could count on you and when you didn't leave a review, I wondered if all was well. By the chance of sounding like a broken record I must say comments fuel my soul and keeps me doing what I love to do. See ya on the next round...I hope Kim -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Yeppers life at the Courtier/Beck home seems to be going well. Despite Chris not regaining his memory, things seem to be moving right along. Christian found his place, taking care of his family. David getting a promotion and taking care of his family and then there's Ava, Ethan and Liam what more could he ask for?Thanks so much for everything. Kim:) -
Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Frosty, thank you, my dear, for sticking with me till the bitter end, and quiet as it's kept, I fell in love with them too.Again thanks for all the wonderful reviews. New story is up next week hope you read it and let me know what you think. Kim -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
You know, Nettie Poo, so people are so closed minded just like Marcie and still after talking to him, she still didn't budge.As I've said before, David is suffering here, but he's doing it with his chin up, being strong for his husband. I agree, Chris has made great strides since he left the hospital. Marcia's place is in Africa, there's not much positive she can bring to her son's life if she's not willing to accept him. So glad you are coming to the wedding, see ya there. Kim -
Okay, so did he or didn't he kiss Travis? he says no but everyone else says he did, but he did promise his mom he just touched him so... I really feel bad for Cole and for the life of me I never understand how people don't see what's going on under their noses. As a mother I would want my child to live with me, but I would also want him happy as well, and it appears Cole is going to miserable, and the whole step-dad thing is not sitting well with me, but we have to wait and see. I'm sure you've got a few tricks up your sleeve.
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Chapter 20 Hello My Name is Christian Beck...
Naptowngirl posted new chapter in Hello, My Name is...
The high pitched, demanding wails coming from the other room abruptly snatched Christian out of his sleep, causing him to spring up in a panic. The raspy cries were coming in short outbursts almost rhythmic in nature. He gasped, combing his fingers through his tangled hair while trying to gain some composure and catch his breath. His mind was a jumbled mess of sleepless nights and no matter how hard he tried to sort it all out the screaming in the background prevented that from happening. “D- 32 comments
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Scott, what does he want? I ask like you're going to blut it out. lol I know I have to wait till Monday, but damn. Gibby seems very optimistic about the police helping them, I sure hope he's right, it just seems way to easy. Poor Shelby, I know it's hard on her. Again what does Scott want? lol
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Vodka and OJ and I get's no invite, I thought you loved me Ryan... Super Sized Hugs coming your way.
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Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
unlikelyu, *waves* I love weddings, been to many and been married a few times myself, lol so glad you enjoyed it and was able to make it. My dear you are so welcome and I thank you for sticking it out with Christian, David and myself...you Rock, Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
unlikelyu, *waves* I love weddings, been to many and been married a few times myself, lol so glad you enjoyed it and was able to make it. My dear you are so welcome and I thank you for sticking it out with Christian, David and myself...you Rock, Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Thanks, Big Daddy, I'm in the yellow pages if you know of anyone getting married soon, send them my way Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Girl, I thought that was you...lol glad you enjoyed the wedding, I had a good time and yes, the vows were pretty on point. Funny as I read over the chapter I got all teary eyed too...lol Now go have a drink have two, there on the Boss... Seriously, Lisa I love your comments. Thanks for takimg the time to leave one. Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Awww, Krisz so glad you were able to attend. I love weddings.Your compliments warm my heart. So glad you could see what I see.... Review/comments fuel the writer's soul not to mention make me smile really big!
