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  1. Acedias
    Anyta! Was wondering when you would review I am glad you enjoyed as usual and glad I managed to push those emotional buttons of yours ... that is my aim after all hehe ... mostly sad/depressing ones again, but I am aiming to widen my range in the next chapter And I am glad you agree a kiss wasn't right ... I did have one roughly sketched out but it just wasn't the right 'feel'. As for your other musings well I cant say
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    Awww shucks! What a nice review I'm glad u enjoyed it! More soon ...
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    Yeah I overused that plot device a little hey. You'll be glad there isn't one in my next chapter! Glad you liked it trauma and all
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    Thank you Cynaira! Yeah I think its kinda exciting that things are starting to happen. I can feel the collective 'finally' from readers but things from here will still be baby steps ...
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    Took me only 125k words to get there too! hehe ... still ... a long journey to go from here but hey .. Thanks for the review!
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    Hi Nephylim you always say such nice things! Yeah it was a pretty black scene all round hey ... Whats it gonna be like between em in the light of day but ...
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    Haha ... actually the chapter plan did include a kiss, but in the end I pulled it. While writing the scene on the beach it just didnt feel like a moment for something passionate like that ... wasnt the right mood. So had to delay that bit
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    Yup that about sums up the whole story really Hmmm I dunno about SOON exactly but definitely loves getting closer now hey! Thanks for the review
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    Wow u r poetic aren't you! Im not sure i get all of what you are saying but I definitely love the sentiment
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    Yup some actual PROGRESS in my main couple getting closer finally hehe ... But still more to find out hey ... Thanks for the hugs
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    Yay! Thank you my friend
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    “Wait, wait, wait,” Jill interrupted, holding up her hand before Haze had managed to finish his first sentence. She sat bolt upright on her seat, Blake observed, hawkish and imposing, her voice stern and her eyes hard. “Why were they doin’ a swim-through in the first place?” she demanded. Everyone turned back to Haze. “Because they wanted to?” he answered, sardonically, defensively. “How should I know?” “And you let them?” she shrilled. There was the sound of people shifting uncom
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    Wow what an awesome review thanks cynaira! I am so glad u like my story ... And especially chuffed by the 'brilliant' part. Hehe ... Well today u r in luck cause I've finished chapter 18 and will post as soon as I get home! Edited and reviewed it at work all day instead of doing real work lol ... Thanks again for taking the time to review.
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    So this mean u r all set up in the US? Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed the tension. I reckon there'll be some of Haze's side in the next chapter and some 'communication' of sorts too ... As well as these two can communicate neway. The mystery dad bit keeps getting booted along down the isle to make way for other stuff ... It isn't forgotten, just drawn out! Anyway great to hear from u and I hope the move is treating you well
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    Thank you at least someone's not rush me hehe ... And I can promise you with the rate I am progressing, this story isn't going to finish anytime soon!
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    I am honoured! it's your basement I'm worried about. It sounds scary ... Anyway I'm writing I'm writing!
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    Wow I'm super honored thanks sumjenta I've already knocked out the first few thousand words to the next chapter so hopefully it won't take so long to update this time around, but it's hard to estimate cause sometimes it just takes forever to get a bit right. Have to work harder at keeping you guessing next time if u figured that out so easily neway thanks for reviewing ... And especially for registering just so u could!
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    A New Life

    Acedias commented on Acedias's story in Fiction

    Oh dear! I've done that before myself ... nothing worse than being cranky and tired with a full day of work ahead of ya. I suppose it doesn't help either that the story is a bit tense at the moment too! I am super glad you liked it though. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me more soon!
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    Um ... yeah ... sure ... why not? The next chapter you say ...
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    A New Life

    Acedias commented on Acedias's story in Fiction

    I dunno how long it will take to write ... so hard to predict sometimes I write heaps in a short time sometimes nothing comes I will try to get it out sooner, last time was too slow huh. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. Dont be mad at me there are still so many more cliffhangers in my story plan ... save some getting mad space for those
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    Thanks man I am glad you are enjoying it (even though you are still in the 'falling' stage hehe) I am writing I am writing!
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    Hmm ... with all these people agreeing with Nephy I may just have to change the story around a bit. Can't have people guessing the next bit correctly now can we. Must maintain the surprise!
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    That did cross my mind but I thought if I left it another chapter without anyone knowing if Haze was okay people would be unimpressed actually thats just where the story naturally finished ... i dont always have control over how it goes hehe ... you raise some other interesting points but I won't address them, but should do in the next chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing
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    Waaaah :...( ... but yeah I know I keep leaving off somewhere dramatic ... its not always intentional (okay most of the time it is) gotta keep people hooked
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    Argh! All those caps are hurting my ears! Hmmm yeah a lot of questions I have to answer in the next chapter huh Jim ... and since when would you settle with Blake and Derrick as a match up? I seem to remember you writing me that you hated that character! Anywayz, there is not sailing off into the sunset just yet for anyone ... too much to explain first more soon
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