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Thanks for your review Sam! Hmm if you screamed at them to stop but and they did, I'd have no story!! It'd be blake: hey look haze I fancy the pants off ya, how about it? Haze: sure let's f**k. The end. That's not a story! (btw the irony of lamenting lost/wasted happiness then you try to sell my Xbox? What about my happiness!)
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Hmmm ... hospital eh? Yes ... Except No ... There's no doctor in Kulibari Bay did I not mention that? Its serviced by a flying doctor locum. Nearest hospital is a 1000kms away. So I cant put him in the hospital. Anyway if hes unconscious in the hospital how can I torture him? Or ... come to think of it ... even write the story since its entirely from his perspective? A coma scene just wouldn't work. No its a nice idea ladyPink and I thank you for suggesting it but No hospital scenes are foreseeable
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Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
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Hey RC thanks for the review glad you like my character development which is a little slow I know so glad for your patience ... I will keep it up and hope u continue to read
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Haze's GF was waiting in the wings for a while huh, thought I better bring her out to add some complexity and her friend to add some more complexity hehe ... I was planning on getting the bar scenes done in this chapter but it didn't happen that way and now we have at least 5 characters worth of tension and crisscross fancying and hidden desires all you have to do is add alcohol and mix in some medication and surely somethings gotta happen hey?
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More already? Sheez I was gonna take a break for at least a couple of days and play Xbox!
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Aren't we all? Fear's a bitch Thank you for the review sir! (ps I'll let u in on a secret, I hate unhappy endings)
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Hey dude, thanks for your review. I'm glad you like my story and you like long stories cause I am taking forever to get somewhere with mine hey ... just posted a new chapter so hope you enjoy!
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Hello hello! Hmmm ... new chapter ... Chapter 14: Surprise ... cause its got a surprise in it (like I dont try to put a surprise in all of em ) Story Link Anyway its after midnight and I gotta go to bed. Hope you like it! Acedias
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Blake’s trembling right hand was buried inside his pocket, fingers caressing the tiny plastic bubble with the silvery foil that lay there, safely tucked away. It was calling to him and he touched it compulsively, longingly. Its enticing presence promised him relief. Relief from the pain, relief from the bad things he was feeling; an end to his suffering. Thus far, he had resisted the siren’s call, despite a hellish night of anxious dreams and restless sleep. However now, standing in front of
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Yay!! Here I was thinking u didnt get thru it ... I guess things do seem pretty bad between them but I got a feeling things will be different in the next chapter ... I mean I am writing it after all. As for hazes mum ... Maybe she just gets angry ... Anyway more soon. Thanks for your review!!
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You'll find out in good time .... Hehehe ... Can't spoil things too early thanks for reviewing!!
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That's a nice summary of my characters ... And yeah i can see you can guess where I am going with it eh? They have to help each other huh? Sooner or later ... Maybe .... (just cause u love maybes so)
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Wow a reread! No greater compliment to a writer!! Thanks Dark
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Yeah it was a bit depressing this one huh? Don't worry I like happy endings too except not sure about your basement ... O.o ... What would you do with my boys in your basement exactly? Sounds monstrous monster33 hehe
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Shucks adamo ... You are too kind ... Making me blush. Hehe glad you like and I promise more soon ... when I write it!
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Hey ya anyta ... Read neph's review on the bus trip to work and now reading yours under the table at work hehe glad you liked! Yeah there wasn't much haze and Blake interaction this time but more is definitely on the way.. Maybe even more conflict too! Except I'm not sure how I could pack more conflict in at the moment ... Pretty much everyone is fighting. Except Jill .... Hmmm ... I wonder who she can fight with? (joking). Still I'm feeling that the next chapter has to get just a little bit worse for the boys before it gets better ... Maybe ... For now XBOX!! Yay!!
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Hiya Nephylim! Yay! Beat anyta hehe ... Yeah lotta shit happened huh so that's what I called it. Hazes mum too Huh? Course almost all emotional dysfunction is parental in origin so it shouldn't come as too big a surprise ... Don't worry but they will get outta this situation sooner or later ... I don't like unhappy endings!
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Phew! Another Chapter done ... I called it shit, but its not shit. I hope. Anyway story link here: A New Life Thanks for reading and for the encouragement!
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“Um ... son?” Blake snapped opened his eyes, forcing a reluctant mind to surface and to deal with the outside world once more. The first thing it noticed was that his breathing had slowed, back to a normal pace. He felt a great deal of relief for this. It meant that his panic attack was now over. “Err ... ya okay son?” Obviously, the ringing in his ears had abated too. He could clearly hear that someone was talking to him and the words were even making sense. He turned towards the voice
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Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Awesome a new reader! Can't wait to hear what you think as you read. So much has happened since back then. Aren't I happy you've started reading too! And giving me feedback ... -
Thanks Victor! Glad you are enjoying it so far ... nearly ready with chapter 13 ... just need a few more finishing touches! thanks for reading and for posting
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YAY!
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Hey-ya - thanks for reviewing! I'm glad my emotional descriptions seem realistic to you. Its a big part of my writing ... so huge compliment thanks Another chapter is almost finished, just editing. But ... um ... well ... I have to be honest it ain't exactly 'positive'. It'll get more positive I'm sure ... just not in the next chapter ...
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Well that was a subdued review by your standards bugeye *cries* .... (joking) ... Thanks of course
