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Sorry, I repeated a post… chalk it up to being late on Sunday after changing to Summer light saving time (that happened here today).
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Why me? Who may be with him now? Why me? What if…? Of course not! I don´t know where I am at now Again? What if not…? Angst Jealousy Pain Anxiety Rejection Losing the way Sadness Because it is my turn Somehow, it is always me Because I am lucky What if not? Of course! I am on my way Anything important is changing What if? Desire Pleasure Goals that are shared A path in company always in the know where I am coming from and where I
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Short and intense, just like life. I’m with @Carlos Hazday, let yourself be hugged! Thanks for sharing!
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Northmann being all nice? I'd find that creepy as hell too! Nice chapter, I'm going to use one of my favorite expressions when dealing with your writing: "a bit too short for my liking!". Thanks @Carlos Hazday
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Thanks, @Parker Owens, love that you find time to comment.
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Loneliness without being alone Pain without a body Fear without phobia Karma without hope Light with shadows Matte darkness Solid air Dry Water Unstoppable strength Unavoidable destiny Inevitable fate Unspeakable drive Elusive understanding Turmoil
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Interesting, I fled to the South trying to avoid Fallas as best I could... and came into the desert: my family tells me it's been raining sand for three days... Her in Southern Spain the sun is trying to get through the clouds, so was the new CJ-fix a very welcome change of lazy routine. Thanks, @Carlos Hazday!
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It’s not easy to be in a situation like this, at least that’s my experience. This feeling, the world is crumbling around and no matter how hard I want to help I cannot and don’t have another one ready to move into… Thanks for letting us read your thoughts, @Lux Apollo
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So many feelings condense here… Taking an idea from @Headstall, let me hug your younger you. Thanks for sharing such personal creations.
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Thanks for your comment, AC, it gives a new insight into the poem: never thought of the Bible when writing.
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Reading your dances has indeed been a treat in itself. Thanks for writing, for crafting these beautiful verses and sharing them with us. I’ve enjoyed them all, don’t keep us waiting for too long to post more of your poetry!
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Tomorrow, today… any time is a good time to enjoy happiness and beauty. Again, a nice dance with the most beautiful reflection of intimacy possible. Way to show how to share, how to connect bodies and minds. Thanks for sharing your art, Parker.
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Thank you, Parker. Sometimes I guess I write just to remind myself it does get better!!!!
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After the struggle is finally over, all I see right before my eyes is scorched land. Looking forward, though, I am most definitely certain, this barren landscape around is but life just waiting to happen. After love is gone, all that remains is memories and heartache, a barren heart which I know well, a barren heart which is not dead, but recovering, resting, healing. When the heartache finally subsides, I am most definitely certain, this once barren heart
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… whatever that plan could be!
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As usual, a treat on its own. I’m love how the story is developing. Our CJ always surprises me with his maturity and his insights. Interesting to see how Yevgeni accepts his defeat, really noble of him. I have identified with a sentence by our CJ: “home was just another word for Owen and Liebe, not for Everhope.” It doesn’t get better than this: such a warm feeling… thanks for the treat, @Carlos Hazday, love your writing (quite hopelessly, by the way)
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I’ve had this poem in my backlog for a couple of days, now that I’ve read it, I simply regret not having done it before. Parker, you have written a dance, I find though you have painted with words: the way you describe the movements, the positions of the lovers is just beautiful. Thanks!
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Here and now, carpe diem, focused on what really is, not on remote pipe-dreams. An unstoppable smile whenever Here and Now bring peace, love, harmony: How easy is it to accept what the heart yearns for. An ineffaceable grimace whenever Here and Now bring chaos, pain, sadness: How hard is it to accept what cruelly scorches the soul. Equilibrium. To not lose yourself in peace, love, harmony: to keep your hand steady on the helm. To not flounder in s
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Not exactly a cliffhanger, but what happened to those extra 5000 words you mentioned in some parallel universe? Really good chapter, it's always a joy to see Northman sweat... Thank you, Carlos!
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Call me whichever names you want, but please, Carlos, can I be a fly in one of the walls of Chipper’s, Ajax’s and Tank’s room next time? Ceiling is ok too…. 🤣🤪
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Thanks for your comment, @Parker Owens!
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Thank you, @AC Benus!
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How I wish I were… unchangeable, immutable, immense, stable. Solid in my solitude, impassible, endless. How I wish I could live like a rock in the vast ocean of time, an anchor to every move, a motor to every stillness. Although, who knows, maybe everything that moves a rock might perhaps stir the apparent lithic immutability with a vertiginous slowness able to alter a universe without changing a single thing. How I wish I were a stoic rock to patiently
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Carlos, at the risk of repeating myself, kudos for Harley. You’ve crafted such a beautiful soul here… I just miss him. On another note, way to weave yourself again i you story!!! Rereading CJ-verse for the ——time, just plain in awe of the universe (CJ-verse) you’ve created. Waiting for a trip to my now-hometown of CJ and crew, I’d so love to show you all around…
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It will be nice to have him back, even for just a 30 sec monologue 😝😊
