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Me too, a greedy sod, of course! 🤣🤣
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Loved the chapter, Carlos! Thanks for another happy Friday,
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Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
JACC commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
I didn't find it awkward at all, nice game with a nice twist by getting Kaplan to distract Cyrus. I really loved the after game party for two, you managed to describe a real cozy scene near the fireplace. Thanks for this awesome chapter, @astone2292- 24 comments
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So good… thanks for the treat, @Carlos Hazday. My list of places to visit, eat at, drink on etc. keeps on growing… All the best after a nice Mediterranean paella on the shore! 🥂😋
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Thanks for this chapter, @Lux Apollo, the reflection in it shows a great deal of depth in the character, a great depth in the person you created and are sharing with us.
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Loved the chapter, Carlos, nice way to start the weekend!
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I like how you describe the process pictured in this poem: restarting in order to run smoothly, a learning moment. Thanks for your comment, AC
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W. H. Auden’s blues in the back of my mind, all clocks stand still, time has stopped. That love could have lasted forever, but it did not. Time and love, both meant forever, both, though, ending in a flash, both able to warmly simmer along, both pushing and pulling, till they broke. We stopped all the clocks, we cut off the telephones, we silenced the pianos, we put out every star. Although, and this is the wonder of lost love, each of us, alone, broken, ca
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So beautiful to see both Devyn and Jason enjoying themselves and doing everything for their partners. Thanks, @Yeoldebard
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Loved the story and the way you put a nice school day story together with some teaching about coral reefs and environment. Again a beautiful job, @Carlos Hazday
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Nice feel-good chapter. Loved the expression “third eye” 🤣
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To be one with the air, unravaged by summer; thirsting for freshness, eager for peace. The salt of life cauterizes unscathed the perpetual wound inflicted by lost love. Like salt, I wish to absorb into my core every shadow around, to dissolve, infinite, in the Light. In the Light I will be able to be permanently, to flow anonymously, gleaming though invisible. From the Light that I am I will be sheltering my people all along their ways from the
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Getting two chapters on the same day is a treat in itself, seeing how the story of Tani and Dante is developing is just fascinating. Good writing, fantastic storytelling… More, please!
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Thank you, @AC Benus, I’m humbled by the sensations my writing is able to raise… I love the image you describe, maybe I’ll “recycle” it into a poem…
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Like a light once so bright, I will vanish in a memory without anger nor regret, without missing nor being missed. From afar, my new home, I will enjoy the happiness once shared and find my way through the turmoil of life in solitude.
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Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
JACC commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
I’m just getting a tad too attached to this world: Vincent, Mason, Kaplan, Cyrus… they’re just too good to want to miss them. Thanks, @astone2292, for creating this Vince-verse! -
A beautiful chapter, @Lux Apollo, thank you!
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Thanks for my CJ-fix just before starting the weekend. Our boy is going places, nothing new here. Great interaction with Sir Kent, who is sure turning into quite a mentor (golf-wise too!). How can a chastised Northman still sound so full of "assholishness"*? Good job, @Carlos Hazday, looking forward to the next chapter. *I've borrowed the word from JP Crampton (thanks, @Mark Arbour)
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@Parker Owens, @AC Benus, thanks for reading: your comments are really an encouragement to keep on posting.
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A forest in Winter, steely cold the air as a new day is dawning. Light opens up a path through calm woods, light colors in harmony the gaze of the walker. Chest swelling in the cold breeze, the smells of the forest waking up your senses. In the swift slumber of silence, at dawn you finally find the seeds of light which will turn into a garden your wounded heart.
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So good to have you back, @Mark Arbour, thanks for the “Gap-fix”.
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I loved having the mischievous CJ back: the interaction with Peter Pure (seriously? PP? Pedro Puro? Seriously?) Priceless 🤣🤣🤣
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It seems birthdays with a 0 are such a big deal... Love how the last strophe sums everything up in a big "F U, I'm alive, deal with it" kind of way.
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Thanks, @Parker Owens, this poem was both self-criticism and a bit of wishful thinking, as you put it, a whole story in just a couple of lines.
