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  1. Phoenix1977

    After the storm

    Phoenix1977 commented on Phoenix1977's story chapter in After the storm

    You're very welcome. Right now I'm working on the second book and I hope to start publishing in a couple of weeks.
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    Epilogue

    Phoenix1977 commented on Phoenix1977's story chapter in Epilogue

    You're welcome. Thank you for reading.
  3. Phoenix1977

    Epilogue

    Phoenix1977 commented on Phoenix1977's story chapter in Epilogue

    You're welcome
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    So, first and foremost, Ebenezer Slutch lived. Two days after the events on Christmas day he got a call from the doctor in the hospital to come in for the results. The doctor told him about the cancer and before New Year Ebenezer had a MRI made to see how big the tumor was. It proved to be small and very well operable. They could even save all the surrounding structures like the nerves and blood vessels necessary to get an erection and orgasm. Two days after New Year Ebenezer was operated on. Im
  5. Phoenix1977
    Hi Connor, Thanks! But I wouldn't dismiss the story just yet. there's one more chapter :-)
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    “Oh, my head hurt” Ebenezer Slutch thought. He chuckled. He had fallen into a grave and was probably dead by now so the fact his head hurt was quite funny to him. Then he saw some light. It was a pale light like the light you see when the sun was coming up on a clouded day. It was weird because it almost seemed as if the light was coming from a crack in the curtains. But that was crazy, of course. Why would there be curtains in a grave? But still the light kept pulling at Ebenezer and he watched
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    Thanks.Yes, since the final chapter plays on Christmas Day I thought it would be fitting too :-)
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    Thank you very much.Hopefully you'll find a way to check the chapter next week, on Christmas Day.
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    The fog chilled Slutch to the bone. He never saw fog that behaved in this manner. It seemed to come from one place, directly behind the chapel in the cemetery, from where it spread over the rest of the graveyard. It resembled the artificial fog coming from machines in dancings and rock concerts, except that fog wasn’t this cold. Slutch felt increasingly uncomfortable and the cold didn’t have much to do with that. The things both Ghosts showed him had made quite an impact on him. His mind had tr
  10. Phoenix1977
    Size is something all gay men (and a lot of straight women) are constantly thinking about and "tiny" wouldn't really work in that context :-)
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    With a shock Slutch sat upright in his bed, clutching his chest with his hand. The pain in his chest was excruciating and for a moment Slutch was convinced he had a heart attack. Then he remember all the things the Ghost of Christmas Past had shown him and he knew it was not a heart attack although that didn’t please him much. A heart attack might have been preferable to feeling all the hurt again he had blocked out all these years. But he dreaded something else more. Something the Ghost had sai
  12. Phoenix1977
    Hi, Thanks very much. I try to keep as close to the original names as possible while still making it clear the characters are somewhat different from the originals. Next week we'll meet the Ghost of Christmas Present.
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    Of course Slutch was frightened after the spirit of Jacob Arsely had left. Not only had he learned his former business partner did not rest in peace but he was also promised to encounter three more ghosts before the night was over. Slutch didn’t know what he feared more: eternal damnation or the things these ghosts could do to him. He hadn’t realized it before but everything was dark. His TV was off as were all the lights in the house. But when he looked outside he saw all the shining Christmas
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    Hi,Thank you very much. I take it you already understood Bob Suckit is my version of Bob Cratchit from the original. Yes, in earlier stories some people already told me I should convert my measurements but since I'm Dutch and these are the measurements I'm used to this is what I'm going to stuck by Next Sunday chapter 2 will be available, showing us a lot of Ebenezer Slutch's past
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    Well, I guess you have to keep reading to see I think I definately managed to "gay it up"
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    Thank you very muchThe story is already done so every Sunday there will be an update with the conclusion on Christmas.
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    The first thing you need to know is that Jacob Arsely is dead. He’s been that way for 7 years already exactly today. And today is December 24th, Christmas Eve. But, although Arsely will play an important role in the things that will happen today he is not the man this story is about. This story is about his old partner, Ebenezer Slutch. Saying that Ebenezer Slutch is a hard man is the same as saying Attila the Hun was not so friendly and only the friendliest of people would ever describe Slutch
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    This story is an adaptation of the classic work “A Christmas Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Christmas” by Charles Dickens and a classic work of fiction. Any and all resemblances with people or events is purely coincidental. Those of you who ever read the original may notice I used sever of the characteristic phrases Charles Dickens used in the original story, like the first sentence in the first chapter. Also, like Dickens, I called the chapters "staves" which is an old word for "verse"
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    A modern version of a classic fairytale of Christmas
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    Hmm, so Harry and Draco are able to break memory charms now? I think a lot of wizards are going to find a problem in that so they'd better keep that a secret, maybe even for their friends and teachers. I really love this story and am always looking forward to new chapters. Too bad we have to wait so long between chapters :-) Still, keep it up, please.
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    Very nice story. Too bad though the two young men didn't have a chance to get to know each other. Can I suggest something? You might want to send a link to this story to the Trevor Project. Who knows? Maybe Jamie can save someone else's life as well?
  22. Phoenix1977

    Chapter 5

    Phoenix1977 commented on Foopy's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Very nice chapter. And I really want to "stay tuned" but please don't make people wait another year before the next chapter is released
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    Chapter 7

    Phoenix1977 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Nice one, once more. One thing I don't understand, though. Why stop here? Why not write more? I think more stories about Tony and Drew are just what Gayauthors needs
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    Tony's ice just got a little thinner. If Drew finds out he's been lying to him ..... I just don't want to be in Tony's shoes then. Did Drew's stitches hold during Tony's assault on his dick?
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    Chapter 5

    Phoenix1977 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5

    It seems to me Tony is risking all he wants to protect by going after Spade alone. If Tony kills Spade Drew will never forgive him and neither will he if Tony ends up hurt or killed. I understand why Tony is doing the thing he does but he's walking on very thin ice here. Loved the chapter. Wonderful story so far.
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