Phoenix1977
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Your chapters are both exciting and hot. I don't know what I like better, the sex scenes that make my dick ache or the conspiracy to get the three killed. Let's just say it's a very well written story and I'm sure that, after I reread it together with my boyfriend, we'll be havin some wild and mindblowing sex ourselves Keep it up!
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Are Kurt and Blaine the only singing gay men in Lima, Iowa or are there more students gay at McKinley?
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"Yes, do it to me! Deeper and harder! Really pound my ass with that dick of yours! I need to feel you cumming in me! Come on! Fill me up with your babymakers!" As you can see, the owner of this mind definately has a nice dream. Oh, it's not Santana or one of the other girls, by the way. No, the owner of this mind is a dude and a bad ass one at that. Whenever he walks around the halls of McKinley the lesser kids are running for the nearest exit. His muscles make him a force to reckon with
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Hi Connor,Yeah, a sequel is planned. I even sketched the rough storyline and determined the settings. However, I'm not sure which of my characters are going to be alive to feature in it yet. So I guess you'll have to wait a while to find out.
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Hi Connor,Glad you like the story so far.The baseball bat was actually used from the Dutch setting. Dutch shop owners aren't allowed to have a weapon in the store to defend themselves but a baseball bat is not considered a weapon. So a lot of shop owners have one of those. Maybe shop owners in the US are allowed to even have fire arms but I don't know about that. Besides, I think a gun shot would have seriously interfered with Jayden's getaway, even if bullets don't harm him. Truth is I'm not sure either Jayden or Arthur are impervious to bullets
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For a couple of days nothing out of the ordinary happened. Arthur finally got in touch with Jayden who claimed to be under the weather with something. They agreed on seeing each other next weekend when Arthur had a couple of days off. When Arthur hung up he sensed there was something else going on but he decided Jayden would have to tell him on his own terms. After all, they only went on a date once. In the hospital the proverbial shit had hit the fan. Samuel had told Arthur about his convers
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According to the latest data there are over 8 million people in New York City. Finding someone who doesn’t want to be found is virtually impossible. Finding someone you don’t know anything about is even harder. Phjierl did not understand why he couldn’t find Jayden. In Hell all he had to do was think about Jayden and he knew exactly where the Demon Prince was. He never considered the possibility that coming to earth would diminish his bond with Jayden. He walked aimlessly through Central Park
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Hi,You're definately welcome to come back.Last weekend I finished the last chapter of this story and started brainstorming on the sequel. So I think you have enough to read
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Ok, so what do you do when someone tells you he’s the Archangel Michael? Like everyone else Arthur burst with laughter. Apparently he was not the only one losing his connection with reality. “What is so funny” the man saying to be the Archangel Michael asked. “You expect me to believe you’re the head-angel? The angel who led the armies of Heaven against the rebel Lucifer” Arthur asked, suddenly realizing he shouldn’t know that. His upbringing wasn’t religious at all. A detail the man calle
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Chapter 3:Chains of Misery
Phoenix1977 commented on JudgeGabranthXII's story chapter in Chapter 3:Chains of Misery
Wonderful chapter. When Ritchie tore up that photo I was enraged and I teared up when Kade found out there was a duplicate of it. You have a very good writing technique and you're able to draw a person into the story. That's a sign of a good writer. So I wonder where you've been all this time -
Chapter 2: One day, One moment
Phoenix1977 commented on JudgeGabranthXII's story chapter in Chapter 2: One day, One moment
Well, don't worry about your writing sucking because it most definately does not. So far I like what I read. I do have some trouble thinking of Kade as sympathetic but I guess that's the point, right? I would love to strangel Ritchie, though. What a ***! Very well done and hope to see the next chapter soon. -
“So far the police has issued no statements but it’s safe to conclude Central Park is even more dangerous the last few days then the years before” the reporter said in front of the camera. “Only two days ago two men were murdered in a strange way but this morning a young man was found cut in half. Since no formal statement has been issued we don’t know whether the two cases are connected or not”. Arthur stood in his small bathroom, repeatingly washing his hands and shaking to the core. Every
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Samuel's POV I don’t think there’s a more despicable person alive in the world at this moment than me. I deceived my boyfriend in a terrible matter, resulting in hundreds of thousands of euro’s damage. My former schoolfriends robbed him silly, with my help. The only things I can say in my defence is I was scared my boyfriend would get into trouble because of me and I saved all the things I knew he deeply cared about. Like I said, not much of a defense. Let me introduce myself. My name’s Sa
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Hey, let me introduce myself. I’m a Dutch guy, 30 years old and pretty successful in business. I hate to brag, but for the last 7 years everything I touched turned to gold. I started selling stuff on eBay, just from my student’s dorm in Amsterdam but now I own several auction houses in Europe and the United States. Because I travel a lot and because I hate hotels (I can’t believe the things people in some hotels would do just to please the guests) I own several apartments all over the world. And
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Although I'm Dutch (that means from the Netherlands, Western-Europe) there is one city in the world I feel even more at home than my hometown and that is Paris, France. Paris is often called "The City of Love" or "The City of Light". But, like most large cities, Paris had a dark side. It's also the city in Europe with the most homeless people, the highest crimerate (especially "small crime"like pickpocketing and small scams). One of those scams is trying to get tourists to draw theil wa
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Sometimes what seems nothing more than casual sex can become so much more.
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“Hey, doc! What have you got for me?” detective George Russo asked when he entered the morgue. This morning hadn’t started that good: bodies before breakfast wasn’t Russo’s idea of how to start a day. “Ah, George. Always a pleasure.” Dr. Wall of Bellevue Hospital Center said. “These are very interesting cases”. “I’m sure they are, doc. So, fill me in”. “Well, let’s begin with the most obvious victim” dr. Wall said. “They called him Big John, if I remember correctly? Well,
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Hi,Thanks so much for your comments. If you like the story, I try to publish a new chapter every Monday. In a while we'll see some more characters and they will be more important than they seem at first. If not in this story than at least in the sequel I'm working on :)Edward
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“Although many substances can cause a reaction for the human immune system the strongest reaction is caused by foreign proteins” Samuel read to Arthur. “Because of this, immune responses to bacterial infections can be severe and even lethal”. Arthur and Samuel had been searching for the article Arthur had read about immune responses for five days when all of a sudden Arthur realized it hadn’t been in an article but in a book he used when he was in medical school. That night after their shift the
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Ok, this was not good. Here he was, sitting in the waiting room in the ER for the third time this month because a guy he had sex with got ill within half an hour after they completed their game. Jayden had cum in his ass really good while the guy had squirted him cum over his abs. And just as Jayden was getting dressed he had heard loud moans of pain coming from the bedroom. Jayden had called an ambulance and, as soon as the ambulance was there, Jayden wanted to go home. No such luck because the
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Kindle is great for authors in the US. In Europe it's all ePub by Adobe that is used. As far as I know we can;t even buy the Kindle reader or books or documents in Kindle format because a digital rights issue in the European Union. On a more personal note, I reformated a story by a befriended author to ePub using Adobe's InDesign. The result is great but it took me months to convert the Word version to ePub. I shudder at the idea of having to do it for my own stories as well. Oh, should anyone be interested in how it's done, you need Adobe's InDesign CS 5. How to do it, is explained by someone for Adobe on youtube:
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Satan has a son who will play an important role in the future of our planet. But will he be saving our world or destroying it? And will he find love in the process?
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I’m sure you heard stories about how the Devil is always trying to increase his power on our planet. But the truth is, he’s not trying to increase his power; he’s trying to get some power over our world. Oh, Lucifer is certainly not without power but most of that is through his followers. Satanists are very real and some are truly dangerous. Certainly not all and probably not even most of them, but some are truly touched by the Devil and can use some of his Hellish powers, like magic. Do
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When I started writing “The Devil’s son” I intended it to be a 2 or 3 chapter short story. But soon I realized I no longer controlled the story and it had taken a mind of it’s own. That happens a lot to me when writing. So, in stead of trying to regain control of the story I decided to let it play out and to see where it would take me. And I have not been disappointed by the story. Although the story takes place at actual locations and most of the background facts are historically correc
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Would You Allow Your Son To Play With A Barbie Doll?
Phoenix1977 replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
Might come as a shock to most parents but children themselves decide what toys they like. Trying to get them to play with toys the parents like or approve won't change the thing they want to play with and the things they will play with, either because they spend their allowance on it or because they have friends who do have the toys they like. So the question shouldn't be: "Would you allow your child to play with a doll?" but: "Are you comfortable with your child playing with toys you don't approve of?". If the answer is "no" it would be better for everyone if you get comfortable with it.
