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Religion??? Religion??? Don't get me going on that! I lost my family and kids because of it. You hit in on the head when you said that it should all be about love, but the teaching and the laws and dos and don'ts get in the way of it being simply about god and man. God is love full stop. Absolutely loved the chapter and so glad the boy was able to choose what he wanted to do. As for Nour, he's fallen on his feet as he now has over 30 brothers.
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I love that guy... I'm in trouble as I'm falling in love with too many of the characters in your story. I now want my own Jon... Talk about Carleton missing him when he's at college, I think we all will. I want those that were laughing to be hung by the nuts and hung out to dry... Loving the story my friend... Thank you
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Loving the chapter second time around... Reference : Salvation - 16. Chapter 16... The chapter is the same ... We thought at the time that it seemed to be out of place, now we know where it fits. Sorry but it had me confused and when he started talking to Peter about his girl, I knew that I had read it before... Loving it though and falling for Sal hook line and sinker... Please do not make him into a bad guy as I'll cry myself to sleep for a week. Was thinking about Alex but I couldn't afford all of the food I'd need to feed him
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Great chapter... Loving it and really needing to know who his son really was... He is really walking in dangerous paths now, so I hope Sal accepts the job offer otherwise who's knee will Charlie sit on???
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Loving the story, and totally in love with Carleton. He needs to forgive himself or he'll end up with a zoo never mind more kids. I had four of my own and that was enough. Looking forward to finding out who the boy is and what his story was. Also would love to see how this new guy Robert develops... so please sir I want more
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WOW loving the story and have caught up with the rest of you now... I may need a daily dose though or I might suffer form withdrawal symptoms. How many boys are there now? Daniel seems like a good kid but I think I've fallen in love with the Ugly Ducklings.
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HELL! I was screaming and I only had 4 kids to raise, now he must have.... OUCH!!! Alex seriously needs to look at getting more property for him. I pity Maria she needs help with all of those boys... Oh yes remember the dogs, that would over 40 as well if they had one each. What Joy! 🥰 Absolutely loving the story. WOW WOW WOW!
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God what is this world like? Poor little Matthew. Loving the story and totally wishing that I had a Gram like theirs. I never knew any of mine and I had three. Makes you wish that you had the money and ability to do the same. Totally loving Steven.
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I could do with a few friends like that. I had two sons but four kids in total and know that they could have eaten us out of house and home given the chance. Strange the gir;s always complained that the boys ate what was meant for them. As if! Loving the story and can someone direct me to a place nearby as I'd like to volunteer.
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Amazing, fantastic, absolutely loving this story. Chris is one lucky boy.
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Loving the story, prologues are to be read ... Great idea having the story within the story.
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The End ... Oh dear me no! What am I going to do over the holidays without Edwin the guys to keep me happy with my regular fix? Us brits from blighty need to hear about the hunky Captain James and Lord Edwin to know that all is well with the world... So to quote a little chap from literature - Please sir, I want more.....🤪😁
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Remind me not to have turtle soup, goodness only knows where that toe has been 🤣🤣 I was wondering when the media would catch him... Trespassing and invasion of privacy at least. If I'd have been James I'd have got the elders to throw him in with the turtles😇
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I'm in love with Edwin... Can he move over to Blighty please? With the lockdown over here I have lots of time on my hands to get to know him 😁Quite excited that there could be a wedding on the way... I like James as they bounce off each other and he is not a money grabbing leech.
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Absolutely love Hunter ... I could do with a hunk like him at my side. Mind you, an Edwin of my very own would be nice, only if you have time that is. Loving the story and can not wait for more.
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If I took possession of a shit tip like that it would have been sent back for a refund!!! Who are these cowboys? Remind me the next time I buy a luxury yacht not to get it from them.😁 I can see trouble brewing with the film crew the producer seemed like a real T- - s Pot... Maybe the boat should have been left as it was until the bastards left.
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I loved it... It worked for me completely and I love how the Edwin had the whereabouts to check things over like he did. I must admit I'm growing to like him more and more though if that shower of people that handed over the new boat took the old one then I would have been really worried. Love to see him and the captain getting closer and love finally finding him.
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Hell mate make sure that my name is on the list interested in the cruise. I don't mind sharing with a hunk from down under.
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I agree ... Absolutely loving the story and have fallen in love with Edwin, but he needs some loving ! ! !
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All I can say is I want one of those massages, especially after a day working ay the Y. 😁
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I like ... Human and fun. A time to relax after the stress that has past and the adventures that are to follow. Still falling in to with toby, but I want one of the children of Lilith to be all mine. Well my fairy godfather. Do you think Demetrius would help our leaders develop the tiny warriors for us in this day and age, so that we can develop a vaccine for the current problems. Loving the story more and more my friend. Stay safe.😷
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Ah to be sure, I just love being first... Wait did I mean a flirt??? No you know what I mean. WOW... I love the chapter, it only gets better and I see what you mean about the new direction. I need to know more about the Fae and how Erik fits into it. Where does his power come from? Why does his brother have no powers? Does Toby have powers and that's why he is a genius... So many questions and now the witch hunter are coming, will it be Erik that saves the day? To quote someone from last time, "Please sir... I want more."😎 Absolutely loving this new direction and there are so many possibilities.
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Good night sweet prince ... Talk soon.😴
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I love Erik!!! I love this story... What a chapter, I knew he wasn't a god all of the time. Well I hoped he wasn't anyway. I do wonder about Toby and what he will become as he grows. Now I wonder what Erik really is and what the power that he can call upon is. wonderful chapter, can't wait for more. Please sir, I want more.....
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Magic, enchanted talismans and symbols working together... Druids... Magicians ... I LOVE it! What makes you think that Merlin and the Legend of King Arthur are my favourite myth, part of history call it what you will. I am fascinated by that whole premise and love the legends that surround England at the time of Arthur. I can just imagine Prince Erik and Seth... No scratch that - I can just imagine Toby as the once and future king that will unite all of the land and royal families. I actually feel he has powers because of being deaf that he can draw on but that he needs to learn to channel still. Absolutely fantastic chapter my friend.
