sojourn

I think "gay" Dallas would be a big hit... Hmmm the question might be, "Who shot J.R. and with what?"? Thanks for taking your time to review. Jim

Yeah, I think that Jeff was right when he said he couldn't promise anything regarding drama... just that he would stand beside Paul. Thank you for posting your comments, they make me smile. Jim

That was actually based on a comment posted by Jay T. I told him then that I would use it when the time came. It has and I did. I think that Maria is wise beyond her years and yet reflects the innocence of youth. Thanks for posting your comments. I look forward to them. Jim

Jeff grabbed his shoulder feigning injury. “You know there are laws addressing domestic violence, even in Texas.” Taking Paul's hand in his, looking deeply into those soft brown eyes he admitted, “I had to do something. When I saw him go for his gun, I didn't think. I just knew I couldn't let him hurt you. You’ve changed my life, for the better, in so many ways. For the first time in a long time, I belong to a family again. My life doesn't mean much without you in it. Loving Maria is a give

I do listen to the comments posted. As to cliffhangers... I sometimes feel a dramatic musical crescendo should be played at the end of some of my chapters. ?Now you have convinced me that it is critical to post the edited version on that other website I post too, which shall remain niftyly nameless.? Thanks for all your comments, Jim Jim

This story rang all the bells and blew all the whistles. Admittedly, I am not the most careful reader. So I will not be surprised if I missed it. When Gabe was raped there was some confusion as to the number of assailants involved. There was some speculation that the worst master had survived the fall. Did I accidentally miss the resolution to this mystery? Even if it remains unsolved, it was a great read. Thanks for sharing. Jim

I thought I had already responded to your comment. Oh well, I'll try again. So far, only three, including you, have commented on my tribute to "Stranger in a Strange Land". I was reading a story by Bear Pup, in which he mentioned the book. I needed a really good Lawyer and thought why not the best? Glad you caught it. Also glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks, Jim

I usually end my comments with the English 'almost' equivalent "Write more, Post faster." Jay T gave me an idea in one of his comments that I intend to adopt which should bring all of our Princess' fans to their feet. I just can't tell you more right now. Insert evil grin here! (No doubt about it! I got to get better emojis.) Thanks for taking time to post your comment. Jim

I loved it just as much this second time around. Sequel or not this was a thoroughly enjoyable read. But I expected no less from your hand. Thanks for sharing. Jim

Ah, the first fragile realization that sex is a team sport. Great job! Thanks for sharing. Jim

I had considered alternatives. I am not convinced the Sheriff would have pulled the trigger. He obviously pulled his gun, but remember, twice, at scene of the shooting, he hesitated and did not follow through with a "knee jerk reaction". Paul thought to himself, 'a man in his line of work could get himself killed hesitating like that.' The deciding factor was the presence of three highly trained professionals. Two of which took action to save a life. I can't be blamed if their aim was true.? Thanks for posting your comments. Jim

Most importantly, Paul was inwardly pleased that Jeff would actually risk his life to save Paul's. Paul was overwhelmed by that act of self sacrifice. It was too difficult for him to express his real feelings so he decided to address a simpler issue... who would be left to take care of Maria? We all know that little girl would be treasured by Joe and Mellie. Not to mention Raymond and Tom. What Paul was trying to say was, "Why did you risk your life for me? I am not worth it!" The Sheriff was a functioning sociopath. (I use that word without license.) He underestimated Paul from before he even met him. His "buddies" the Mayor and Fire Marshal were both disparaging in their comments regarding "the faggot veterinarian". He had framed people before with no problems. This time he could see this "faggot" with his big city lawyer would have his evidence locker audited and reveal the missing drugs. His impound lot video surveillance video could be called into evidence, revealing him planting the drugs. No one, with any means/money had dared challenge him before. His mistake was underestimating a "faggot". We haven't even discussed his self loathing. (IMHO, you ain't straight if you engage in any form of man to man sex. You may not be "Gay", but you are not straight.) WOW! I think that is my longest comment. I said it before 'your comments make me think.' Thanks again, Jim

Don't use that "cliff edge" metaphor? Assimily? Anyway, The most challenging act of my Naval career was to climb the mast of the dry docked Destroyer, to which I was assigned. My boss said I was a fool since I didn't have to do it. But, my guys were scheduled to paint the mast the next day. I can still see men walking around on the floor of the dry dock, looking like piss ants. While my perch weaved back and forth in the breeze. I was terrified and don't think I hid it too well. Yeah, nauseous now, thanks for the memory. I did contemplate turning him over to Ilya's men for lessons on sexual etiquette. Maybe have him repeatedly gang.... oh well, you get the idea. thanks for posting your comments. Jim

LOL! It would have been poetic justice. I don't think his brain registered anything but rag at Paul. Thanks again for taking your time to post your comments. Jim

Not so fast Sweet Lion, remember the Fire Marshal is related to the Mayor who is connected to the preacher... well you get the picture. Nothing is ever as easy as it first seems. Thanks for taking your time to post. It helps motivate me. Jim

I like that old saying. thanks for posting your comments. Jim

LOL! Twisted/creative! I have been found out. Yeah, I am afraid y'all might think I can do this fast posting all the time. Now I need recovery time. A little R&R. Thanks for posting your comments. Jim

WOW! Seems to be the popular opinion. Thanks for taking you time out to comment. i do look forward to them. Jim

It is good to see justice triump in spite of those who seek to manipulate it. thanks for posting your comments. Jim

LOL! You've never seemed shy before... tell us what you really think. Thank you so much for your comments. Jim

Thank you. I especially liked your comment on Jubal... not everyone likes him. as always thanks for your comments. Jim

All too soon it was time to leave for town. Raymond had called to let them know Joe, the attorneys and himself would meet them in the conference room at the motel where Ilya's and Raymond's men were staying. Upon arrival, Paul was upset to see a Sheriff’s patrol car parked alongside Raymond's Tesla. They still had more than half an hour before they had to meet. Why the hell was he here now? Paul was in no hurry to confront the Sheriff, especially since both he and Jeff had left their sidearms at

Laugh all you want some guys would buy that. You failed to include "fingersnap, fingersnap" when using the terms "Adams" and "family" back to back. Therefore your question is invalid. Paul is just now beginning to understand the wealth and thereby potential influence of his new family. We will get there shortly. Thanks for your comments. Jim

I think that would make sense. They have yet to occupy the master suite. Maybe now would be a good time to do that. Thanks for your comments. Jim

Thanks. I think it's better too. Jim