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Dave, I was Awed! It is a great story. I couldn't stop reading. I look forward to seeing BookTwo. Great work, Jim
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I smile each time I see a review from you because I know it will be very incisive. Thanks for taking your time to review, Jim
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Before I get to far into the story I have a suspicion that the ambitious accountant will be a source of trouble. Great Story!
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Chapter 6 Assessing Problems
sojourn commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 6 Assessing Problems
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It is a real pleasure to read such a positive review. Thanks for taking you time to comment on my story. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it unfolds. Jim
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It is a real pleasure to read such a positive review. Thanks for taking you time to comment on my story. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it unfolds. Jim
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WOW! I am hooked! Just finished chapter one and must say, I can't wait on get on to chapter two. Great story. Jim
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Dave, I was pleasantly surprised to see your review. I immediately tapped your profile pic and soon began reading Abel III's Awakening. I got so wrapped up in it that I forgot I had a review to respond to. I mean I just started and I'm already hooked. Oh wait... this is your review to my story.... he, he. Thanks for the kind words. Jim p/s, now back to Abel III...
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I think Jeff and Paul would "rut" around in bed and out, if left to their own devices. Never under estimate the capability of the human heart to show compassion nor the ability of good men to stand up when bad things happen. As to Walmart, autocorrect capitalized it. It ain't my first choice either, but reality in small town Texas says walmart. It is like cancer to American small businesses, it's everywhere. Thanks again for your reviews, Jim Thanks again for your reviews
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Thanks for reviewing my story, I appreciate you taking time to review. I grew up in a small town. I will get a vicarious thrill in dealing with the Chief. I read so many perfectly edited stories that I take them for granted... then I read something that I have already posted. That is a humbling experience. "Bear hands" during sex that is so, especially since this is not a shifter story..... wait a minute... those stories sell a lot of books on Amazon. Hmmm, maybe I could... naw, it is easier to fix "bare hands" right now before more people see it. Seriously thanks agin for the review, Jim
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Yeah, I got a kick writing that scene. I only hate cliffhangers when there is a long period of time between postings. The rest of the time... I just really,really dislike them. Thanks for reviewing it keeps me motivated, Jim
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It's never too late to review one of my stories. Thanks for taking your time to do so. Maria, like most of my characters just showed up without my planning or permission. I hope you enjoy the tale as it unfolds. Jim
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Thanks for taking your time to review and encourage me. I think the disparity between anticipation/expectations and reality comes close to encapsulating the "Magic" of Christmas. I think that's why children are Christmas' biggest fans.
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Your patience is appreciated and hopefully it will be rewarded. Next chapter for sure... I thimk. Thanks for your reviews, They help keep me motivated. Jim
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Thank you in Johannesburg, I am very flattered by your kind words. Thanks for taking your time to review my story. Jim
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Thank you for taking time to review. yeah, I think Maria has the charm and innocence of a child and yet an insight of some "old soul". At least I hope that's her.
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The ride to Uncle Joe's and Aunt Mellie’s was spent in a somber mood. Paul had definitely surrendered any levity when he watched Jeff donning his hidden holster. He had been impressed that the bulge of the subcompact Sig Sauer P320, 9mm version was barely noticeable. The holster would have never worked in tight fitting jeans but, as Jeff demonstrated, it was no problem dressed as he was. Jeff practiced several draws. Each quicker than the one before. It would be easy for him to imagine Jeff as a
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Thanks for the reviews Jeffrey, I never know whether the "sexy" I try to right is "stimulating" or just better than nothing. You asked about Uncle Raymond, he is eagerly awaiting his debut... and so am I. Right now he is rather nebulous... extra tall, extra big and extra handsome. We'll see. Thanks for your reviews, they help keep me writing. Jim
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Yeah, always pleased when someone chooses to wear my shirt, jacket, etc. Any further comment on my part would result in someone thinking I might be kinky. Thanks again for you reviews. Jim
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Thanks RayC, It is an ego boost for sure when someone says they look forward to the next chapter. I appreciate your reviews I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds. Thanks again for taking time out to review it. Jim
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Thanks Carpride, I read so much on both sites I shouldn't be surprised that you would start out on one and wind up on the other... but I am. Seriously, I post first here, then email to Nifty. They usually take a day or two to post. So this posting hits the street first. Thanks for the kind words and more importantly, thanks for taking the time to review. That is the main method of learning if my story is well received. Looking at the stats, less than one percent of people who view this story actually post a review. So, thanks again, Jim
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Thanks for taking time to review my story. We all make mistakes, but life is for learning. Please continue to give me feedback. let me know how I'm doing as the story unfolds. Jim
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Paul awoke. Halfway through a luxurious stretch, he realized he was in a strange bed. Well, not totally strange it was after all a bed he’d had sex in… er… on? Since they didn't technically get under the covers it was probably on. The grin was washed from his face as he recalled the fire and the fact that someone wanted him dead. Apparently him and his family. Sliding across the bed he felt only coolness where Jeff had slept with him through the night. He had awakened several times from b
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Uncle Raymond will soon be on the scene. I suspect (not written yet) that's when the proverbial ##it hits the rotating wind generator. Thanks for the review, Jim
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Well thank you for your honest reaction. This started out being a one chapter story for a different website. The characters deserved better, so here we are. I tried hard, obviously, to show Jeff to be desirous of a significant change in his life. I am very pleased that you held in there despite your initial misgivings. I will be watching for your reviews as the story unfolds. I appreciate honest critique. Thanks for taking your time to review my story. Jim
