sojourn
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Bill Rushed to his phone even as he dripped across the floor Suddenly I was possessed of a significant resentment toward law enforcement as a concept. I could tell it was another accident that needed coverage. Damn! Can no one in this town drive after dark? De ja Vue, all over again. I couldn't help but wonder how often this happened? I was beginning to think LBJ and I would have to hit a ditch after dark if this relationship is to advance. Then again maybe fate was saving my ass from a seri
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1 Bill Rushed to him phone even as he dripped across the floor Suddenly I was possessed of a significant resentment toward law enforcement as a concept. I could tell it was another accident that needed coverage. Damn! Can no one in this town drive after dark? De ja Vue, all over again. I couldn't help but wonder how often this happened? I was beginning to think LBJ and I would have to hit a ditch after dark if this relationship is to advance. Then again maybe fate was saving my ass fr
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Thanks,No self respecting witch would really be caught up short by ignorant pilgrims nor ignorant rednecks... those are fables made to let commoners sleep at night.... or didn't you know that. he,he,he,
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LOL!I have accused Mark Arbour of changing a story line based on foiling my predictions. Now, I understand that had his story not already been written he most likely would consider all input. I did consider what you offered. I will tell you that my stories almost have a mind of there on. I have glanced at various chapters and wondered 'where did that line came from'. Once I start typing I kind of flake out and go with the flow. There are so many questions that this story may take a long, long time and a lot of work... Thanks Fred.
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When I left the clinic I was in a daze. I thought about Jed and some of the things he had said and how they now made sense. Jed was heavy into S&M. I thought also about how Bill enjoyed my playing rough with him. I was sure that he got off on being told what to do, when we were having sex. I worried about how he would respond to Jed's dungeon. I also worried about whether he would want to leave once he got down there. When I arrived Bill had showered shaved and had sandwiches and a salad
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Chapter 4 Journey into Psionics
sojourn commented on Dan Umbero's story chapter in Chapter 4 Journey into Psionics
Who is disirous over whom? that is the question. This story derserves to be continued. I wil take it personally and use my psyonic powers to move it further along. More please -
I thought I changed that. I will now. Yep, He will have some serious thinking to do shortly. Thanks.
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Betrayed? Hogwash, our hero is jealous. Been too long since he has been bred..So Nelson was a politician... comes with rank. I suspect that we will see a familiar face in the next chapter and our hero will cum again to trust Ramsey. More please faster, faster...uh write faster. Yeah, write.
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Perhaps Bach was Jed's stalking horse... was he using Tar to again get close to Doc? Maybe David is just an ornamental character.Thanks.
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This story presented the most permutations for resolution that I have yet encountered...now you propose the horse. Hadn't considered that; still haven't. ;-) thanks
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I could rewrite three chapters to fit your prediction... but what fun would that be?The next one should be posted in the next few days. Thanks fred.
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Drama? DRAMA! I was writing a comedy. Guess I have to unpost and start again. Thanks for the reviews.
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I believe that is the nicest thing you have called me... given the context, that is a HIGH complement.
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Hey, remember I like happy endings. A happy heart is predicated upon someone else's being broken. If you quit reading because it is a bad story just leaves your reasons.... maybe I can learn to do better...
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I think your questions will be answered in the next chapter... stay tuned and thanks. You're not reading my story is fine as long as you are writing.
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I wasn't about to say no to an offer like that. I made a mental note to ask why he didn't get a brain freeze when he was chill licking my cock. Just as we were getting closer Bill's phone rang like a European siren, “WAA uh, WAA uh”. Ok, so I'm not good with sound effects. He grabbed his phone, said hello and mostly listened. When he hung up he was already opening drawers to get clean underwear. As he dressed he explained there had been a bad wreck on the interstate and he was needed at the
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I really wanted to find fault with Nelson and his decision not to "win with Seamanship" as George intended. I reread that section and began to laugh at myself. I have boarded many foriegn vessels with a single saffied 45 and a kevlar vest. No sailor in his right mind prefers close quarter combat. Then it was a fact of life.... and very disturbing. Of course Nelson was right....."Kiss me Hardy". even to the end., more please, I am hooked to the end.
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Too bad, I was going for the gestalt. Sorry, I find it hard to take this review seriously. I mean I goaded you into it. LOL, but thanks. ahem, glad you liked it.
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glad you like it. Thanks
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I hope it continues to entertain. thanks for the rview.
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Thank you. This was a challenging passage to write.
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Thank you. You know I enjoy your stories and your reviews mean a lot.
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An interlude. Perhaps a lull before the storm. The question is which storm, war, politics or personal? The use of the term "Star power" bothered me a bit. Was it in fact a commonly used term? I understand the challenge of effective communication. Just wondering... more please
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I think I'll print out the "nice writing" part and hang in on my "I love me" wall. Thanks
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yep, well if you read more today you might learn more about David. But it can wait. thanks
