sojourn
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Staff on board is a pain. Chartley's gone.... I will try to forgive that. I think there was a real chance at romance and hot sex.... shame. The spy wants to play but with staff aboard even George will be tempted to keep his libido in check, least George and the spy be spied cogidas en flagrante delitas... more please.
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Masterpiece? WoW! thanks.
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I have to say, I was wrong. Perhaps I expected too much too soon. Coop has matured quite nicely and I am glad I was there to watch. I like the fact that Spence and Kyle found a place in his life... to me that was the most mature thing Coop has done. Thanks for a great read.
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This chapter is likely the first time I felt any positive regard for Coop. To this point I felt he was surrounded by better people than he deserved. Maybe not. Still I felt his "concern for others" superficial at best. His motives were always self serving. I am eager to see more maturity... I hope this does not leave us with an unrepentant slut/alcoholic/dropout. The fact that I can feel so strongly about Coop and yet eagerly look forward to another posting is a testiment to your writing. Thanks
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I am kind of fond of them too. In their case wisdom comes with age. thanks
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actually thinking about 14 and 15 cutting those into four or five chapters.
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Pshaw... you making up nice things to say. Thanks
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Thank you I think I will print out "awesome job"...
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Gay sex scenes.... fluid? Is their an intentional pun in there? Thanks
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Hmmmm maybe? Thanks for the reivew. I am glad you are enjoying "the ride".
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LOL! Murphy's law... if everything looks like it's ok. you've overlooked something.
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Ok, spellbinding just became my favorite word. thanks
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I could get used to the nice things you say about my stories. This one is same town as T.R. just a couple of years ealier.
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I hope you come back in a day or so for the nest installment.
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LoL! I'm writing, I'm writing...I promise.
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I'm impressed.. hey when you finish could you come on over? I need my carolina laurels and fig tree and lime trees fertilized and watered... on and the crepe myrtle discouraged again.
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Thanks glad you like it.
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Every Texan asks the same question. It ain't hard to find, if you know where to look. That is as much as I feel is fair. I got relatives too. I am glad you like it. Thanks for the rview. This story is in the same town as "Gordy comes Home". They say write about what you know.
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Thanks. it would not be prudent to comment at this juncture.
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Remember T.R. has a pistol he keeps in LBJ... Julie is well intentioned, but she tends to be blunt. Thanks
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The small town hear, in my experience, is not too far from the real world. Julie's perception can be explained by small town gossip... almost. Thanks
