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Chapter 7 - Barbara Makes Her Presence Known
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Barbara Makes Her Presence Known
Thank you Maria. I'm glad you are enjoying it. -
Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
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Glad you are still reading and enjoying it. -
Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
Come now, if Rick had hit his son, you know Barbara would have killed him. There is now way she would have let that slide. And yes, Charlie just doesn't realize how others see him or their signals. One of those people who can spot what is happening to others but when it happens to him is totally oblivious usually. Hang in there, the story isn't over yet. -
Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Remember sometimes the secrets we keep the best are the ones we keep from ourselves. Still have story left to tell but Barbara is just one of those people once you meet you want in your life. -
Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
Hey Stu, Who is the matchmaker here? Glad you are enjoy this story. Things have a way of working out in the end. Maybe not as one wanted but hey, isn't that life. Hang in there. Not a whole lot of story left to tell. -
Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
Hey, sometimes the truth really knocks you on your butt, Frosty. But you got what you have all been waiting for, just now how you expected it to happen. Give me a few days will you. I write and it seems it is up almost immediately. -
Chapter 16 – Time for the Truth Charlie took a deep breath before opening the door. As the door cracked open his mother flew in like hurricane, followed more cautiously by Rick Jr. “What the hell happened? Mom, why are you here? Rick, please, tell me your father didn’t do that!” The words flew out of Charlie’s mouth before he could think or censor himself. “Charlie, sit your ass down. We have a lot to fill you in on,” Barbara began withou
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Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
Cia, You point out a lot of the story. There are things I would love to comment on but going to have to wait just a bit more. Only thing I will say is Scott isn't the sort of man to just let things lie. Hang on to your hat, the story is starting its final wind up. -
Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
Show me anyone whose life goes smoothly and I'll show you a children's book of sanitized stories. Real life, and interesting stories have challenges. Just so happens Charlie's life isn't one that sails smoothly. However a lot of things are going to be straightened out very shortly. Hang in there. -
Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Stops
Well like anything else Charlie's life just isn't smooth. Crafting now and yeah going to end up with a longer chapter due to all that has to happen. Glad you are enjoying it. -
Glad you enjoyed it Bee. I tried to get everyone right.
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The first day I walked in you were teasing each other. I just decided to make it my job and go further. lol
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Well all of you are the ones I hound, read, comment on, and talk with so tried to do justice to everyone.
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Well you asked for it so you got it Maria. lol. But I have my own story to still finish. Glad you liked it though.
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Hey Lugh, I am getting reviews on my story. This was to get Maria and Jian to stop asking for more poetry.
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Well you wanted a poem, so you got a poem.
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Thank you Sam.
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lol. Leave it to you to finally say hi.
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Audi you know me, You know you can say hi and talk to me. Glad you enjoyed it as well.
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My dear chatterbox we know you talk. We just like that you have become one of my close friends as well.
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Well glad you enjoyed it. The thumbs up was the give away.
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Yes I did and I called them as I seen them.
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Friends Here on GA They are an odd collection of people from all over the world They are young and old, sweet and sarcastic, funny and strange They welcome you without knowing you With gentle words and jokes you begin a daily change First there was Maria who read my poetry and commented She offered out her hand and then a second pair of eyes Then came Mark and Stu who were teasing each other But when I started in on them it brought more than just sighs F
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A poem about some of the people I know here on GA. Just a sample of how I see them and how they are important to me
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Not sure what you mean as having the same voice. A writer might be distinctive for the way they tell a story or the fact that each time it is so different. Look at the authors you enjoy. What makes them something you like? Some it is the art of surprise, some it is character development, some it is the fun they infuse in their tales, others it is just an overall style. Once you know what you want, or what you are afraid you might be doing, then you can work on it. I find each story I start is different and new. The characters have to come to life and live in the world they inhabit. If I do that I think I am successful. Good luck.
