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The Goodbye Even though it had been months since Casey had buried Tom he was still feeling completely lost and alone. Five years together had changed his outlook on life and how to live it. He didn’t want to go back out and try to find someone. Why did he have to die? Why was Tom the one who had to be made an example of during a robbery? That one act had stolen everything from Casey, including the chance to say goodbye to the man who meant so much to him. To
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Every once in a while someone will say something that sparks the imagination. Since I have been here at GA that has happened to me a few times. I figured I would begin to gather them all in one place now and so will add to this as new stories are inspired by you.
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What can I tell you, KC. I have a warped way of looking at the world. Glad it gave you a laugh.
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We all have been to weddings that were perfect in their way for the simple things that have gone right, and the bloody disaster's like my darling brothers. Any way you look at it you are probably going to have fun just for different reasons. Glad you enjoyed it.
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I always wonder if people know what they are doing when they decide to get married. Consider the expense, the choices, the family, and the shredded friendships that will be left after the decisions are made by the bride and groom. After all, where else but at a wedding can you find two families who hate each other brought together, in the house of God, for a happy occasion? In plain English, be prepared for a long battle that will leave many people bloodied and dead. The war of the famil
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What happens when two people meet, fall in love, and plan a wedding? The result can be the destruction of familial ties and be very funny, at least long after the fact. Take a glance and see if you have ever been to a bad wedding, or one like this.
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Strange Family, Unusual Lovers, and Other Jobs
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Strange Family, Unusual Lovers, and Other Jobs
Canuk, I think you are the only one who picked up on that. Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, Lu had things "cleaned up" for Jonas. Nearly done with my other story so this is next on the list for expansion. -
John, You let your passion and love glow in each line. The poem shows the hope and the desire you hold for your relationship. You are both very blessed. Your poem like yourself shows grace and love. Wayne
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Remembrance The roses wrap around the fence like bloody explosions Their sweet aroma filling the summer air And all I can say is you are not there I walk past your favorite places now and then Remembering the good times had Even the times when I was stupid and made you mad Time flies and more than a year has passed And the tears don’t fall so much any more But I wonder what that pain I felt was for The grave is still so bright and white And the dat
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We all have triggers that will remind you of someone. Sometimes it is a smell, the sight of something, or just the feeling you get one day. When it happens memories are stirred and suddenly you are lost in the corridors of time, forgetting all about the now as you walk down memory lane.
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Was it just one night...?
comicfan commented on Frostina's story chapter in Was it just one night...?
Frosty, This was a twisted poem. It began and I thought oh a rainy night and the voice of the poem can't write. One of the times you want to but can't and so you search for something to inspire you. Instead the voice recalls a death and how empty it has made them and how that death left them cold and alone after the passing of their loved one. You always have the ability to bring such powerful emotions to your writing. A moving piece indeed. Wayne. -
There is nothing wrong with women. I have many that are close friends. Besides you just wanted to tease your reader and see how many would look for your pickle.
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Chapter 17 - What Will Be
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 17 - What Will Be
Well you know the old saying Elezbed, "Still waters run deep." Charlie has been still for a long time so when he gets going look out. Seems everyone can't wait for lunch. -
Chapter 17 - What Will Be
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 17 - What Will Be
I'm glad you are enjoying the story, especially since you have to spend so much time with it. I just like to take enough time for you to know the characters. Sometimes you skip periods of time but it needs to make sense in the story you are telling. -
Chapter 17 - What Will Be
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 17 - What Will Be
Only time will tell Daddy. Charlie has sort of been on the run since September and now we are only in November. Remember we are about to hit the holidays, family get-togethers, and oh yeah Rick still needs to learn about the rest of the family happenings. Things to look forward to. -
Chapter 17 - What Will Be
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 17 - What Will Be
Oh I don't know Stu. I have had a few where things were nice and calm for Charlie. Granted his life is as busy as anyone's can be but I try to temper things. We all need chances to breathe. As for more, well, I'm working on it. -
Chapter 17 - What Will Be
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 17 - What Will Be
Well Charlie doesn't realize how strong he is. He is going to take care of it all on his terms. Wait till lunch. -
Chapter 17 – What Will Be Charlie took a deep breath and tried to wrap his mind around all that had just happened. So much for my nice quiet morning, the one where I get to figure out my dreams. “You are awfully quiet, Charlie.” “You taste of mint, you know,” said Charlie rather quietly. He heard Scott give a small chuckle. Charlie looked up as Scott smiled. “By the way, how the hell did you know where
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His cruelty streak is showing. Looks like both "slaves" are soon to be in for it. Waiting for the next chapter.
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Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Time for the Truth
I never said I was out to make life easy for my characters. Besides if it was easy who would read it? Hang on. We just are slightly past the half way point. Fun continues next chapter.
