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If you are offering yourself up in prayer listen to the reply. Moving poem and while I sense your loneliness and how scared you are, remember that unless you are willing to let yourself get hurt you won't be able to move forward and find love. Strong piece.

Okay let me get this all straightened out. I like Connor, no I'm wrong, I love Connor. This little guy is so sweet and I want to see him happy. Yes I am one of those guys who like to see people grow and come into their own. This chapter we seen that begin to happen a bit. Connor going on a date again. Trying to have a life. Kidding around with Rebecca. I enjoyed that so much I like Ray. He is a sweet guy. I was happy to see he wasn't going to push or force things but wanted Connor to know he was there. I respect him and really do like him. That being said can I smack Jared now. I am kidding. Jared is one of those people who has shown he has ethics. I think things would have been easier for both him and Connor if he hadn't come across the date that night. To say I want to hit him for drinking and screwing up what could have been a sweet reunion is an understatement. I still want Jared to get his head straightened out. I hate how he could almost only admit that he loved Connor while drunk Hurray for Connor. At least he is smart enough and grown up enough to know that he doesn't want to hear this from a drunk Jared. No matter how sexy he thinks Jared is at least he isn't going to be a door mat. Yeah. Okay my big problem with the chapter ...... you don't have another one to follow it yet. Sigh. Till you get up the next one I guess I have to sit and think over what has happened ... again.

I am glad you are enjoying the story. Hard at work on the next chapter now. One thing you know is Charlie takes life at his own pace. He is a stand up sort of guy.

Things happen as they happen. Charlie's whole story has taken place in three days so far. The poor guy has been through a lot. I don't know what you mean? Mr. Blue Eyes? lol. Give Charlie a chance. Time will tell what happens.

Frosty I just meant Charlie was crying at the end of the chapter. Cia is hoping I toss him right into Reeds' bed. Like I would do such a thing. Charlie has things to learn yet. Time will tell.

I've read them and commented on them. The first is such a strong piece. I enjoyed it greatly. The second I had a question about and hopefully you can answer it. I just don't understand the references to German and Lebanese.

Thank you. Sometimes the best things come not from your imagination but from your own life. Glad you found it to be worth the read. Thanks for the kind comments.

Yeah it started off as a different take on the poem A road less traveled. To me any road is the right road as long as you make the choice.

Glad to know that people can open themselves up to love again. I think that is the best message I can pass on now.

Who wouldn't notice he was naked?

My dear Cia would you allow Charlie to cry? I mean he did just end a relationship of nearly two years. I never promised things would be smooth or how you expected. Just going to have to wait.

Cia, To be honest it is like the talk to me. Sometimes I feel the story should be going one way but either one character or another seems to get into a huff for trying to make them go contrary to who they are. Eventually I have no choice but to go where they want to take me.

Well life does not always run in new directions but each person's story is a new take on life. Glad you are enjoying it.

Aww. Glad you are enjoy Charlie. Yeah he is a sweet heart and hopefully things will work for him. You just have to wait and see.

Cia, I never worry if someone does one chapter at a time or saves them up and goes all at once. I am just grateful people seem to be enjoying it and commenting on it as well.

I am so glad you are enjoying the story.

Well glad it all is making sense. I know things need to be explained and sometimes allowing Charlie to show you is a lot easier. Memory can be a wonderful thing. Thanks for the comments.

Nephy, thank you for reading and more importantly commenting. I hope as the story progresses it all makes sense. Nothing in life is without its reasons.

As of now Chapter 6 is up. That was perhaps the hardest chapter to write. Pain is never good but be honest and let me know what you think. Sometimes things have to fall apart before they can be put together correctly.

I think that is the point though. The future at any age is an unknown. What you do and how you do it will make your future brighter or darker. It is almost always up to you. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work Jian. It means a lot to me.

Thanks for everything Maria. Glad you enjoyed them all.

I'm glad you understood the hollow smiling man. I was afraid it might have been lost in translation. Thank you for all your comments and for keeping me honest with this Maria.

Well I think everyone tries to hide after being hurt. It is just when someone reminds that life is worth living that we are able to admit love still exists. Thank you for reading.

I'm glad it reach you Maria. With such kind words I know it does what it was suppose to.

I think we all have someone we love and don't want to lose. My mother was my confessor, my friend, and the one person who I could always depend on. I think when they leave they take a part of heart with them. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.