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Michael has a long way to go. He's such a flawed character. I'm amazed at the response I've gotten. I thought everyone would hate him but he's....interesting to say the least Asher on the other hand, I fell in love with him in the first paragraph Thanks so much for reading (((BTW 3 is over 2,000...Is that big enough??))
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Michael has problems. We will get to see so much more of him in near future (OMG- get your mind out of the gutter! Not in that way, LOL) His character will be developing in leaps and bounds. Hope you check out chapter 3 next week. Thanks for leaving a review
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Michael is flawed ( I would soooo totally hug him Ooooh side tracked I liked the LIS reference too (Is my geekiness showing??) These guys have a long way to go and we are just starting. Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you think
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Thanks (Do I call you leshwing or Fishwar now that you have mind-melted with Fishy...LOL) Sorry it's short but it was a good break for the chapter. I would rather have a good breaking point than leave a cliffy (someone might fall off ) Next Monday chapter 3 KC
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Similar scenes...all too familar? Like been there done that or just the bar scene in real life? Well I hope my writing isn't predictable-run-of-the-mill work. I try to be original but someone once told me 'everything has been done before. You have to do it again but put a twist on it to make it your own.' I hope I have. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading, KC
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I like Appletini's (but don't tell anyone ) I'm glad that you came back for chapter 2. I wanted a nice natural break that didn't leave a cliffhanger. I don't write whopper chapters but I also don't write whopper stories either (my attention span is .....ooohhhhh puppy.....what, what was I saying?? Even as flawed as Michael is he is a great character to write. Thanks for reading, KC
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Thanks Breeze, we will learn more about Michael in the next several chapters (Asher too ) I know it was a little short but it was a good chapter break. I'm glad you're liking it.
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Haha, well one works at a bar and the other has drinking issues....I thought it sounded appropriate Michael wakes up in next chapter and it's going to get interesting. Thanks so much for reading, KC
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Thanks Sly, obviously Michael has a problem and we have only started at the top. The 'wake-up' is going to be interesting. Hope you stalk me....errr I mean check back next Monday for chapter 3 (which will be labeled chapter 4, just to confuse the angry blue bear )
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Okay, the deal with Michael is that all guys named Michael are sick-twisted-crazy..... No! Just kidding Michael's character is a flawed man. We have only seen a little of him but he's a deep character. I hope he comes across as real. Thanks for reading! KC
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You know me, Joann, I can't do anything without adding some humor to the mix! Welll, you were the first to address that the chapter was too short. So I will answer that since it is the burning complaint of Chapter 2 When I write, I don't have a set word limit. I try to feel the chapter and see when it feel to find a nice clean chapter break. Some are shorter than others and other are much longer. I'm not a huge fan of cliffhangers and I'm trying to avoid them by finding a natural break. There is so much more to come that I hope that you feel satisfied with each installment. Thanks for reading, KC
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Thanks RJ, there is so much to come this doesn't scratch the surface yet. Michael has a long way to go. Hope you come back for Chapter 3
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Michael is definitely waking up in the next chapter! It will be interesting (I won't shoot you, I like twisted humor ) Thanks for reading, KC
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It was business as usual at Chapel Chase. A constant flow of executives, the high and mighty corporate-type people who made and lost billions of dollars as easily as the rest of the world lost and found coins in the street. They came in for their power-lunch meetings, whispering over their salads and behind wine glasses about whose head would be the next sacrifice on the chopping block. Asher listened to their gossip, glad he didn’t live in that carnivorous world. These people were more than
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then stop playing with the replies and get to work mister!! LOL
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Tap...Tap...Tapppppp....waiting!!
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But...but...now I want more! It was a wonderful start and has potential to continue. Saying that 'The world has changed,' is an understatement. Did the meteor that hit the ocean open up the new discovery of these new plants and animals? Cool prompt, hope you expand
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Too funny Michael! I've been accused several times of being too sexual and writing PWP (smut) There is going to be a lot going on and I want to take characters to a much deeper level then just wild hot sex....Even though I love writing sex scenes, I know that not everyone loves to read overly sexual stories (Doesn't mean there wont be sex) Heck, I'm writing myself in a corner now, LOL There is much more to come. This story will have sex (Might be very surprised by what happens) I can't say much more since not all of the characters have been introduced yet Thanks for reading, KC
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Both of these guys are great characters to write. Neither one is perfect but hey, nobody is! There is sooooo much more to come, check back on Monday for chapter 2. Thanks for reeading, Kc
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Thanks so much for reading my story and letting me know what you think. I'm still a new writer and I learn more and more with every new writing project, trying to get better. Gibby did find love and Tanner will be watching/waiting for him to join him one day. I think Amanda's fate was what she deserved because death would have been too easy. This way she suffers for a long, long, long, long time KC
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Yeah, it was sad but he had to die for it to be a ghost story, but he's not done yet. He's still a very important part of Shepherd's Crook. Ghost condoms? Is that to stop the transmission of ectoplasm? LOL That brings up some very interesting questions!
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As sad as it is, most of us have dealt with our share of Amandas. I had mine. I would plot out all these awful things to happpen to her, glad I became a writer and not a pycho-killer (writing is more theraputic, LOL) Thanks for reading, KC
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Thanks Breeze, I wanted to make them feel real as possible. They are almost a little too real since they don't always do as I say! LOL Thnaks for reading, KC
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Thank you soooooo much Daithi for spending the day with me and and my characters! This story means a lot to me. My mom edited the original story for me a few years ago and now that she's gone, I can still hear her telling me what to do and OMG she is still pissed at me for killing Tanner! LOL Yes Scott made a mistake but he deserved the chance at redemption. I know that I've made some really bad choices in the past but a second chance can save someones life. Amanda's fate is worse than death and I totally believe it is what she deserves. She deserves to suffer. I tried to show 1 character is redeemd but another is condemned. Thaks again, your reviews have really made my day today :)KC
