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  1. carringtonrj
    nicely built up. plenty of details and hints. i think ghosts and gay go together well - spaces in between!
  2. carringtonrj
    delicately handled, so to speak. but poor sandi seems to be getting a bit too much negativity, though i guess you have plans for her. good chapter ending. i wish i could write so consistently.
  3. carringtonrj
    all nicely handled, i'd say. bubbling along interestingly
  4. carringtonrj
    All stories should take place in art galleries. I like the introduction of a bit of female competition. Pretty boys shouldn't have it too easy.
  5. carringtonrj
    Your engagement with your characters is fascinating. It's easy to share in your pleasure in conjuring them. They are real and are delighted with your interest in them.
  6. carringtonrj
    gentle and thoughtful stuff. bit worried about the warnings, but don't feel that you've made any sort of mistake. not exactly a cliffhanger, but enough to make me want to read the next chapter.
  7. carringtonrj
    gorgeous writing, full of subtle hints as well as steamy sensuality. imagination is pulsing throughout what you write. the sort of writing that makes you wish anything were possible. makes you believe anything is possible, as you read. congratulations. will read on.
  8. carringtonrj
    hey, sorry you're having such a shit time. i wish i could say something to cheer you up!
  9. carringtonrj
    to seek, to strive and not to yeild? great to be so positive. great to know so much.
  10. carringtonrj
    I think this is really well written. Carefully built up, credible, interesting. Very fine writing, I'd say. Wonder where it's heading ... Congratulations. You're the real thing: a writer!
  11. carringtonrj
    like this chapter. like the song. like the story overall. you're obviously a proper writer - you're so patient with your build up. very impressive.
  12. carringtonrj
    would like to hopeful
  13. carringtonrj
    write, write, write
  14. carringtonrj
    venus as a boy - bjork
  15. carringtonrj
    confused
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