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Funny! We went for a quiet wedding, yet still someone tried to bring a couple of random children whom I had never met and weren't even related to the person bringing them, who just wanted to give them a holiday!
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Gorgeous, N. Some stirrings of a "ahem" nature! You write so well. Original and imaginative. And you're such a tease - watch out there's hard sex here! Then "glory will purr" - hmmm, lapping it up, like cream!
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I like little compact stories like this. You do this one so well, packing everything in beautifully. Especially now, the ending touched me. Hope you do have more like this.
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I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
carringtonrj commented on Nephylim's story chapter in I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
Fine writing as ever, N. I did think that you were trying to tell yourself something, maybe, in the light of the blog the other day. A voice within you is calling out: but what is it saying? Anyhow, I do admire your writing. -
This was different and interesting - small but perfectly formed. Hope you post lots more like this.
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A fun story, and sexy! You have interesting ideas, original takes on things.
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You write really well. Fine imagination. Original details. Lively style. A good read.
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Great stuff, N. Really made me think of someone I know/knew who would love this story. Great build up. Keen to read more!
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Well, there's a lot to take in there, isn't there?! You're obviously so much more strong and chilled than I am. When I think of losing my job, it makes me feel lost! So I'd be hopeless to advise you on this one, but I would say that doing things for others obviously makes you happy - why wouldn't it? So I wouldn't underestimate the importance of that for you. Hope you find a way of squaring the circle! x
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It's good, because of the unexpected nature of the outburst. I think it reads well generally. Nothing jarred for me. So, yeah, take it further - that would be my advice. It's already different, surprising. A great start.
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You're too modest in your response to the other review. You write really well. The build up is beautifully handled. You should certainly write and post more. In my non-expert opinion!
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Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
carringtonrj commented on Lugh's story chapter in Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
I'm all for gender confusion. Fun story. I like how your imagination works. Happy (and gay!) ever after. -
Great opening, N. Pace. Interest. Drive. Imagination. I'm curious to see where this is heading!
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Ok, that's sexy.
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sweet. good use of "auburn" - a great word to use! you write directly and emotionally. interesting reading. you obviously have talent.
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I was enjoying reading this a lot. Very nicely handled little scenes, nice build up. Thought I knew where it was heading. Good fun, reminding me of school years, etc. Then I found myself reading the very end and feeling really emotional - not sure why. Beautiful story-telling, really got to me. Thank you.
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Chapter 7 - Meeting the Family
carringtonrj commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Meeting the Family
you handle the conflict really well here and give us plenty of reason to hate the horrible aunt. there's something horribly familiar about that kind of self-righteous prejudice. i wonder what drives someone to be so hateful. -
ah the banshee! who could resist? lovely writing. there are so many great folk tales and ballads out there - it would be interesting to gay some of them up, wouldn't it?
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i wonder why bridge is such a favourite? more tremendous energy in this chapter. once you get on a roll, you really go for it, i guess.
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good pace here. moves on rapidly without losing the detail that is so delicious.
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steamy!
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um, does it mean i'm shallow that i like this so much?
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very fine prologue. sexy and scary.
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brilliant build up. you handle a lot in a brief space. real skill.
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Chapter 6 - The River's Other Man
carringtonrj commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The River's Other Man
a grim twist! adds some interesting new dimensions. good stuff.
