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  1. carringtonrj

    Sounds

    You really work with the words there. very impressive.
  2. Thanks for the questions. You've been a lovely reader to write for. I think the characters are always central to my stories. They drive it. Sometimes I do make notes. Usually I have an outline of the overall plot. But sometimes I let it develop more organically, just for fun. With London and Love I knew where it would head, just about, but I wasn't totally sure either. It was an in between story, in lots of ways, and fun to feel it develop.
  3. if i were to get publicly lauded or the other, I would choose to to do it with Percy for sure. The best of friends.
  4. Thank you so much for the lovely review and comments. It's so nice to get some positive feedback. T. you have been a beautiful perfect reader to lots of people here I know (as well as being a great favourite writer too), and I count myself very lucky that you've read some of my work. Thank you so much for this review. x
  5. I can see why your story is so popular. Well done for getting such a fantasitc following. You obviously know how to construct a totally engaging story. Congratulations.
  6. Glad to see you enjoying your characters so much.
  7. Percy is the most intelligent, sensitive, thoughtful of writers. Like Tim, my only complaint about Percy is that I always want more.
  8. carringtonrj

    I Never Learn

    good work. strong, direct. passionate.
  9. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    Yes, great to see your writing here again. And you did a really polished and professional job with this one. You tell your story convincingly, clearly and with subtle details. Thanks for sharing.
  10. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    you should write more poems. you have something to say and some interesting touches with your words and your part rhymes, perfect for suggesting an incompleteness that fits your subject.
  11. carringtonrj

    Chapter 12

    I like these little pieces. Neat slices of images and ideas. You have a good way with words. Thanks for sharing.
  12. carringtonrj

    The Window

    you write this brilliantly, building up so tensely, so thrillingly. it's disturbing, a little, but also enticing. you get the balance just right. you take the reader on a real journey. anyone reading it would be drawn in, would want what the people in the story want. it's quite a skill you have.
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    getting;laid

    I like this story. It's sweet. And you write with real verve and energy. I look forward to more from you. I wish I met people like this!
  14. carringtonrj

    evaporated waters

    i like this one, though it seems tinged by sadness or discontent. you experiment with words interestingly.
  15. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    I like the strength of your word play. Interesting.
  16. carringtonrj

    Twins in town

    i'm really an outsider where most of this is concerned. but it's great to see you enjoying your writing and pleasing your audience so beautifully. thanks for sharing.
  17. thanks for sharing another long chapter. you write with such conviction and clearly disappear into your imagined world as you write. it's interesting to follow you.
  18. carringtonrj

    Latex

    you're a talented writer. hope you start posting more again.
  19. happy birthday! hope you had a blast. x
  20. Horrible story. Made me feel so sick for everyone involved. I love cricket. You so don't expect this kind of thing to happen in our sport.
  21. thanks for sharing another well-constructed chapter. I think they have their happily ever after all in store really. good for them.
  22. thanks for sharing another charming chapter.
  23. thanks for sharing. you offer an interesting insight into European culture here. there are certainly no easy answers to these issues. bigotry in many forms is always a problem.
  24. carringtonrj

    Doing the Tanka

    This is really good. Clear and compact and precise with so many suggested resonances. You should definitely post some more. Hopefully GA can give you some of the warmth you are missing.
  25. strong images. you write with real imagination. post more poems.
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