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There's something very beautiful here. These times are the ones that make us who we are, I guess.
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Was it just one night...?
carringtonrj commented on Frostina's story chapter in Was it just one night...?
Dark power. You have a vivid, original imagination. Like! -
Nicely done, this one. Trott: four, bi the way. Thought I'd put a cryptic reference in to fool everyone! But I do like the way you handle this conversation. These characters seem to be taking on a life of their own!
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It's fun the way you're putting a story together through different styles and methods. Very post-modern!
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Well, the ape thing certainly was a bit surreal, but I think you did enough to hint that it was a dream, then you made something out of it - part of his anxieties. So I think it worked well.
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Nice touches! You may have been reading my mind for some of this - I won't tell you which bits! - but that's OK! Seriously: you write really sharply. I'm enjoying this read.
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Good stuff. Good ending. I like the way you suggest lots and give only a little away. Makes reading fun.
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Interesting ending! A detailed universe you are constructing bit by bit - very impressive. You write so imaginatively.
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I really like this. Nice suggestions for us to wonder about. Lovely descriptions. Lots of hints and imaginative touches.
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You have lots of interesting thoughts. I like the way you think things through bit by bit. You write in your own, precise, original way.
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I like the ending. You have some really interesting thoughts and your language develops as it advances, really interesting.
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I like this. a lovely thing to write for a lover.
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I like what you do here. It could be the first poem in an anthology of your work. I love the idea of poetry as a journey into someone's imagination. And I like the idea of being invited to travel with someone as you read their work.
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i like some of the vocabulary here, different and thought-provoking. some good images to dwell over. you write really well!
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gorgeous. how great to be so happy in love!
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how great to be able to watch such warm feelings finding their expression!
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sweet and heartfelt. great to be able to put strong feelings into words.
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Have I made progress? I think I have.
carringtonrj commented on Mark92's blog entry in Mark92's Blog
You seem like an extraordinary person with so much going for you in spite of the hardships you've fought through. And look how many friends you have here who care deeply about you! Keep progressing would be my advice - it's all in front of you. -
Funny! We went for a quiet wedding, yet still someone tried to bring a couple of random children whom I had never met and weren't even related to the person bringing them, who just wanted to give them a holiday!
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Gorgeous, N. Some stirrings of a "ahem" nature! You write so well. Original and imaginative. And you're such a tease - watch out there's hard sex here! Then "glory will purr" - hmmm, lapping it up, like cream!
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I like little compact stories like this. You do this one so well, packing everything in beautifully. Especially now, the ending touched me. Hope you do have more like this.
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I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
carringtonrj commented on Nephylim's story chapter in I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
Fine writing as ever, N. I did think that you were trying to tell yourself something, maybe, in the light of the blog the other day. A voice within you is calling out: but what is it saying? Anyhow, I do admire your writing. -
This was different and interesting - small but perfectly formed. Hope you post lots more like this.
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A fun story, and sexy! You have interesting ideas, original takes on things.
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You write really well. Fine imagination. Original details. Lively style. A good read.
