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This is just a Lugh prompt
carringtonrj commented on Mark92's story chapter in This is just a Lugh prompt
Sweet! Nice that you're so in love and want to shout about it! -
You structure the story with such expert control and yet you do not sacrifice any immediacy or emotional involvement in doing that. A great little story. Love it. And, yes, respect for having a happy ending: makes the journey worth while.
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Really good. You write so surely and precisely. Haunting story. May give me bad dreams! I mean that as a compliment!
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Ahem! Hot stuff. Whoops, I typed "hot stiff" first - might be more appropriate. I think my typing is going to pieces here because of the aftershock of reading such sexy stuff! Boy, you can write!
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Great pace and energy and interesting hints here about who are cat is or what's so important about him. You inject the peril precisely. And you deal with pain so truthfully - though I can guess where some of that comes from! Still wondering exactly where we're heading - which is a good thing, of course. You sure can write.
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Messed up people! But powerfully realised. You have an interesting imagination, for sure.
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It doesn't get less harsh, huh?
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Real, I suspect, in a sad, awkward, troubling way. But you write very powerfully, with some fine touches of language.
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Hot and harsh!
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Weirdly interesting, and troubling too. The sex is good. The emotions are harsh! You do "twisted" really well.
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Nicely developed, but I get a feeling something bad is about to happen!
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Extreme! Sexy, but disturbing too. An interesting beginning, with lots of possible complications and emotions suggested. You leave a lot ambivalent, which is great. You write very powerfully, and the mixed emotions add subtlety. You leave this reader, anyhow, unsure what to feel, which is a mark of interesting writing, I guess.
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Sweet. Why did this sort of thing never happen to me? I do like these little tales of yours.
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# 43 Her Laugh Broke the Silence
carringtonrj commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in # 43 Her Laugh Broke the Silence
Nice moment, smartly captured. I like these little slices of life. -
# 26 Moon Night (A Poem)
carringtonrj commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in # 26 Moon Night (A Poem)
Some affecting images here. Imaginative language work. You write well and with an original perspective. -
#47 The Frog Prince (Heinrich)
carringtonrj commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in #47 The Frog Prince (Heinrich)
Nice twist. Good to see the Prince not getting things his own way for a change. -
Well put. I used to have problems sleeping but not recently. I wonder why! Finally happy, maybe! Anyhow, you have a way with words. Respect!
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You write well and should post more - in my non-expert opinion! I liked this.
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steamy!
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Sweet. Nice to see things going well. You're not going to do mean things to them now, are you?
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Good chapter. More straight than the others - if I dare use the word! You know what I mean. You write really well.
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Another purring chapter. Lovely. Dramatic. Plenty to anticipate. Scratches cat's head: makes it squirm with pleasure!
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Intense!
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you write well. you explore feelings thoughtfully. i guess we have all been there, in our ways. lovely writing.
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Imaginative story. Interesting character and situation. You raise the issue of meeting folks online, which is a fraught one, but I think you do it senstively.
