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Another great story Carlos, but I have to admit I feel a little bit like Oliver Twist asking "Please Sir.... Can I have more ? " also going cold turkey between stories is painful. Thank you for your contributions they really makes for enjoyable reading. Looking forward to the next story before your hiatus. Take care and many thanks Carlos.

I have to think Northman is a trump lover with his attitude and his seeming dislike for Mexico as well as his dislike for CJ being a Democrat. Lets hope he suffers from a significant injury soon and is shipped home. Looking forward to see how 007 C.J Abello gets on next. Thanks Carlos another great chapter.

I liked Kent, I think he's a sly old dog knows his way around and could be very helpful to a young pup like CJ 😇hope we get to hear more from him.

Hi Dodger, well had a strong feeling you would blame Robbie for being the dad, instead of Dirty Don. Why you let that bottom feeder get away with things I don't know. Would have been just what Sue needed to dump him, Steph could say she was drunk and he took advantage of her, get him locked up and bring his "Empire" down around his ears, Oh, happy thoughts.

Dodger, this was a really beautiful chapter. Loved the Sue and Robbie section and with Robbie and Nathan, oh what the hell, I loved it after donny pissed off. After so much strife it was nice to have a bonding chapter for them all. As for the story, it would make my day if the next chapter was about donny driving along crashed his car, trapped in it and it caught fire he burned to death most horribly screaming and begging for help, which he didn't get. Yes, yes, I know its still too quick a death for him, but I do think I would have to cover my keyboard in case I made a mess over it in my excitement. Thanks for a great chapter.

Great chapter to a great story , Carlos. Seems Rich is taking the Airforce in his stride. Interesting rooming him and Boxworth together, maybe Rich could even be tempted to try climbing over the fence just once to see what its all about? ☺️

Carry on films should be standard education in all schools world wide, NOT a single swear word and depending how dirty your mind is, the innuendos will leave you in tears of laughter...... ( I have a very dirty mind so I am always crying with laughter ) have the set and watch when I feel down. As for Stephanie having a bun in the oven I think Robbie is safe..... more likely its either donny's or Connor. Excellent chapter Dodger really enjoyed it, thanks.

I think donny really needs to die, maybe a car crash with a fuel tanker and he burns alive, or, maybe something worse. You would make so many of your loyal faithful readers happy and think of the cost it would save Sue with cremation, its the little things in life that bring cheer. I cant understand why donny is being given all these chances to mess up everyone's life's, he's a poisonous mentally unstable creep, ok, you caught me out, I don't like him, there I said it. Another great chapter and another cliff hanger this time with Stephanie.

As I have said before, these "Pillars" of the community always have a dirty hidden side. Don knows to much about what goes on in town for just a businesses man, and the people he knows leave a lot to be desired. Don is involved right up to his child abusing mouth, symmonds and how many others are involved in this Payton Place of child sex and drugs. As for connor I still feel he was involved in Nathans attack, hes a bunny boiler which would suit donny and the others of donny's group well. Get rid of connor hes the new weak link and will make a mistake maybe Robbie will contact Alex to find out who set Nathan up. Good chapter Dodger. I am sure that with the next chapter connor's family 's farm problem will be helped by donny in return for connor to join his groups stable of young rent boys and sell drugs for them.

Conner is my prime suspect in beating up Nathan, I wouldn't put it passed him sneaking out at night to do the dastardly deed, wouldn't take much to send him a txt from "robbie" asking him to meet. Conner seems to be a bit of a bunny boiler truth be told and has a very sadistic side, enjoys controlling who and what he wants. I am starting to like him as much as i like donny.............................⚰️🕳️💩

Hi Sasha, I really have to say that this is my favourite story which I have reread several times. But I was wondering if you still were going to write the sequel? I know its been several years now but I often look in hope that you start to publish it.

@droughtquake did this actually happen or a wind up?? as didn't hear anything in uk .

@droughtquake If its a funeral then I can say with hand on heart (and with half a dozen 6" nails and hammer in hand to make sure the lid stays down) I hope its for donny ⚰️ oh happy thoughts 😇

If he does Droughtquake he can have a skype wank with Connor then after he has cum dump him 😊

Connor is hard work, Robbie I thought was finally dumping him only to go back again, is he only interested in a cock up his arse? I do hope one of them dumps the other soon. There is something about Connor that does not gel, almost like hes nice until he gets his way and turns in to a bully control freak, if Robbie does dump him I do hope Connor does not turn in to a bunny boiler. A big part of me wants Daniel to get curious enough for him and Robbie to have a session I think Daniel has messed around with Nathan already but thanks to donnys homophobic attitude put that behind him. Yes Nathan acts like a slut, but if you look at him he does care about those he feels relaxed with and that is Robbie as well as Daniel, (Mmmm Nathan, Robbie and Daniel in a 3some) and uses others he does not care about to try and lure Robbie back after all it seems a coincident he turns up at all the party's Robbie is at with a stranger in tow and makes a bee line to Robbie and spends all his time flirting with him basically ignoring the guy he arrived with . I think Nathan and Robbie need one hell of a sex session to decide ( Dodger, if you do want to throw Daniel in to the mix I will not complain ) how they actually feel about each other. Alex is probably in trouble with his supplier and owes him the 2k or we could hear Alex is either face down in a ditch or has been sold to a group of guys as a play thing for them. As for donny, is there never a fatal car crash in cold snow conditions??? one can only hope there is and its donny.

Great chapter as well as sad. Loss is a terrible thing especially if at a young age with a whole life ahead, unfortunately loss can also be hidden from others but at the same time eats away inside that person until it breaks out as it has with Pam. I expect many other's of the family still have deep feelings of sadness which could also be the underlying causes of Spencer's arguments with his Mother as well as her insistence of the ceremony etc which she was denied with Liz. Loss is sad despite the age but it is so often over looked as we try and get on with our lives and do not notice the struggle of others.

Hi Carlos, must admit I nearly over looked the start of this story i didn't know it was a CJ/OZ story, as the title did not give anything away what it was about. 🙈 But when I saw the number of comments posted I had to take a look, lo and behold a continuation of our favourite guys. 😋 Good start Carlos I know what to look for now on the updates. 🧐

Think this is a topic that really has no end, statistics are made to try and give something credence, there are to many people giving themselves labels just to try setting a "new" trend using a word no one has heard of or inventing a word. Why are people trying to pigeon hole themselves ? We want acceptance as equals then make a category to put each other and our self's in. You are what you are and you like what you like........... as far as i am concerned I am ME, and its no one else's business.

@ Talo Segura, lol that was what I meant but think it got lost in translation yeah lots of gay babies keep the population down by a billion or so.

Just had a thought, yeah I know...dangerous. what if they are trying to find what makes people "gay" then to put in to birth control so it reduces the worlds population? OMG.... all those pastel colours everywhere lol

Of course it could mean that the Mother really wanted a little girl this time and she decided to put some effort in to sex for a change............. but still not enough effort for a full conversion in to making a girl.......... damn I lost count of the cracks on the ceiling again, oh and I forgot to add cornflakes to the shopping list. Then we have a man who loves men whats the problem with that? it sounds perfectly natural to me. But this could be the start of a slippery slope , if it is possible to determine this what steps would be taken to stop this from happening in the future ? slip a serum in to an innocent inoculation to alter this........ and then what other change's will be made to a fetus ? I know lets find the antibodies that make mad scientists.

Well Dodger, you said it correctly. People can be brought if enough money is offered, I wonder what VERY expensive items Sue, Daniel, Nicola and Amy will soon receive for selling Robbie out? Donny has proved he's a piece of crap always wanting to control, Nicola blew all the good she had done in the past out of the water with her comments about daddy and how its HER family not Robbie's. I expect Daniel will be next to turn on Robbie.

Hi Dodger, great chapter and was there a clue in that chapter about donny? " Don probably knew it too and looked unimpressed when Tinkerbell told a story about an evil, balding bigot, who lived at the top of the hill and preyed on young gay boys." I am sure if anyone in that town knew if anything was going on Nathan would, as I said in an earlier chapter about donny and choir boys who knows what the "pillars" of the community get up to. Its snowing and as you know my love for snow blowers and donny getting "blown" sounds more like it could yet happen lol, yeah I know you said about the mess it would make so in that case how about donny accidentally taking an drug overdose in a gay bathhouse and dies in a sling room with the door open on a friday night no one notices hes dead and he is not found until monday morning the worse for wear when the staff clean ?? yeah i know there will be some mess to clean up but it would not be as bad this way lol Well, I am sure you already have the ending in mind so I will leave my warped mind to think of more ways donny can die. I know hes only fictional in the story but its your great writing skills that has brought him and the other to life, but god I HATE HIM SO MUCH. Thanks Dodger.

Ok Dodger, i have gone from killing donny slowly and painfully to fast and extremely painfully. I will forgo my pleasure of his slow death to getting him out of the way quick. Maybe checking the boys handy work with the lights making sure the connections are good while standing in water, running in front of a truck/bus or my favourite death by snowblower. Another great chapter but i would have called Jo the first chance I got instead of leaving it. Thanks Dodger.....

donny's back, like Jack Nicholson in 'The Shinning' how i loath that piece of shit. Can you PLEASE kill him, painfully, slowly and alone, maybe a car crash drowning in a river trapped in his car, or watching as a power line drops on him oh its amazing how a happy thought can cheer me up after those last two lines of the chapter. Loved the chapter Dodger at least until the last two lines. Look forward to the next part. thanks Dodger.