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Hi Daddydave, Great story, enjoyed it even more as I was able to read it in its entirety in two sittings and not wait for each chapter, thought provoking and incisive lets hope that book 2 is soon to follow. Thanks once again for an enjoyable read. Jeff.

Hi Bhopper, just wondering if your planning a release date for the next chapter of this enjoyable story?

Hi KD, I have been reading this excellent story on Nifty and I am at chapter 19, however since you have been posting on here have you stopped updating on Nifty as I am suffering from severe withdrawal symptoms waiting for this story to catch up

Really liking the way this story is forming, the past few chapters are setting up the characters and the background to the story very nicely, only problem with reading from an early stage is waiting for the next chapter to be posted Think this story is going on to great strengths. Look forward to reading more. Thanks BHopper.

Wow, what an enjoyable start to this story. I look forward to the next and many more chapters.

Hi Dodger. Found this story a few days ago and had the pleasure to read all 48 chapters. I think you have found a real balance with the characters with the prim and proper Fran who seems to be a nymphomaniac now she has lost her V card, the pain in the arse step sister Nicola Daniel I think shy but popular step brother and little Amy a proper little madam lol. Don and Sue, well the jury is still out on them, Sue could be ok with things but I see Don getting on his high horse and separating Daniel and Robbie from sleeping together fearing Robbie will turn Daniel gay, The guy needs a reality check who knows what HE got up to in college??, many guys have their first man on man sex at college. It was sad about Robbie's mum and the way things were left in England but i think Tom was using Robbie as a sex toy so he is better off in Canada. As for Nathan, think this could go on for a long time and will be the making of them both but I see dark clouds on the horizon. REALLY enjoyed the story so far Dodger, and look forward to the next chapter and the next 48 chapters or maybe 148 more chapters lol who said you cant have to much of a good thing?? Thanks so much Dodger.

Hi Riley. Its been well over a week since you killed Ryan off and to be honest i am still angry. I understand its your story and only you know where its going but I feel that as Ryan was such a well liked character he should have been allowed to live. With his background and his family's influence he could have gone a long way with his drive, charm and dare I say maturity, maybe he could have left to live with his Grandparents then who knows, maybe in later life in to politics or something that could make a change to peoples lives?? His character could have in my opinion had a book about him on its own. But that will not happen now. Luke has always been sitting on the fence, in fact the only thing he really took issue with was getting circumcised, every thing else he sat back to see where the flock roamed then followed. Now he has lost someone who could have help take him out of his shell. Maybe Ryan was to strong for Luke, that Luke saw him as to dominant, organised, popular compared to himself, who knows, only you Riley. Elliot, in many ways he is similar in my opinion, ISH he followed Miguel it was he who brought Elliot out but what did he do when he returned to the USA? from what we can gather he hung around with his family and girlfriends. Did he meet other gay boys? nothing has really been said only tentatively, as for how strong he is, well the fire at the Academy school in the art block showed that he has a long way to go before he can move on as he still has not got over the death of Miguel. Could the two of them form a relationship? I don't see it, they may help each other bury their demons but both are damaged, both need a strong person to help guide them. Will I read the next book of this story? yeah, I will give it a go and see how the story continues, I have to admit that I do like your style of writing and what I have read so far. Its your story Riley, we the reader can like it or lump it, maybe by the time you post the new story i will not be as angry with the loss of in my opinion such a special character. I just hope that Luke grows a pair now he's been given another chance at life.

Fantasyboy THANK YOU for such a wonderful story ........and damn you for making me cry. This was a story I only just found and had to read all the chapter's as it was too good to put down. I do hope that you write a second book about the adventures of Gabe and Ryle. Thank you.

Carlos, you sadist !!!! how could you leave us hanging this way I hope the new season starts soon, i have to admit this is a really great story...... but...... a cliff hanger??? Thanks for the thrilling read, look forward to the next part.

Another great read left me wanting more. Will you be writing a book 3??? Thank you for two exciting stories that pull the reader in to being part of the pack, a sign of a really talented author.

Hi Rob, just wondering if there is any news on book 3 of this great series. I know you are concentrating on Galactic Conspiracies series but so many of your readers also love the Timber Pack series. Any updates ?? Thanks.

I found this 2nd book after i wrote my review for book 1. I do hope you continue this book, I too had writers block with a book i am writing after many chapters and many months but i found rereading several times and making alterations to the story helped me focus again. But less about me, this is once again a great read and a enjoyable read complimenting book 1, you have a natural grasp of holding the readers imagination causing the reader to not want to put the story down until the last full stop. I really hope you are now in the mindset to continue this story that you are so capable of completing. Thank you.

Only six chapter's, I was disappointed, but what six chapters they were. I really did not want this great story to finish reading it through in one sitting and bringing a new species the Solaris in to the mix was inventive. I do hope that you will continue with this story of Jon, Pat and Dylan etc when they move to their new home and the adventures they could have. I think we all understand that being an author is time consuming and you have other ideas for books as well as a life outside of GA, but please try and spare time to continue this story, many people I am sure would love to read its continuation. Thanks.

Hi Andrew, A great chapter. I have to admit the last couple of chapter's were hard going and I had to read them a couple of times due to the new characters and paving the way for them in to the story, in fact I had to re-read in case I had missed a chapter out. But this chapter was worth the wait and now they seem to fit in the story better with the mix of all the guys instead of one or two helps and is only a matter of time before they all meet each other. Looking forward to the next episode of The Chosen, Thanks.

Such a wonderful story one that I have spent time enjoying the lives and adventures of everyone, however it also fills me with sadness that it is the end, no more opening up GA and finding the new chapter of this great story waiting for me to read. I only hope that the next book will start as soon as possible call me greedy, but how can anyone have too much of a good thing. We all understand that writing takes up so much of an authors time and thank you for sharing that time with us.............BUT......... please release the sequal soon

Wow, a Neanderthal wolf, way to go Tay. Maybe you should have just clubbed Kurt and dragged him in to a cave by his hair. Its ok for people to have "pet"names for each other but come on, some discretion is needed when in public, hello, Embarrassment!!!! Ok, Tay and Kurt are on a new learning curve, but Tay needs to cool down on the "Me Tarzan you Jane" scenario. Great story love how its going, one question, Deoran called Kurt "Mate" now in England its a term we call friends but in this case, is it about a friend??????????

Hi Rob, just finished this great story and you really left me wanting more. Is there going to be a book 2 coming out anytime soon?? hey call me greedy but you cant have to much of a good thing you left me with a want want want feeling, :lugh: Looking forward to reading more of your work. Jeff

I was hoping this was a new chapter but its been on the nifty site for some time now.

What a lovely story, full of depth and with sadness and joy. I do have to be honest for some reason I thought it was set in the USA, with the community etc it was not until Isaac found his family that I realised it was in England. Well written and a very enjoyable read. Thank you.

Just found this story, read it through in one go, really enjoyed it. Have you thought about a follow up?? Thanks for a great read. Jeff.

Just found this story and have enjoyed immensly, hope ch 15 is posted soon. Thank you.

Hi Billy, this is a link that can explain some of what has gone on with nifty etc. https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/27159-an-english-teen-circumcised-in-the-usanifty-changes-title/ I have spoken to someone on here who has voiced the same as you that Riley may have gone down the e-book road and may like others be heading for Kindle?? So I will take a look on amazon. Jeff.

Thanks HH5, will take a look

Ok I know there has been a discussion about this subject before, but no answers were given. Since the nifty saga about Riley's story An English Teen Circumsised in the USA was title changed and the following discussion on here about it, the question I am asking is "Where has Riley taken his story to" Nothing has been said that he has left GA in fact several people spoken to have no idea where he has gone with all his works, in fact it seems he has walked out of GA and nifty over this.......WHY??? I can only assume someone said something (unpublished) to him that he took umbridge with as according to his GA forum posts he seemed happy with GA and his story being published on here. So, where has he gone to???? I have IM'd him on here, messaged him on facebook and nothing, not a peep, has he taken his work to another story site?? Does anyone still have contact with him?? is he still writing?? I for one would like to continue reading this and any other stories he has or is writing. For a author such as he, to just up and walk away something must have happened. Thanks.

Hi X, once again I have read this truly incredable story, I know you said you had other things in your life that were pressing but you also said you may get around to writing a second book about the continuing story of Jacob and Q. Any news on that??? Thanks. Jeff.