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  1. Hi Dodger, well had a strong feeling you would blame Robbie for being the dad, instead of Dirty Don. Why you let that bottom feeder get away with things I don't know. Would have been just what Sue needed to dump him, Steph could say she was drunk and he took advantage of her, get him locked up and bring his "Empire" down around his ears, Oh, happy thoughts.
  2. Dodger, this was a really beautiful chapter. Loved the Sue and Robbie section and with Robbie and Nathan, oh what the hell, I loved it after donny pissed off. After so much strife it was nice to have a bonding chapter for them all. As for the story, it would make my day if the next chapter was about donny driving along crashed his car, trapped in it and it caught fire he burned to death most horribly screaming and begging for help, which he didn't get. Yes, yes, I know its still too quick a death for him, but I do think I would have to cover my keyboard in case I made a me
  3. Great chapter to a great story , Carlos. Seems Rich is taking the Airforce in his stride. Interesting rooming him and Boxworth together, maybe Rich could even be tempted to try climbing over the fence just once to see what its all about? ☺️
  4. Carry on films should be standard education in all schools world wide, NOT a single swear word and depending how dirty your mind is, the innuendos will leave you in tears of laughter...... ( I have a very dirty mind so I am always crying with laughter ) have the set and watch when I feel down. As for Stephanie having a bun in the oven I think Robbie is safe..... more likely its either donny's or Connor. Excellent chapter Dodger really enjoyed it, thanks.
  5. I think donny really needs to die, maybe a car crash with a fuel tanker and he burns alive, or, maybe something worse. You would make so many of your loyal faithful readers happy and think of the cost it would save Sue with cremation, its the little things in life that bring cheer. I cant understand why donny is being given all these chances to mess up everyone's life's, he's a poisonous mentally unstable creep, ok, you caught me out, I don't like him, there I said it. Another great chapter and another cliff hanger this time with Stephanie.
  6. As I have said before, these "Pillars" of the community always have a dirty hidden side. Don knows to much about what goes on in town for just a businesses man, and the people he knows leave a lot to be desired. Don is involved right up to his child abusing mouth, symmonds and how many others are involved in this Payton Place of child sex and drugs. As for connor I still feel he was involved in Nathans attack, hes a bunny boiler which would suit donny and the others of donny's group well. Get rid of connor hes the new weak link and will make a mistake maybe Robbie will co
  7. Conner is my prime suspect in beating up Nathan, I wouldn't put it passed him sneaking out at night to do the dastardly deed, wouldn't take much to send him a txt from "robbie" asking him to meet. Conner seems to be a bit of a bunny boiler truth be told and has a very sadistic side, enjoys controlling who and what he wants. I am starting to like him as much as i like donny.............................⚰️🕳️💩
  8. Jeff1

    Chapter 11

    Hi Sasha, I really have to say that this is my favourite story which I have reread several times. But I was wondering if you still were going to write the sequel? I know its been several years now but I often look in hope that you start to publish it.
  9. @droughtquake did this actually happen or a wind up?? as didn't hear anything in uk .
  10. @droughtquake If its a funeral then I can say with hand on heart (and with half a dozen 6" nails and hammer in hand to make sure the lid stays down) I hope its for donny ⚰️ oh happy thoughts 😇
  11. If he does Droughtquake he can have a skype wank with Connor then after he has cum dump him 😊
  12. Connor is hard work, Robbie I thought was finally dumping him only to go back again, is he only interested in a cock up his arse? I do hope one of them dumps the other soon. There is something about Connor that does not gel, almost like hes nice until he gets his way and turns in to a bully control freak, if Robbie does dump him I do hope Connor does not turn in to a bunny boiler. A big part of me wants Daniel to get curious enough for him and Robbie to have a session I think Daniel has messed around with Nathan already but thanks to donnys homophobic attitude put that behind him.
  13. There is so much false news out there its really not worth listening to it, in the UK we have at least two anti-conservative gutter press rags who are constantly glorifying things to make it sound worse than it is and slang the conservative government off at every turn despite no one including the government knowing how to combat this virus. Thanks to the gutter rags we now have panic buying which if people just carried on as normal we would have plenty for everyone, but no lets all be selfish and to hell with everyone else. One thing that I do find amusing is that its 2020 and peop
  14. Jeff1

    Christmas Day

    Great chapter as well as sad. Loss is a terrible thing especially if at a young age with a whole life ahead, unfortunately loss can also be hidden from others but at the same time eats away inside that person until it breaks out as it has with Pam. I expect many other's of the family still have deep feelings of sadness which could also be the underlying causes of Spencer's arguments with his Mother as well as her insistence of the ceremony etc which she was denied with Liz. Loss is sad despite the age but it is so often over looked as we try and get on with our lives and do not
  15. Jeff1

    Christmas Eve

    Hi Carlos, must admit I nearly over looked the start of this story i didn't know it was a CJ/OZ story, as the title did not give anything away what it was about. 🙈 But when I saw the number of comments posted I had to take a look, lo and behold a continuation of our favourite guys. 😋 Good start Carlos I know what to look for now on the updates. 🧐
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