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Wonderful story................. A real enjoyment to read............Thank you so much......

Hi Carlos, another great chapter. Really enjoying this but the year is going so fast. One question, with the high standard of grammar you write with it was odd for an old word that I have not heard of since my early school years crop up......"Thunk" "Who’d thunk checking yourself for testicular cancer could bring a smile to a kid’s face?” Now when I was a kid I wasn't checking for testicular cancer as we hardly knew about that in those days before the invention of the wheel. I just enjoyed doing it and still do Lol, But I won't hold it against you, next chapter please.

Ron always was a bit of a dick, even in the JK books "The Goblet of Fire" for example, must admit he's even more of one so far. As a VERY avid reader of the Rawling's Harry Potter books, I thinks this story so far would do justice to her story's, I know I am certainly enjoying it. Thanks so much.

This is the second HP fan story I am reading, as I told the other author reading these story's has been a real eye opener for me. After reading the originals I felt that nothing could transport me in to the HP world with the same intense love of the story's. But I am really glad to say that I have now found two story's that transport me to that same enjoyment as the originals of JK Rowling. This may only be chapter 2 but I am hooked. Thanks.

Only just found this story, so glad I have. Still a few chapter's to catch up on but like the feel so far. Jeff.

Really like the way this story is going, didn't expect the twist with the space ship and crew. Thanks.

Wow, what a complex and really enjoyable story so far. I must admit its making me read a lot slower than normal, in fact on several areas rereading it again but the little gray cell's are coping. I like the way there are multi pov's from the other story lines within the story. This story is a keeper, really enjoying it and still a few more chapters to go. Thanks.

Mmmmm, Not sure what to say, having just read the story in one go so far i am intrigued. This is the FIRST Harry Potter fan story I have ever read, after reading the originals of JK which to be honest transported me in to the world of HP and felt as if I was there I didn't want to read any other. This on the other hand was really good, the betrayal by "friends" and those who were supposed to watch over him and those who were kept away who could have changed his life have changed the whole HP story line. Reading this has taken me down a path I had not expected and I am enjoying the rush. As other's have said, we hope the next chapter is being sent by magic quill as we speak, and not wait to long. Thanks.

Amazing story, but at first I have to admit I passed it by as the title didn't really catch me. I am so glad I came back to it . This has the start of a very interesting story but " Side Effects" to the cure, now that has my mind going at different tangents all over the place. Thanks. Jeff.

At least William has a has the SAVVY to say it as it is. If the upgrade had been given more thought before it was implemented maybe so many questions would not keep being asked instead its throw it out there and wait for the complaints to come in and then we know whats wrong. If that's the case with so many members you will always get copy questions Yes you HAD to change the site with the reductions with plug-ins that servers etc are cutting down, yes its nice to have a fresh site, NO its not nice having pages and pages which are NOT being cleared as we were told would happen automatically or emails full of notifications from people that we follow mainly JUST FOR THEIR STORY, when we also get flooded with all their other notifications as well. William has given a VALID suggestion have a Known Problem Section and also a Problem Solved Section, which will more than likely be empty, be introduced. Try reading every question, see how long it takes, many answers don't even apply to the question asked or the answer doesn't work because the site is not able to save changes. So expect to get many more copy questions because many readers are not daily visitors and will come on here every so often and it will be their FIRST TIME, .......................More Questions. So don't get ratty with the members, who are kept in the dark and have to listen to several people telling them different things and nothing happens.

Hi all, Will the toggle's for the Story section be activated so we can use the items within? At the moment I receive a large number of notifications that are flooding my mail box on here and I certainly don't want that volume of notifications flooding my email account. I have only the Receive notifications from people I follow ie AUTHORS set but when one of these authors post anything at all I get it, NO OFFENSE to the authors but I dont really want to read everything they post but I do want to know when a new chapter to a story I am following is posted. I really would like the toggle for " Notify me when a chapter for a story I follow" is activated. also before the upgrade I could delete any of these notifications now I have about 4 pages of them that the system is not clearing automatically as I was told in an earlier posting. It seems that the only way around this is to unfollow everyone on here. Can anyone help or am I not seeing something??? Thanks.

Does this mean that when you click on the notifications, Marked as Read then in time the system will erase them for us? as there are no check boxes to save those notifications we want to keep.

Doozy is one word lol Actually Carlos, I can't access Part 2 of this all I get is the story title and a section on you thanking people who helped you with it. So I may still have to wait for the second part ;(

At least one thing hasn't been affected by the "site downgrade....sorry upgrade" and that is your Superior writing skills. Thanks Carlos, great chapter.

How sad another great gripping story not finished, I wish I had not started this now, : note to self, remember to check last chapter update, then pass.

Great story which I hope you will continue. There is i feel such a wide ranging story lines involving Ren,Ryan Kaya and Kiyo for future chapters. Thanks so much for an enjoyable chapter.

Hi Sasha. Sorry I had to post this on Ch 1 as there is no place to comment on the last chapter. Its been a while now and have reread this story many times still enjoying it each occasion. At the end of this great story you said there was going to be a sequel, Raising Wolf, its been a few years now, is the story going to be added to your wonderful collection of stories on GA or is it still in the pipe line?? Thanks for many enjoyable stories. Jeff.

Hi Phoenix, its been a long time and dont know if your still on GA. But have read once again the Devils Son and was wondering if the second book had been finished yet. After such an enjoyable first book i and many others would like another story . Thanks. Jeff.

Really nice chapter Carlos, well written, sad but filled with hope. Can we expect Richie to move to DC ??? who knows, but some how I am sure you have a twist awaiting us lol. Thanks. Jeff

Hi Carlos, great chapter and dare I say it a possible cliffhanger?? nah....never... Really enjoying the story's and the information you add about places and people makes the reader feel as if they are there. But this chapter was perplexing, it almost seemed you were in a rush to get to the end. The time gaps between different segments made it difficult and I had to re-read in case I had missed something. For example, at the end of one paragraph CJ and Owen are going for a test as CJ wants to play catcher au natural , Start of next paragraph Owen and CJ are Skyping as Owen is now in OZ. Then suddenly they are all in Miami, then all at a football game, seemed odd that there was no lead up to any of these things like you normally do. But despite that it was a good chapter and hope the next is out soon. Thanks.

:heart: This story, need more

Damn, didn't know this next Homestead story was out until I caught sight of it totally by chance. Good to read 4 chapters in one go now need the next asap. Thanks again for the start of another GREAT read. Jeff.

I read this truly wonderful story when it was first published. This is the third time i have read it and it still hold me with tears in my eyes such is the great writing of the author. I often wonder if a sequel of Dorian after college and what he and his friends do in adult life. Thanks for a beautiful story. Jeff.

What a wonderful story this is turning in to, so glad I found this, looking forward to so many more chapters. Jeff.

Wow, just read this story in three sittings, well would have been one sitting but going to work got in the way. Was hooked on this story from the start, really fun to read and so enjoyable. Sad that there is only the epilogue left when there are so many loose ends that book 2 would easily fill some of them so maybe a book 3 as well??? I am sure all your readers would jump at the chance to read more. Thank you for a wonderful read please try and continue. Jeff..