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You might be onto something, Skinny.
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Hold on, this will hurt more than anything has before What it was, what it was, what it was. I've brought this on us, more than anyone could ignore What I've done, what I've done, what I've done. WILLIAM FITZSIMMONS & PRISCILLA AHN - I DON'T FEEL IT ANYMORE (2008) * * * * * Eli slumped back into the couch and brought his inhaler to his mouth; he took two puffs and held them in. He let out a little cough and leaned forward on his knees, looking through the rails of the loft and out the
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Chapter 8 is out to Lisa right now, and she said she'd have it to me as quick as she could. I'm hoping I can post either late tonight or sometime tomorrow.
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It is finished on Nifty, but I had tried to do an edit. My plans are to finish the first book of die catfish die, and then to do a major edit and post the story in its entirety. I want to add Shadow to it, as well, but I'm trying to figure out how I want to write that story. http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-friends/lem/lem-16.html (There was an extra chapter added on GA, so the next chapter for you starts with 16, if you want to continue.) It will be over here in its entirety at some point.
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I think Chase's mom's tolerance is more ignorance than anything. Many parents don't have a clue about what their kids friends get up to. Joey is one of a few key characters that you will abhor way before the end of book 1, but religious, he is not. Thanks for the comment, SD.
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I'm used to it by now. Another day, just believe. Just breathe. Just believe. Just breathe. Lying in my bed, Another day, staring at the ceiling. Télépopmusik - Breathe [2001] * * * * * FrgJkb88: You put me in a bad mood. DHG: I’m sorry, but we need to talk. Eli shook his head and sat down, his mattress heaving under his weight with a light squeak. FrgJkb88: I’m busy. DHG: Turn on the news. He’s getting reckless. Before Eli could reply, there came another message. DHG: When can we meet?
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An endearing work. Thanks for a good story.
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Week Fourteen Friday, December 5, 2014: Overwhelmed
Milos commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Fourteen Friday, December 5, 2014: Overwhelmed
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Hopefully, Doc Hague can shed some light on the situation.
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It's hard to find research on abusive and toxic friendships, especially dealing with teens. It seems to be a newer phenomena, or at least newly explored. And Bobberson is to DCD as Backdraft was to Lem.
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Well, gotta have some sort of mystery! Let's just hope it's not Judge Mom!
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Joey and Chase -- the million dollar question. Still a lot of story to come, and plenty of ups and downs. Things won't be what you expect. Thanks for reading and commenting! It means a lot to me as a writer.
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Thanks again for the kind words. I really try to make my characters as well rounded as I can. Nothing I hate more than a cardboard cutout character who's just there and not doing anything. Onward we go!
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What is happening to me? Crazy someone say Where is my friend when I need you most? Gone away But I won’t cry for yesterday There’s an ordinary world Somehow I have to find. DURAN DURAN - ORDINARY WORLD (1992) * * * * * Eli’s eyes fluttered awake. Today, it hadn’t been his alarm that had woken him up, rather the thick smell of breakfast floating in the air. He rolled over, examined his alarm clock, and groaned; it was a few minutes south of six. He lingered between the sheets for a moment, p
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Hey everyone. New chapter going live tonight or early tomorrow morning.
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Week Thirteen Tuesday, November 25, 2014: Alex Moves In
Milos commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Thirteen Tuesday, November 25, 2014: Alex Moves In
"Why is there a before the time I can remember? I suddenly don’t know who I am." Haunting. I read this story for the gems like this. The wallpaper analogy felt so human, and very real. This is the kind of introspective focus I love in a story. -
**runs to google** Oh... shit.
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Week Twelve Sunday, November 23, 2014: Cat Fight
Milos commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Twelve Sunday, November 23, 2014: Cat Fight
I think this is one of your strongest chapters yet. I like that the focus fell more on David this time rather than escaping to the side characters. I feel his story, and the possible love triangle, is more urgent right now, and it feels like you've got something close on the horizon. Good job. -
Offense is the Best Defence
Milos commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
This story has completely captured me. I've marathoned the whole thing, so far, in two days, and I'm sad I'll have to wait for more. I was skeptical with the Parent Trap or Prince and the Pauper concept at first, but you've managed to execute the story perfectly, while still building good conflict and dynamic characters. Gemini sits in my top-ten favorites on GA. Please don't keep us waiting long-- I really need resolution. -
This is the first I've heard of Clevo. They look like they're inline to compete with MSI and Alienware gaming laptops. Alienware comes at a premium cost because of the name, but they aren't bad machines. The Clevo laptops look pretty cool, as far as design and specs, and I haven't really seen anything negative about them. I've not seen them in the states, either. Are they more of a European brand? Either way, it's a beefy looking product line, and if they are a reputable company, they look like decent computers.
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Thanks for the kind comments, SD. Glad to have you as a reader. I needed a cross-sectional look at Eli's family life for events coming up which would have been harder to explain later on. Speaking of cross-sectional looks into families, where's that damned preacher and David's mom going to pop up next? ಠ_ಠ I know it's coming!
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Family dynamic, I think, really helps shape a character or characters. With Eli, given the almost ridiculous circumstances of his family, I'm try to write him as honestly as I can, given what's in store for him, and nearly everyone else in the story. There will be a part where Eli is forced to help Benjamin and deal with him.
