Freddie1
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I really do not know how you do it but every chapter in this story turns into a tearjerker for me. There is not a single instance I can mention that is not great. I love this story in spite of my eyes always overflowing with tears. As always. Great job keep up with the good work. Love and lots of hugs.
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Tear jerker is putting it mildly. Rather say a flooding moment. @CLJobeyou do know how to play with our emotions.
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Most definitely a "fait accompli" I see another family member in the making here.
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Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
Freddie1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
Cruel is the ultimate understatement. Apart from that a brilliant story. Love reading it -
CL knows how to do a cliffhanger. Lol
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If it's up to Timothy, Bruce's balls is cooked. Love it. Brilliant story as as always from CL carry on with the good work
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One of the most difficult stories for me to read, only because of the subject. But one of the most brilliantly done stories also I felt everyone of Ben's anxieties and insecurities down into my bones. Rick.... A great character whish I had someone like that in my life. Great story thank you.
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The old shoe factory also has a nice ring to it. Great story.
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The boot Reborn. I would think would be perfect. Great story as always.
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Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
Freddie1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
I may be wrong but hopefully Kaplan got a hold of Cy's parents and they will be at the ceremony as a surprise. Just a thought though. Great story BTW. -
And best of all, the life are being taught by experience, that way it will never be forgotten. CL in my opinion this is one of your best stories yet. Can't wait to read the rest.
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😭😭😭. Exactly how I got through reading this chapter. Well done.
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And we all know the meaning of the word ASSUME, you are making an ASS out of U and ME.
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Read this series now for the 2nd time and still one of the best, if not THE best that i have ever read
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Now that was a surprise. Now i see where the right idea wrong people comes in. 🤣🤣
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What gives me the idea that Vic & Rita has got a surprise of an even bigger yacht for the family? Great story.
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My brother suffered from dyslexia and i can say for a fact that what Tom said is the truth. He was great at working with his hands but reading was a challenge. Once he understood a subject you would be hard pressed to prove him wrong.
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Fantastic first part of the story. Didn't comment on every chapter but enjoyed each and every one. Waiting impatiently for book 2.
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Clutch is a term where chickens is involved - a clutch of eggs -
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And if you notice its not typically south african ways of eating but mosyly south african meals. I love this story. Makes me whish i can go on a cruise with these two. I bet it would be fabulous.
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Another great story from you finished. Thank you.
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And here's mine added too, making it 8 now. Wow Appias is sure gonna get it.
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Again finished another great story from you. In-between the updates from the newest one. CL I wish I could have the talent you have with words. Every story I read from you so far has just produced floods. Carry on with your great work.
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Great start to a new story that i can already see to be just as good as haven. I've already clicked on follow, so will follow this one with bated breath.
