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  1. Kiltie69

    Chapter 1

    The Wedding Being the best man, I was seated at the bride’s table and Betty, Ashley’s mum, sat beside me, and one of the two bridesmaids, a lovely Indian girl called Tara. The other bridesmaid, also an Indian lass called Frosty, was on the other side, seated next to Peter, the groom’s younger brother. Both were dressed in an elegant green dress, made of a lustrous silk that celebrated the thirties. Ashley wore a sea-blue, silk, wedding dress while the groom’s party wore Highland attire wi
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    The Wedding

    My Best Friends Wedding and a Day I would remeber.
  3. Persinette, ive played since 40k started, i was 14. Lol. I even worked with GW for a spell. The armies I still use are Eldar, Isha's tears my own craft world, a massive mixed unit guard army, around 20000 points probably more. A Grey Night Company. Dark Eldar, and Necrons. For fantasy I still have dark elves and a slayer army. Mainly play the specialist games now. But still have the odd battle night with the guys I worked with. Tom
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    Chapter 1

    Love it Bella. cant wait for the rest.
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    Epilogue

    Well Nephylim, all i can say was that was a rollercoaster. I have just finished wiping tears from my eyes. I truly waanted to see Adam turn good and I did. you have gained another fan for your writings. Tom
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    Chapter 1

    Louis, loved it, just the right length for a ready for bed read. Will we be seeing a part two? Cleaned up my original review.
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    Chapter 2

    Louis, loved it, your main character is someone I would love to meet for a chat. Looking forward to more
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    Chapter 7

    Fantastic story Lugh, dark, but loving in unexpected ways. Thank you
  9. Comicfan, I'm have just finished chapter 24, it has me in tears, it brought back me ties of my mothers passing. The whole story has been a fantastic trip. Please keep it going. You have a loyal reader in me know. Tom
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    Lets Make Love

    I have a feeling we are in for an explosive end. keep it up Mark
  11. Two weeks with the Ensign. Part 2 Oliver was dreaming about Dan, they were back on Earth walking along a beach. He had his arm round Dan's waist and was leaning into him, his head on his chest. He liked the fact that Dan was taller ,he liked being able to rest his head and listen to his heart. In the distance he could hear a siren. It was the early warning system being tested. He lifted his head away from Dans chest listening to the sound. It gradually got louder. Dan sl
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the kind word Conner, BEta Editor is now in hand I hope.
  13. The story is Set in a Trekesk universe. The story is planned to be a multi chapter story, following the Young Captian.
  14. 2 Weeks with the Ensign Captain Oliver Jamieson entered the bridge of his new command. The Federated Planets Ship Marika Jones, a Falcon fast light cruiser, a well armed and armoured ship, designed for escort and patrol duties. It carried 12 Jaguar class multiple role attack craft and six boarding launches. The ship was crewed by 180 men and officers and a compliment of 60 marines, ages from 21 through to 40. Oliver was 27 years old and like all FPS officers was in perfect health.
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    Chapter 10

    Loving the story, especially the build up to this chapter.
  16. Your a huge tease Mark. Loving the story. T
  17. Morning with Sergei never came. It was that night that a massive counter offensive began. All the, recent, attacks had been made to test defences. Across the UK groups of resistance fighters and soldiers rose against the occupying force. The camp I was in was one of the largest in Scotland housing over two thousand military personnel, it was a major target. The camp was overwhelmed. Most of the guards were either captured or had escaped and fled. I had woken in the ward hearing gunfi
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    Lord of The Manor

    Im gald I stayed up tonight ot catch this just after loading. Lloving the story, love the characters. looking forward to more.
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    Chapter 1

    What can I say other than Ross is out getting some rope....cant wait for part two. Glad I waited till I got home. Tom
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    The Farmhand

    Mark, finished both chapters, and waiting for more. It takes someone very special to do what your doing, keep it coming. Tom
  21. This is the first part of a two parter short story i wrote recently. The tale is based on a dream I had as a young man. Its set in the none to distant future, the world is in turmoil and the UK has been invaded.
  22. I woke in a cot bed it was dark and cold; I had no idea where I was or how I got here. I could hear the sound of people around me snoring. What had happened to me? How had I gotten here? I sat up, slightly, taking in me surrounding. I was in a hut of some sort, there were a dozen beds lining one wall on the other side of the room a couple of tables with chairs and a stove. I tried to move but found I was restricted, my left arm in a cast, both my legs immobilised. On putting my hand to m
  23. Well just for my tuppence worth. id like to say, that I have never met a straight guy, a truly straight guy that would. Those straights that would were into some for of kink or were repressed and in the closet.
  24. Just wanted to say hi to everyone and thanks to all those who have already welcomed me to the site. rgds Kiltie (Tom from the Heart of Burns Country, SW Scotland)
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