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Great read. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey with the guys

I know what you mean about the characters having a life all of their own. It is the same when I write new chapters for Alex's story. Some chapters roll off the tongue, so to speak, so easy while others take days to write.

Hey Just wanted to add my few pennies to the mix. I've just finished reading all 8 chapters in one go. I have really enjoyed the play between the 3 main characters, can't really count Matt as a main at the moment. I like where the story is going and how it doesn't feel rushed. Hope more chapters will follow but don't rush them.

For me it was and still is Event Horizon. I can't put my finger on exactly why with that film but it is the only one to freak me out. Paranormal Activity just made me laugh, I thought Candyman was good. When I was a teen though I found Arachnophobia a little creepy only because of the spiders.

Hi everyone, just starting this as my story is now live. I hope you all enjoy reading it and any comments are welcomed, either positive or negative.

Hi Cia Thanks for the advice. Much appreciated. I will definitely look into what you have suggested.

As the reason for me joining here was to post my story, with the hopes it will be well received, I thought I should introduce myself. My name is Anthony and I live in South Wales in the UK. I guess my age isn't important, but for those who think it is, I am 32. After reading many stories on Nifty, some really good and some really bad, I wondered if I could do as good a job at writing as some of the other writers whose work I had enjoyed reading. I hope to post the story soon. I hope you enjoy it if you read it.

Hi Andy, I am just about to start on chapter 12, I am already hooked on the story. There isn't a lot of sport references to put people off, but there are a few to interest some. I can understand Darryl's desire to see the Man U Vs Arsenal game, it is one of the biggest. I have enjoyed reading how Jason deals with being in the closet while trying to have a relationship with Peter and really enjoyed the last chapter when he finally came out to Darryl.

Wow what a chapter, I have found myself hooked on this story. I can understand all the intricacies that come up between Jason and Peter. How both have what if moments. I don't expect everyone that Jason tells to have the reaction that Darryl did, but it is good that his best friend doesn't think any less of him because of who he loves.

This was a really wicked chapter. It was so romantic and by not describing what happened in the bed you leave a lot to the reader's imagination. This allows everyone to think what they like. You then confirm that Peter hasn't penetrated Jason yet by what happened in the shower. I noticed a few spelling mistakes but I'm sure you've noticed them yourself. Again I repeat I thought this was a really good chapter

I really liked the interplay between Jason and Peter. I thought the fact that both boys have been playing careful for different reasons was interesting. It showed Jason that being an "out" gay male doesn't always mean things go smoothly. I also liked that Peter had taken what Jason had told him about his thinking distance made for more anonymity and used it for their benefit.

Hi Andy Just read Chapter 1 of Second Shot. It is nice to see an American writing about a sport that isn't one of the big three -Baseball, Basketball or American Football. I have enjoyed reading the chapter and I think it is a story I am going to enjoy reading. Thanks for taking the time to write. Anthony