Everyone is marrying lately...
Honestly? I'd be slightly... FURIOUS! If he'd done that to me.
Your writing style is unique and I needed the first three paragraphs or so to get into it, I liked it though. About the twist see second line. Nice, I'm going to read your other stories soon.
A perpetuum mobile story...may I never find the damn thing.
You made me feel sticky wallpaper and even smell it. Eww A wonderful told story, I especially liked that Kitt looked for a way to help Matt and didn't just leave him. Thank you, I loved it.
This may be funny, but I really liked the open end, it inspires to speculate and continue the story in your head, try out different scenarios. Very nice. Thank you!
Your story answers perfectly why hope was mixed with all the evil: to balance it out. Reaction and counter-reaction, force and counter force etc. Very nice!
This reminds me of my seven years old nephew, who asked me if my dog Nox could talk to the dogs in Italy, with them barking Italian and all.
This is one of those songs you should never listen to because then you'll hum it and sing it loud (OMG) and people start to look at you like you skipped therapy again.
I felt jerked around between present and past, it was the perfect way to show Brandon's state of mind. Good job! I'll definitely look at your other stories.
It's Henri Cartier-Bresson. We talked about him in school, that's why I said Red_A and Zombie would be interested in him/his work. Much more to their liking than Mrs. Leibovitz.
Red_A invested so much work, I think it's only fair he comes up with the next one. The last word has podga of course.
Thank you so much carringtonrj! Yes, it's the little things you wouldn't think of at first you miss the most.There will always be at least a little hope in my stories.
So glad you liked it.
This was an interesting take to the theme. As always with your writing, I could picture everything easily, just the right amount of description, so that I could fill in the rest, exactly how I like it.
The incest didn't bother me, I'm with you here, as long as there is no mixing genetic material it's okay for me. I can understand that for cultural reasons, people have problems with this, though.
Thank you wolfie!
Haha, no letter, no. no. You have to use your own imagination and tell ME what was in the letter.Thank you for telling me what you thought and felt, I'm always curious to learn about the feeling of my readers and see if I got it right.
Thank you Percy! Yeah it seems to be like that lately, either very little dialogue or one long conversation in my stories. I have yet to find the balance, but I'm glad you like it as it is.