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Aditus

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  1. Me thinks zombies are jittery little creatures, afraid of cemeteries, afraid of dolls, afraid of looking into the mirror... You need a really big pumpkin this year to drive away the baddies .
  2. Me you would find in Washington. Cool, I could visit my cousin in Vancouver more often. I wonder what NRW would get...
  3. Aditus

    Chapter 2

    I liked how you solved the problem of revealing what had happened in the past.With the confession of the boy's father everything went as well as it could after such a terrible event. Oh and the sentencing on Halloween, lol an apt date indeed. Well done. Thanks!
  4. And no beans for the birthday-boy, not even jelly beans. Happy birthday!
  5. Err... I'd chew on the grass between the meadow muffins... Okay date. Picnic down by the river, it started to rain, we sat in the trunk of my car, the tailgate open, view on the river, and suddenly he jumped out, started to pace while the rain came down in sheets and then he said...well it was a very memorable date. Same Q.
  6. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    I loved the scene in the family room, when every one got poked, it was funny. Murdering a kid never is funny though, and I really want to know more. I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
  7. If I could do this in German I'd be on it in a heart beat. But in English??? nope I can't bring myself to just write without checking words and grammar, so I would never make it.
  8. Happy Birthday Paya!
  9. Hi.
  10. The only song I always liked was 'Yellow Submarine', probably because my sis sang it to me as a lullaby.
  11. Happy Birthday!
  12. Almost lunch time! Or brunch time?
  13. Wow, I'm still shocked about what Agent Davis did. I don't know if it is just me, but I was caught off guard and I think a warning somewhere would have been helpful. I like the dynamic between the protagonists, and the scientific explanation of so-called magical things and occurrences. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing.
  14. Aditus

    Introduction

    To write this introduction was a very good idea. At first the concept of this story is a little overwhelming, but with the introduction we can go back and read certain passages again or seek out further information. I love 'Death Note', its art and the story. I'm very curious now about the first chapter.
  15. 9 PM Friday night and I'm going out now.
  16. As I see it you are already on the way to get out of your situation, you took the first steps, you started to talk. This is a safe place, but it's not the only one. We can show you that you are not alone, how it feels when people understand you. I hope it encourages you enough to take the next step now and you will talk to a person/counselor/friend, who can support and help you. Good luck!
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