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  1. Brokenbind

    Chapter 15

    I wonder what it would take for Connie to choose Will over his Rugby career. And, whether Will would accept that. Stupid HEA dreams... 😆
  2. Brokenbind

    Opening Night

    Yonatan seems a bit lost in the melee, although holding his own when he has to. Todd's behaviour is becoming increasingly erratic.
  3. Together, settled, content, and prospering. Perfect.
  4. Brokenbind

    Epilogue

    Perfect! Did Jacinda actually want any burger with all those condiments? It sounds like a storyboard for a washing tabs commercial ("Cue Jacinda taking a big bite, with goo jetting like a car wash over Damien and MJ. Look how Soapytabs cleans those clothes, even at low temperatures!") Sorry, it's been a long day...
  5. That was lovely. I'm sorry that there are only a few chapters left; this story has the scope to run for a while, but in your judgment we trust, and all that! Something tells me that the Land Agent won't be at all happy with their choice of plots, for reasons yet to be revealed.
  6. Brokenbind

    Summer Delight

    Summer Delight indeed, but raising a few questions, too. For example, is Todd just too busy to be polite, or is more going on there? And does Yonatan prefer Juju to Ossie in some way? I'm sure all will be revealed in the fullness of time!
  7. Brokenbind

    Chapter 7

    The stereotypical Brit as a pompous twerp. Thankfully, we're not all like that (I hope...)
  8. Brokenbind

    No Knocking

    Oops! That'll teach you to knock first...
  9. I had a line manager a lot like Sheriff Willard. Knew me better than I knew myself, and subtly altered the course of my life, often indirectly and in not so many words. I didn't cotton on until much later, and by the time I pulled my head out of my ass, it was too late to be grateful in person. Hopefully Boone and Coy can make it to Larkspur without further incident. And that's a long way on horseback with a headache.
  10. Someone is looking out for Boone. Was it Coy, Blue, or something or someone else? I'm not sure but I'm very happy that Coy is back to save Boone. Hopefully we understand why he is back in the next chapter (he hinted...) What changed his mind?
  11. Brokenbind

    Chapter 8

    Ooh. Power couple..?
  12. It's a little sad when things don't turn out as you hope. I suspect they both feel that way. And in those times, parting like this would probably be forever, although they'd probably be less sentimental about it than me.
  13. Brokenbind

    Chapter 7

    And were they married in the end..? I hope so. Soulmates!
  14. The question is - is Coy ready to face the World on his own? Young, relatively naive, and used to others looking out for him. I bet Boone's 1200 mile trip with a grumpy Blue will be its own trial...
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